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Apprentices of Brightclan
Thu Nov 05, 2015 10:53 pm
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Name:Perilkit, Perilpaw, Peril
Age: 9 moons
Clan: Brightclan; Soon in Artemis's group
rank: Apprentice
Gender: she-cat
Appearance: Perilpaw is a reddish-orange tabby she-cat with long whiskers and tall ears. She has some white markings on her face, her muzzle and down to her chest and underbelly. Perilpaw is a swift and agile she-cat with very, sharp/long claws. Her eyes are a stunning sea-green and icy-blue.
Personality: Perilpaw will do anything for her way and is a very dangerous she-cat. She likes the taste of blood and isn't afraid to crack the warrior code by ending a foe. She can be very frightening at times and is destructive. Perilpaw usually never cares much about her clanmates either and is very good at fighting.
History: Perilpaw was born to Arrow and Honorheart in Waterclan. Soon, her mother left the clan after the secret was reveiled. She couldn't stay with her kits and said it was to dangerous to bring them out with Arrow to live. So she gave her four kits, Perilpaw, Turtlepaw, Onyxpaw and Blazepaw to Brightclan, where Palewhisker lived. Soon Palewhisker died when the kits became apprentices, she was an old warrior and was killed by a dog pack in the forest. Perilpaw's only sister died with Palewhisker.
Family:
Deceased: Palewhisker (Step-mother) and Blazepaw (sister)
Alive: Honor (mother), Arrow (father), Onyxpaw (brother) and Turtlepaw (brother)
Favourite Hobby: Fighting xD
Skills:
Fighting10/10
Hunting6/10
Stamina7/10
Climbing4/10
Swimming1/10
HerbSkills1/10
MemorySkills5/10
Running5.5/10
Scent5/10
Hearing5/10
Mate: --
Crush: Cobra (way later on in the rp)
Kits: --
Extra: *Blazepaw never died in the dog pack, she murdered Palewhisker and later Perilpaw finds her and figures it out, then kills Blazepaw after she attempts to trap Perilpaw in some tunnels. Perilpaw will join Artemis's group later on as a loner.
Roleplay Example (Just for fun!) ::
Perilpaw padded through the forest, a fresh scent of sparrow lingered in the air. Dawn crept around the corner, but she couldn't get any rest. The nightmare of Palewhisker and Blazepaw torn up by dog packs kept her awake from sleeping. A sounds came from the under-brush, Perilpaw got in her hunting position and was ready to pounce. A mouse was nibbling on a peice of some type of plant. Gotcha' She thought as she crept forward. Suddenly, a cracking noise broke the silence of the forest and the mouse scrabbled away in alert. She pounced, aiming for the mouse, but it was too quick and far. "That was a nice try." A voice came from behind. Startled, Perilpaw turned around quickly, eyeing the rustling bush. A large, red tabby, covered with scars stepped out. Perilpaw's eyes widened. This.. this can't be.. no.. Perilpaw stood there, staring at the she-cat. "Don't you remember me?" The cat sneered, stepping forward. "B-Blazepaw? But... you.. died in the..." Perilpaw stumbled with around with her words. Her sister's gaze pierced her. Her stomach suddenly felt sick and she froze. How could I not know. It was her.. it was her all along. After all those grieving times, she turns up.. to.. tell me? Perilpaw's heart seemed to lurch, she felt like she was going to faint. Blazepaw grinned a frightful smile. "I see you've already figured it out. Palewhisker never told us. She kept it hidden. We were never her kits. It was a lie. Out whole life was a lie. " Blazepaw meowed. She's so big, so musculer... her claws are giant.. Perilpaw thought with fear, for once, Perilpaw was actually afraid. She stepped back, a shiver along her spine. "You... you KILLED her?!" She screecged, unsheathing her claws. Blazepaw, showing no fear, not matter how hard Perilpaw searched her face, there was no fear, stepped even closer. "Palewhisker wasn't our mother." She meowed, flat and cold. "Join me, sister. We can go, escape this miserable lie. We can find our real mother. And.. then.." Blazepaw stopped, evil in her eyes, filled with hatred and pain. Perilpaw didn't even have to ask what Blazepaw was going to do. She shook her head. Perilpaw pounced on Blazepaw with a roar, unsheathed claws, uknowing what would happen next. ~To be continued in the rp.. heehe~
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(man that was longer then I thought. I was bored so. :I)
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*Is it okay if I rp Blazepaw in that one scene and kill her off without auditioning her? It won't make sense to audition her since she'll be killed off once Perilpaw finds her.
