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The intense Green-leaf sun bears down on the Clans in this, their darkest hour.
An earthquake has shaken the forest, destroying the territories as the Clans know it and killing dozens of cats. Forced to band together, the cats journey in search of a new home.

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Bluejay
Deadpool's group
she-cat//30 moons

|Personality|
Bluejay is a mischevious, yet delicate she-cat. She's very handy with tricking others and can be quite the nuisance when around. She jokes a lot, and doesn't know when to stop. Although Bluejay is annoying sometimes, she can be very helpful and friendly.

|Description|
A tan leopard spotted she-cat with wild blue eyes and dark brown markings.

|Appearance|
Bluejay has wild blue eyes that usually are searching around for ideas. Her long fur and long tail make up for her horrible hiding, helping her blend in easily with the tall grasses to catch mice. She has dark brown markings on her face like a tabbies and dark brown legs, with stripes along, the same with her tail. Bluejay's pelt is spotted, like a leopard's, but has a few tabby markings. Her body is built in a skinny, lean way, although her fur hides her visible ribs.

|Skills|
-Fighting::6/10
-Hunting::7/10
-Swimming::3/10
-Climbing::9/10
-Running::5/10
-Memory::5/10
-Herbs::1/10
-Stamina8/10

|Family|
Mother::Leopard
Father:: Uknown
Sibling(s)::
Cardinal, Vixen

|History|
Kithood
Bluejay hadn't remembered anything much about her kithood, especially of her father. She had one littermate, who was Cardinal. Bluejay also had one sister, a sibling in a earlier litter, but from the same parents. Her name was Vixen. Their mother, Leopard cared for them dearly after their father had died, or maybe ran off, it was never made clear. Vixen usually would go off into the woods, some times, she'd stay for as long as a week, sometimes only part the day. Leopard tried asking her where she was always off to, but it was always the same, exploring or hunting. Nobody believed her, but nobody said a word. Since Vixen wasn't home much, Bluejay and Cardinal were to learn to hunt by themselves. Their mother was very cunning and intelligent (this is where bluejay gets her trickiness from) and often taught them ways to survive or hunt, in case she was too one day disappear, or die for any sort of reason. One day, Vixen ceased to return, nobody heard of her for a long time or seen her. Cardinal and Bluejay, though, were always playing "try-to-find-Vixen" and would run off into the woods a lot.
Apprenticehood
As Cardinal and bluejay grew older, so did Leopard. Their mother died one day from greencough, too old and ill to make it because it was winter, or, leaf-bare in cat words. Blue jay and Cardinal stayed at their old home for a while, but decided to move on. They first searched for Vixen, but still no sign. Pretty, much, they survived in the woods because the twolegplace was known as dangerous from their mother.
Adulthood
Finally, when they grew to their final heights, they ran into Deadpool. Deadpool explained about the story of him having a group of rogues and loners. Both littermates agreed to join after he asked them to. A few weeks later, they found Vixen. She happened to be in another group of rogues (willow's future group) and decided to stay instead. She seemed hostile, the two didn't visit again for a while. Now, they continue on with Deadpool, searching for new members to build up the group and be strong once again.


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Cardinal 
Deadpool's group
30 Moons//Tom
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|Personality|
A stubborn, yet determined tom, Cardinal is very confusing with his personality. He'll tend to change moods a lot, first he'll be friendly and respectful, the next, stubborn and daring. He usually is a big help though, with his strong muscles and intelligent battle tactics.

|Description|
A light tan brown tabby tom with a white underbelly and blazing, orange eyes.

|Appearance|
Cardinal is a lighter tan brown tabby tom with blazing, orange eyes. He has a white underbelly which goes up to his chest. His muzzle and tail tip are as well, white. He's rather large and has fluffy long fur. Cardinal's body is very strongly built, his paws are pretty big compared to some cats. Usually, he's feared of for being so big and cats call him a giant.

|Skills|
-Fighting::9/10
-Hunting::6/10
-Swimming::2/10
-Climbing::6/10
-Running::7/10
-Memory::4/10
-Herbs::1/10
-Stamina5/10

|Family|
Mother::Leopard
Father:: Uknown
Sibling(s)::
Bluejay, Vixen

|History|
Same as Bluejay's history above.

