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Season & Time of Day:
Green-leaf (Jun-Jul-Aug)
Mid-day (2-4 pm)
Chapter: One

Weather & News:
The intense Green-leaf sun bears down on the Clans in this, their darkest hour.
An earthquake has shaken the forest, destroying the territories as the Clans know it and killing dozens of cats. Forced to band together, the cats journey in search of a new home.

DuskClan

Leader: Robinstar (@Quake)
Deputies: Scorchthicket (@Feather)
Medicine cat: Tulipsnow (@Willowstorm)

Medicine apprentices:

FireClan

Leader: Finchstar (@Willowstorm)
Deputies: Floralight (@Jack)
Medicine cat: Tanglepath (@Leopardspots)
Medicine apprentices:

WaterClan

Leader: Sharkstar (@Willowstorm)
Deputies: Rosefeather (@Metzi)
Medicine cat: Autumnsky (@Feather)

Medicine apprentices: Sunshadow (@Jack), Peachpaw (@Daisyleap)

BrightClan

Leader: Stagstar (@Leopardspots)
Deputies: Cricketsong (@Daisy)
Medicine cat:
Medicine apprentices:

FrostClan

Leader: Poolstar (@Feather)
Deputies: Wolfwatcher (@Jack)
Medicine cat: Quartzshine (@Metzi)
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Mousetail Empty Mousetail

Sat Sep 10, 2016 2:47 pm

~Mousekit~Mousepaw~Mousetail~Mouse-~








Age/Gender: 28 Moons, She-Cat








Clan: FrostClan








Rank: Warrior








Appearance: Mousetail is a black and orange she-cat with a light white dusted on her muzzle around her spotted eye and her other eye, along with the tips of her ears. She is a fluffy cat with a black brownish color instead of black. The inside of her ears are a soft light pink with some white. Her whiskers are pure white with black at the end and front. Her eyes are a amber gold and her paw pads are a light soft pink. 








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Personality: Mousetail is a very adventuress cat and is always excited for going on patrol with the other cats. She is very social and is always willing to help anyone in the Clan. Although she's really sweet, she's also very smart. She can tell most herbs apart and prey apart. Although her skills aren't that great, she still does a BIG job for the clan. 








Skills out of 10:[/sieze]









Fighting: 7 -Not too bad-
Hunting: 5 -Ok-
Climbing/Jumping: 3 -Scared of heights!-
Swimming: 4 -Will only touch water if emergency- 
Tracking: 10 -A perfect tracker-
Strength: 6 -Not the strongest-
Stamina: 9 -Fast!-
Herb Knowledge: 6 -Is learning more about herbs from hunting-

Family: Mom -Deceased- Dad -Deceased- 









Siblings/Littermates: -Open-









Mate: Open









History: Mousetail used to live in the forest as a kit, but was quickly token in by her mother and father. A few moons later her father died during a battle, she didn't know him alot, but she was still upset when her mother finally told her. Growing up, she used to throw alot of hissy fits over mouse brain things, but now she stopped, since she is mature. She tries to interact with most people in the clan, since she is very hyper, and loves to  talk. A few moons after she got her warrior name, her mother had died. She was very upset about this, but then got over it a couple moons later. She still remembers the day she saw her moms dead and still body. Because of this, she tries to protect people alot now. She doesn't want them to get hurt since she is scared of them dying so easily. She now lives in the clan of her friends, and is very protective about it.









DONE!


Last edited by Zareahzzz on Mon Oct 03, 2016 9:04 pm; edited 5 times in total
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Sat Sep 10, 2016 10:43 pm
I think it's a great so far, but you need to add a some more to the history, more detail. Most of it is explaining how she got her name, which isn't necessary. You should also add the names of the cats, not just "mom and dad"
And you put "Mouse" at the end of the future and past names, but their is already a Mouse as a loner I believe, so you might need to change that last name to something else.
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Sun Sep 11, 2016 12:22 am
Mousey, so yeah.
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Mon Sep 12, 2016 8:43 pm
The name is fine now, but you still need to fix the history. Add more detail to it. Write down how she grew up.
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Sun Oct 02, 2016 12:52 am
#bump @Zareahzzz, will be deleted tomorrow if not finished/worked on.
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Sun Oct 02, 2016 5:28 pm
Done! @Harley
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Sun Oct 02, 2016 7:18 pm
What is the name?
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Sun Oct 02, 2016 9:06 pm
is her name lynxheart or mousetail?
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Mon Oct 03, 2016 4:57 am
Harley wrote:is her name lynxheart or mousetail?

Is Mousetail taken?? But if it is, I guess her name is Lynxheart, I just wanna be sure. @Harley
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Mon Oct 03, 2016 5:05 am
don't tag me please when it's not needed

and Mousetail isn't taken XD
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Mon Oct 03, 2016 11:37 am
Harley wrote:don't tag me please when it's not needed

and Mousetail isn't taken XD

Oh, sorry, and I will make her name Mousetail, lemme just go fix the audition DONE!
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Mon Oct 03, 2016 5:59 pm

A few moons after she got her warrior name, her mother had died.



Edit that typo please :3 grammar nerd
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Mon Oct 03, 2016 9:05 pm
Done
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Tue Oct 04, 2016 5:13 am
audition accepted

maybe next time use smaller, normal text? that blinds me Razz
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