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Name:Onyxkit, Onyxpaw, Onyx
Age: 9 moons
Gender: tom
Clan: Brightclan, later Artemis's group
Rank: apprentice
Appearance: Onyxpaw is a white tom with orange-onyx colored ears, stripes on tail, on his nose and on on his paws. He has very long whiskers and tall ears. His belly and chest fur is fluffier then the top fur, which is short-furred. His fur is very soft and he has a pink nose. Onyxpaw also has a few orange-onyx light stripes on his face. His eyes are a soft baby blue color.
Personality: Onyxpaw is a grumpy, mature, serious, protective and loyal tom. He is usually grumpy around camp and can be snappy at times, although at the same times, he's more mature and wouldn't play tricks or anything, being serious. Onyxpaw, besides his grumpiness and hostile personality is a very protective and loyal cat to his littermates and family.
History: Onyxpaw's mother was actually a Waterclan cat. She was called Honorheart, but he never knew for she had a mate who was a loner, named Arrow, his father. He had two sisters and a brother, Turtlepaw, Blazepaw and Perilpaw. His mother, ashamed and guilty by having kits with a loner was banished away, she ran away with Arrow and joined Artemis's group. Onyxpaw was given to a friend of Honor in Birghtclan. Her name was Palewhisker, a senior warrior. She took care of them as a mother, they never knew the truth. Palewhisker had died in a so called "dog fight" along with Blazepaw who "tried to help her" . The three apprentices grieved for there mother and sister afterwards.
Favourite hobby: Hunting
Family
Mother: Honor (Honorheart)
Father: Arrow
sister: Perilpaw
Sister: Blazepaw (actually still alive)
Brother: Turtlepaw
Step-mother:Palewhisker
Skills:
Fighting7/10> He's a giant tom, he can be clumsy at times when fighting though.
Hunting9/10> He enjoys hunting so does very often which sharpens his skills.
Swimming2/10> Maybe he'll walk in very shallow water in the lake, but never shall he swim.
Climbing4/10> Average at climbing.
Running6/10> He can run pretty fast, but nothing special about it.
HerbSkills1/10> Boooooringgg (Says Onyxpaw xDD)
MemorySkills3/10> Eh, he can forget some things at times, but remembers battling and hunting for he loves and hunting and Perilpaw always forces him to train with her.
Scent5/10> common scent.
Hearing5/10> common hearing.
Agility2/10> Not really a great thing to do when your giant and clumsy at balancing.
Mate: --
Crush: None yet
Kits: --
Extra: Joins Artemis's group later with Perilpaw; Blazepaw is still alive, more info on Perilpaw's audition; His future mate/crush is Speckledswoop.
Onyxpaw/Onyx is up for adoption
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Name:turtlekit, Turtlepaw, Turtlestone
Age: 9 moons
Clan: Brightclan, later in Waterclan
Gender: tom
Rank: apprentice
Appearance: Turtlepaw is a brown tabby tom with a white chest, muzzle and paws. Turtlepaw has medium length whiskers, short fur, tall -ish ears and a pretty short tail. His eyes are a turtle green, which is where he got his name.
Personality: Turtlepaw is usually a worried, kind, loyal and caring tom. He can always be worried and anxious about things around him and can take a while to get used to anything new. He's very kind and caring towards others he knows and is very loyal to the warrior code.
History: Turtlepaw was born to Honorheart, a queen of Waterclan and Arrow, a loner. He had two sisters, Perilpaw and Blazepaw and one brother, Onyxpaw. Turtlepaw never knew of his parents for his mother, guilty and ashamed of having kits with a loner in secret, left to join the loner and now her name is Honor. He and his littermates were given to Honor's old friend in Birghtclan, named Palewhisker. She was a senior warrior who treated them as a mother, but never told them the truth. She had died in a "dog pack" which Blazepaw "died trying to save her". With his sister and step-mother gone, they mourned over them. Turtlepaw still trains his best to show his sister and brother that he's tough and that he can actually do something good for once.