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Squirrel
Minkura's group
36 Moons//She-cat
Appearance
|Personality|
Squirrel is a very care-free and go-with-the-flow she-cat. She's very calm at most situations, but that doesn't mean she won't keep it peaceful. Squirrel is pretty violent, and some cats will call her nuts like a squirrel for being the crazy and sly, but beautiful she-cat she is.

|Description|
A brick-red pelted she-cat with mesmerizing green eyes.

|Appearance|
Squirrel is a long and lean she-cat with brick-red fur and small, dainty paws. She has a long tail and her pelt is almost always clean and shining. Her eyes are green and seem to stare into your mind, finding all your hidden thoughts. She's known as beautiful with her perfect looks.

|Skills|

-Fighting::8/10
-Hunting::7/10
-Swimming::3/10
-Climbing::5/10
-Running::6/10
-Memory::3/10
-Herbs::0/10
-Stamina5/10

|Family|

Mother::Fern
Father:: Russet
Sibling(s)::
Fox,Berry and Thistle

|History|
Kithood
Squirrel grew up, not in a rogue group, but in a loner group. Well, it wasn't really lone-like anymore because of the new born family. Her mother was Fern, a most beautiful she-cat with the prettiest green eyes and shining calico pelt. Her father was russet, a red russet furred tom with a sly way of doing things and a long tail. Squirrel had one sister, who was very weak, named Fox. She had two brothers name Berry and Thistle. Squirrel often played with Thistle, always wrestling and doing tough games. Berry would always be the jumpy one, hiding away and talking to Fox. Eventually, one day, Fox died from being too small and weak to live on. Berry had grown pretty depressed and usually lurked in the shadows, not talking to anyone and only coming out to eat.
Apprenticeship
Soon, enough, once the three were older, Berry decided to leave first out of the litter pretty early. They were each told to go find a mate, but when older, except for Squirrel who was welcome to stay since she was a she-cat. A few days later, they discovered Berry's dead body down a deep hole, rotting away. He either must have just left not for a new life, but to leave them and didn't make it. Squirrel and Thistle were trained well by  their father.
Adulthood
Soon enough, Thistle left as well, leaving Squirrel to live with her parents then. Squirrel often went out to adventure and explore new places. One day, she found Min's group and was recruited. She happily joined and sometimes visits her parents.


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Delta
Minkura's/Shard's group
She-cat//10 Moons

A mischievous and bouncy she-cat, Delta is very energetic at times. Although she might be a nuisance at times, she's very determined and eager of many things. She especially looks up to Minkura and shard, wanting to be as good at fighting like them one day. She can be clingy and bug you around a lot, but she's probably one of the quickest she-cat in the group with her quick reflexes and skinny, swift body.

A silver she-cat with a white mask, chest, feet and underbelly. Her tail tip is dark gray and her body is built in a rather skinny , but swift way. She has short, but well-groomed soft fur. Her eyes are a bright, icy blue color and she has tall, large ears. Delta's tail is rather short, but a medium size and tends to curl up on it's own a lot.

Skills~ Fighting6/10-Hunting7/10-Swimming5/10-Climbing2/10-Running9/10-Stamina4/10-Memory1/10-Herbs0/10

Mother:Blizzard-Open- Loner with Snowstorm
Father:Snowstorm-Open- Loner with Blizzard
Older Sister:Winter-Open- Loner with Comet
Brother-In-Law(Ik they don't have that stuff but whatever):Comet (mates with Winter)-Open- Loner with Winter
Sister: Sprinkles- Open- Kittypet
Brother: Jake- Open- Kittypet
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Crush: None, open
Mate: N/A
Kits: N/A

Delta grew up with her mother and father who were kittypets. She was born into a litter of three, including herself. She had one sister names Sprinkles and one brother named Jake. Both were named after the owners. She had a normal life up until she became seven moons old, old enough to explore alone. She wasn't interested in getting adopted like her litter mates and herself were destined to, so she ran away on the adoption day, interested in the forest living instead. She found Shard's group and was recruited in only after they were attacked and short of members. She accepted the offer and now is a part of the rogues. Delta still visits Sprinkles and Jake at their new kittypet homes, but doesn't see her parents much. She had one older sister named Winter who lives with Comet, her mate. Delta does visit them from time to time like her parents as well, who were dumped from their kittypet homes.


