Flowerbreeze of Fireclan

She needs skills like swimming, running, memory, stamina, hunting, and fighting. Even if her history is unknown, we'd still like to have more in that section. She also needs more personality.

What about this. (I cant seem to be able to edit her)

Flowerbreeze    20 moons   Queen    Fireclan

Sandy coloured she cat with white paws. A white heart shaped marking on forehead and a white tip to her tail. Leaf green eyes. Motherly, kind, Generous, will do anything for a kit, loving. Mate is Cloudheart. Will do anything for clan, Wants more kits and one day, Cederkit as her Apprentice. Doesn't like other clans after what they did to her mother. Cant wait to have another litter of kits.


Skills: Hear:6/10, Smell:7/10, Taste:9/10, Touch:10/10, Sight:10/10, Crouch:6/10, Speed:7/10, Jump:5/10, Silence:10/10
Hates water but loves climbing. Great memory. Stamina is ok.

Family: Met Cloudheart at a twoleg place and had his kit, Cederkit. She invited him to the clan. She met Littlepaw and her brother, Snowpaw after their brothers and mother died. She recently adopted them. Rest of past, unkown

Past known:
Was born to Mosssoul and Pineheart of Fireclan. Had 1 sibling, name unknown. After birth, father died of Greencough. When she reached 6 moons, Mther died of attack. She left the clan and met Cloudheart. They became mates and her mate and her made Redstar take them in.

That's great, but cats don't usually die of whitecough, especially a warrior, so maybe change that to greencough. I can copy and paste that into your original post for you if you'd like.

Thanks! You've been a great help! I forgot that it was greencough!  For some reason, it won't let me edit this, while I can edit all my other cats.

Okay, I copied and pasted your new one into the orginal topic.

Actually I have a cat in fireclan with "Sun". Please change the name.

Sunbreeze will never become a leader. Just saying.

No, the prefix -sun has already been taken, so you need to change her name to something else.

Ok! How about Lilybreeze?

There is also a Lily prefix in FireClan.

Hmmm. Willowbreeze? Or Oakbreeze? Flower Breeze?

I think any of those could work, though I advise against "Willowbreeze" since she was an actual character in warriors.

Ok. I didn't know about Willowreeze. Her new names Flowerbreeze