Favourite Hobby: Swimming and Climbing
Family:
Mother: Honor(heart)
Father: Arrow
Sister: Perilpaw
Sister: Blazepaw
Step-mother:Palewhisker
Brother: Onyxpaw
Skills:
Fighting6/10> Turtlepaw doesn't enjoy fighting, he hates blood and the images of dying cats.
Hunting5/10> Average at hunting.
Swimming8/10> Turtlepaw is actually surprisingly good at swimming and enjoys it since his mother was a Waterclan cat.
Climbing9/10> Turtlepaw is very good at climbing, he likes to go up in trees and hang out there when he needs some alone time.
Agility7/10> Turtlepaw can be good at it when climbing, but not so good at balancing on thin branches or fences because of his shorter tail.
Stamina5/10> Average stamina.
Running3/10> He can run okay, but not very fast, just a common speed at running.
Scent4/10> Normal scent.
Hearing4/10> Normal Hearing.
HerbSkills1/10> Doesn't know anything about herbs.
MemorySkills2/10> Eh, not so good at remembering battle moves.
Mate: --
Crush: *Open*
Kits: --
Extra: Leaves to Waterclan later; Blazepaw is still alive, more info on Perilpaw's audition
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Name:Blazekit, Blazepaw
Age: 9 moons
Gender: she-cat
Clan: Born in Waterclan, Raised in Brightclan, lives as rogue.
Rank: used to be apprentice.
Appearance: Blazepaw is a unusual large orange tabby she-cat. She has many battle scars on her and a left ear torn off. Her claws are remarkably long and her paws are big. She's very muscular and has white paws. Her eyes are a blazing orange.
Personality: Blazepaw is a very menacing, but clever cat. She can be very tricky at times and battle-thirsty. Blazepaw is also usually a sly evil cat and can be very hostile. She also is rather snappy mostly, but can stay calm and patient at things she needs to do for her own sake.
(So I just write the appearance and personality.. right?)
Name:
Age: 9 moons
Clan: Brightclan; Soon in Artemis's group
rank: Apprentice
Gender: she-cat
Appearance: Perilpaw is a reddish-orange tabby she-cat with long whiskers and tall ears. She has some white markings on her face, her muzzle and down to her chest and underbelly. Perilpaw is a swift and agile she-cat with very, sharp/long claws. Her eyes are a stunning sea-green and icy-blue.
Personality: Perilpaw will do anything for her way and is a very dangerous she-cat. She likes the taste of blood and isn't afraid to crack the warrior code by ending a foe. She can be very frightening at times and is destructive. Perilpaw usually never cares much about her clanmates either and is very good at fighting.
History: Perilpaw was born to Arrow and Honorheart in Waterclan. Soon, her mother left the clan after the secret was reveiled. She couldn't stay with her kits and said it was to dangerous to bring them out with Arrow to live. So she gave her four kits, Perilpaw, Turtlepaw, Onyxpaw and Blazepaw to Brightclan, where Palewhisker lived. Soon Palewhisker died when the kits became apprentices, she was an old warrior and was killed by a dog pack in the forest. Perilpaw's only sister died with Palewhisker.
Family:
Deceased: Palewhisker (Step-mother) and Blazepaw (sister)
Alive: Honor (mother), Arrow (father), Onyxpaw (brother) and Turtlepaw (brother)
Favourite Hobby: Fighting xD
Skills:
Fighting10/10
Hunting6/10
Stamina7/10
Climbing4/10
Swimming1/10
HerbSkills1/10
MemorySkills5/10
Running5.5/10
Scent5/10
Hearing5/10
Mate: --
Crush: Cobra (way later on in the rp)
Kits: --
Extra: *Blazepaw never died in the dog pack, she murdered Palewhisker and later Perilpaw finds her and figures it out, then kills Blazepaw after she attempts to trap Perilpaw in some tunnels. Perilpaw will join Artemis's group later on as a loner.