Acornfur
Ivy's group
She-cat//23 Moons

A brown she-cat with tabby marks on her face, paws and tail. She has acorn brown eyes and white toes/tail tip/chin. Acornfur is strongly built and large for her age. She has long legs, making her quite tall.

Acornfur can get awkward with meeting cats for the first time, but otherwise she's very friendly and won't mind larger crowds once you get to know her. Some days she's antisocial and will stay away from any other cats, some days she's outgoing and will hunt or talk with others.

Fighting9/10-Hunting6/10-Climbing8/10-Swimming7/10-Stamina4/10-Memory4/10-Running5/10-Herbs0/10

Mother: Lilacpetal
Father: Gustpool
Sisters: Eaglefeather, Minnowpaw and Sandykit
Brothers: Redwind and Weaselpaw
All family is alive & open

Former Mate: Hail
Current Mate: N/A
Crush: Open
Kits: N/A

Acornfur was born to a litter of three, with her brother and sister, Eaglefeather and Redwind. They grew up in a normal kithood, once apprentices they trained well. Acornfur wasn't doing so good and would always get no sleep. This was because she snuck out at night to meet her best friend, well crush in other words, who was a rogue in Ivy's group. They both soon enough admitted their feelings towards each other and once Acornfur was made warrior, she decided to leave to be with Hail, the rogue. She kept her name, for the sake of remembrance of the clans and her family. When she left the one night, Hail helped her leave some blood of a rabbit with her scent around it, luring a fox over. Surprisingly, the trick worked and the clan cats dawn patrol figured the fox had killed Acornfur, chasing it off and bringing the sad news back to camp. Acornfur lived in Ivy's group, she became mates with Hail, but unfortunately her died one day from greencough. Acornfur was devastated, not knowing what to do if she should leave to the clans or stay. She stayed in the group, knowing if she left for the clans, she'd be kicked out from lying and leaving to join a rogue. She doesn't ever want a mate again, nor ever finds interest in loving any other tom after Hail's death.



Deadpool's group
She-cat//30 moons

A light brown she-cat with white under tones and fur. She has a leopard spotted design on her upper pelt. She has unusually long and sharp claws. She has a bit of a tabby design on her face and half of legs. Her ears are tall and large and she has a darker brown tail, which fades into a black tip. Her eyes are a beautiful green on the right eye and a icy blue on the left eye. (ignore the picture eyes)

Nebula is a lovely, yet scary she-cat. She can be pretty violent in battles and such and is sensitive, so she will get emotional quickly some times. She has a cool and calm personality, but at the same time is known as an psycho-path, murdering without any trace of evidence. Nebula has come this way ever since her former mate and kits were murdered by unknown cats.

Mother: Tessa
Father: ???
Littermates: Connie, Onion and Bells
~
Mate: N/A
Former Mate: Cliff(Deceased)
Future Mate: Deadpool(Alive: Owned by @/Quake)
Crush: N/A
Former Crush: Cliff(Deceased)
Future Crush: Deadpool(Alive: Owned by @/Quake)
Kits: N/A
Former Kits: Hawk(deceased), Ginger(deceased), Glimmer(alive: Owned by me), Shine(alive: Owned by me)
Future Kits: maybe

Fighting9/10::Hunting6/10::Running5/10::Climbing4/10::Stamina8/10::Herbs0/10::Memory2/10::Swimming3 1/2/10

Nebula, like most other rogue kits, was kicked out of her family at the eldest age to know how to hunt. She grew up roaming around in the forests a lot, sometimes getting into trouble with twolegs and clan cats. Nebula found a tom named Cliff at a young age, whom she fell in love with. The two moved from place to place, exploring new areas. They even had four young kits. One day, Nebula left her kits with Cliff so she could hunt for a while, but right when she was a while gone, not even hunting yet, a group of cats murdered Cliff and her kits. Atleast, that's what Nebula assumes, but two of her kits were taken by the group. (the kits later escaped when older) She was already a antisocial and snappy she-cat, but once her new family was murdered by a gang of unknown cats, she's always kind of gone a bit murderous herself. She lives by the river forest and will join Deadpool's group in the future.



