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Sunkit
Fighting 7, Hunting 9, Climbing 3, Swimming 1, Strength 5, Stamina 10, Memory Skills 8
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Ok I fixed it better? I also made another one for BrightClan if you could check that out too.Daisyleap wrote:He could use a bit more personality. And for kits history we prefer a little information on how the parents met. And since he's 3 moons, just a little about his current life.
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K how about now >~<Daisyleap wrote:He still could use some more personality, and more detailed. Like, who did he get his traits from, or ways he shows it. For example, he got his charming and flirty traits from his father, and he shows it by always using his wits to entertain the she-cats.
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Done!Davewing wrote:Just change the name of the post so that we don't get confused later, and I'll be happy to officially accept the audition and move it.
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