Roleplay Example (Just for fun!) ::
Perilpaw padded through the forest, a fresh scent of sparrow lingered in the air. Dawn crept around the corner, but she couldn't get any rest. The nightmare of Palewhisker and Blazepaw torn up by dog packs kept her awake from sleeping. A sounds came from the under-brush, Perilpaw got in her hunting position and was ready to pounce. A mouse was nibbling on a peice of some type of plant. Gotcha' She thought as she crept forward. Suddenly, a cracking noise broke the silence of the forest and the mouse scrabbled away in alert. She pounced, aiming for the mouse, but it was too quick and far. "That was a nice try." A voice came from behind. Startled, Perilpaw turned around quickly, eyeing the rustling bush. A large, red tabby, covered with scars stepped out. Perilpaw's eyes widened. This.. this can't be.. no.. Perilpaw stood there, staring at the she-cat. "Don't you remember me?" The cat sneered, stepping forward. "B-Blazepaw? But... you.. died in the..." Perilpaw stumbled with around with her words. Her sister's gaze pierced her. Her stomach suddenly felt sick and she froze. How could I not know. It was her.. it was her all along. After all those grieving times, she turns up.. to.. tell me? Perilpaw's heart seemed to lurch, she felt like she was going to faint. Blazepaw grinned a frightful smile. "I see you've already figured it out. Palewhisker never told us. She kept it hidden. We were never her kits. It was a lie. Out whole life was a lie. " Blazepaw meowed. She's so big, so musculer... her claws are giant.. Perilpaw thought with fear, for once, Perilpaw was actually afraid. She stepped back, a shiver along her spine. "You... you KILLED her?!" She screecged, unsheathing her claws. Blazepaw, showing no fear, not matter how hard Perilpaw searched her face, there was no fear, stepped even closer. "Palewhisker wasn't our mother." She meowed, flat and cold. "Join me, sister. We can go, escape this miserable lie. We can find our real mother. And.. then.." Blazepaw stopped, evil in her eyes, filled with hatred and pain. Perilpaw didn't even have to ask what Blazepaw was going to do. She shook her head. Perilpaw pounced on Blazepaw with a roar, unsheathed claws, uknowing what would happen next. ~To be continued in the rp.. heehe~
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(man that was longer then I thought. I was bored so. :I)
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*Is it okay if I rp Blazepaw in that one scene and kill her off without auditioning her? It won't make sense to audition her since she'll be killed off once Perilpaw finds her.
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Name:
Age: 9 moons
Gender: tom
Clan: Brightclan, later Artemis's group
Rank: apprentice
Appearance: Onyxpaw is a white tom with orange-onyx colored ears, stripes on tail, on his nose and on on his paws. He has very long whiskers and tall ears. His belly and chest fur is fluffier then the top fur, which is short-furred. His fur is very soft and he has a pink nose. Onyxpaw also has a few orange-onyx light stripes on his face. His eyes are a soft baby blue color.
Personality: Onyxpaw is a grumpy, mature, serious, protective and loyal tom. He is usually grumpy around camp and can be snappy at times, although at the same times, he's more mature and wouldn't play tricks or anything, being serious. Onyxpaw, besides his grumpiness and hostile personality is a very protective and loyal cat to his littermates and family.
History: Onyxpaw's mother was actually a Waterclan cat. She was called Honorheart, but he never knew for she had a mate who was a loner, named Arrow, his father. He had two sisters and a brother, Turtlepaw, Blazepaw and Perilpaw. His mother, ashamed and guilty by having kits with a loner was banished away, she ran away with Arrow and joined Artemis's group. Onyxpaw was given to a friend of Honor in Birghtclan. Her name was Palewhisker, a senior warrior. She took care of them as a mother, they never knew the truth. Palewhisker had died in a so called "dog fight" along with Blazepaw who "tried to help her" . The three apprentices grieved for there mother and sister afterwards.
Favourite hobby: Hunting
Family
Mother: Honor (Honorheart)
Father: Arrow
sister: Perilpaw
Sister: Blazepaw (actually still alive)
Brother: Turtlepaw
Step-mother:
Skills:
Fighting7/10> He's a giant tom, he can be clumsy at times when fighting though.
Hunting9/10> He enjoys hunting so does very often which sharpens his skills.
Swimming2/10> Maybe he'll walk in very shallow water in the lake, but never shall he swim.
Climbing4/10> Average at climbing.
Running6/10> He can run pretty fast, but nothing special about it.
HerbSkills1/10> Boooooringgg (Says Onyxpaw xDD)
MemorySkills3/10> Eh, he can forget some things at times, but remembers battling and hunting for he loves and hunting and Perilpaw always forces him to train with her.
Scent5/10> common scent.
Hearing5/10> common hearing.