Mountain
Ivy's group
tom//30 moons
Appearance

A golden Bengal cat with dark patches, tabby markings on his head and legs. His tail is darker and seems to fade to a black tip. His body is built well and muscular, perfect for battling. Mountain's claws are surprisingly sharp and his paws are pretty large.He has dull mountain blue, green eyes and a slash across his nose. All in all, Mountain is a big tom and is feared by a lot of Ivy's group.

Mountain, like his looks and name, is a violent tom. He's always been this way, it's pretty unknown to most cats, but it comes from his harsh childhood and bad influences. Mountain isn't the cat that you'd go up to, sit down and have a friendly chat with. He takes a lot of things as aggressive and won't hesitate to pounce and grab the throat. He's always been kind of evil, coming from a long line of horrible rogues.

Mother: Ivy(Alive::Open)
Father: Slash(Alive::Open)
Litter-mates: Thistle(Alive::Open) and Bear(Deceased::Closed)
Mate: N/A
Crush: N/A
Kits: N/A

Fighting9&1'2/10::Hunting5/10::Climbing4/10::Swimming5/10::Running6/10::Stamina7/10::Herbs0/10::Memory3/10

Mountain grew up in a tough life. He had bad influences all around him, making him the murderous and evil cat he is now. He had two rogue parents, of course, who had a soft spot for their kits. Mountain has two littermates, brothers, named Thistle and Bear. Once only five moons, barely, their father began mentoring them. He used to be a warrior in Fireclan, but was exiled soon enough from the clan from murdering, so he knew plenty good battle moves. Mountain and Thistle were great at it, but Bear struggled.Slash murdered cats in front of his son's, even fighting a few just for fun, which Mountain and Thistle picked up after. One day, Bear died, the family didn't know how or why, but they found her laying beside a few death berries she had eaten. Mountain and Thistle found out who killed Bear with the berries, a cat from Duskclan whom used to be mates with Mountain's father, Slash when he was part of the clan. Mountain and Thistle came to take revenge on the cat's family, killing him and another apprentice with him. There was one cat left there, named Robinpaw (Robinblaze) who soon enough killed Thistle and ran off. Mountain returned to the forest, but leaving his family and roaming the woods, whoever challenging him he would win against and one day bumping into Ivy, who recruited him into the group.




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Sorry for posting here but I already have a rouge named Acorn
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Tue Oct 11, 2016 7:19 am
This has been locked for quite a while. Please finish @Skybreeze
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Fri Oct 14, 2016 3:30 am
Finished Bluejay, will be finishing the rest later.
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Finished Squirrel and Cardinal.
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Aquatail626 wrote:Sorry for posting here but I already have a rouge named Acorn
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Aquatail626 wrote:Sorry for posting here but I already have a rouge named Acorn
 
I don't think it really matters, as long as they don't interact with each other.
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Actually it does matter sorry Smile
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Mon Oct 17, 2016 7:26 pm
So far, audition accepted

Did you say Nebula was going to be Dead's mate? And also rp Dead's group at Eastern or southern twolegplace (can't remember)
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Mon Oct 31, 2016 11:42 pm
Finished Delta
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Wed Nov 02, 2016 10:50 pm
Acornfur is finished.
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Thu Nov 03, 2016 6:28 am
Just to say, I think Ivy and Sunset merged so it's both of their group now haha. audition accepted
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Tue Nov 08, 2016 12:25 am
Finished Nebula.
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Tue Nov 08, 2016 2:08 am
Nebula looks pretty good, hut I think you can make the history more personal.  You said, "like any other rogue kit...", which isn't really the wrong thing to say, but not every cat is going to have the same history.

Why don't you explain why she got in so much trouble, or why her personality is the way it is?
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Davewing wrote:Nebula looks pretty good, hut I think you can make the history more personal.  You said, "like any other rogue kit...", which isn't really the wrong thing to say, but not every cat is going to have the same history.

Why don't you explain why she got in so much trouble, or why her personality is the way it is?
Fixed >w<
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Dead is 30 Moons.

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Mountain is finished, which is the last cat of this topic! Very Happy
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