Agility2/10> Not really a great thing to do when your giant and clumsy at balancing.
Mate: --
Crush: None yet
Kits: --
Extra: Joins Artemis's group later with Perilpaw; Blazepaw is still alive, more info on Perilpaw's audition; His future mate/crush is Speckledswoop.
Onyxpaw/Onyx is up for adoption
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Name:
Age: 9 moons
Clan: Brightclan, later in Waterclan
Gender: tom
Rank: apprentice
Appearance: Turtlepaw is a brown tabby tom with a white chest, muzzle and paws. Turtlepaw has medium length whiskers, short fur, tall -ish ears and a pretty short tail. His eyes are a turtle green, which is where he got his name.
Personality: Turtlepaw is usually a worried, kind, loyal and caring tom. He can always be worried and anxious about things around him and can take a while to get used to anything new. He's very kind and caring towards others he knows and is very loyal to the warrior code.
History: Turtlepaw was born to Honorheart, a queen of Waterclan and Arrow, a loner. He had two sisters, Perilpaw and Blazepaw and one brother, Onyxpaw. Turtlepaw never knew of his parents for his mother, guilty and ashamed of having kits with a loner in secret, left to join the loner and now her name is Honor. He and his littermates were given to Honor's old friend in Birghtclan, named Palewhisker. She was a senior warrior who treated them as a mother, but never told them the truth. She had died in a "dog pack" which Blazepaw "died trying to save her". With his sister and step-mother gone, they mourned over them. Turtlepaw still trains his best to show his sister and brother that he's tough and that he can actually do something good for once.
Favourite Hobby: Swimming and Climbing
Family:
Mother: Honor(heart)
Father: Arrow
Sister: Perilpaw
Sister: Blazepaw
Step-mother:
Brother: Onyxpaw
Skills:
Fighting6/10> Turtlepaw doesn't enjoy fighting, he hates blood and the images of dying cats.
Hunting5/10> Average at hunting.
Swimming8/10> Turtlepaw is actually surprisingly good at swimming and enjoys it since his mother was a Waterclan cat.
Climbing9/10> Turtlepaw is very good at climbing, he likes to go up in trees and hang out there when he needs some alone time.
Agility7/10> Turtlepaw can be good at it when climbing, but not so good at balancing on thin branches or fences because of his shorter tail.
Stamina5/10> Average stamina.
Running3/10> He can run okay, but not very fast, just a common speed at running.
Scent4/10> Normal scent.
Hearing4/10> Normal Hearing.
HerbSkills1/10> Doesn't know anything about herbs.
MemorySkills2/10> Eh, not so good at remembering battle moves.
Mate: --
Crush: *Open*
Kits: --
Extra: Leaves to Waterclan later; Blazepaw is still alive, more info on Perilpaw's audition
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Name:
Age: 9 moons
Gender: she-cat
Clan: Born in Waterclan, Raised in Brightclan, lives as rogue.
Rank: used to be apprentice.
Appearance: Blazepaw is a unusual large orange tabby she-cat. She has many battle scars on her and a left ear torn off. Her claws are remarkably long and her paws are big. She's very muscular and has white paws. Her eyes are a blazing orange.
Personality: Blazepaw is a very menacing, but clever cat. She can be very tricky at times and battle-thirsty. Blazepaw is also usually a sly evil cat and can be very hostile. She also is rather snappy mostly, but can stay calm and patient at things she needs to do for her own sake.
(So I just write the appearance and personality.. right?)
WillowstormHead Admin/Creator
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Re: Apprentices of Brightclan
Sat Nov 21, 2015 4:54 pm
Bump, will be deleted within 3 days if not completed.
LeopardspotsForum Storyteller
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Re: Apprentices of Brightclan
Sun Nov 22, 2015 7:56 am
But you would have to make an audition for Blazepaw, you could just attach it to this one and make it smaller though
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Re: Apprentices of Brightclan
Sun Nov 22, 2015 9:56 pm
Blazepaw's will just be her appearance and a few personality traits, nothing too much if you're just gonna kill her
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Re: Apprentices of Brightclan
Mon Nov 23, 2015 11:23 pm
I did a appearance and personality of Blazepaw. Do I need to add anything else for her? 
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Re: Apprentices of Brightclan
Tue Nov 24, 2015 8:09 am
Yep, perfect.
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