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Season & Time of Day:
Green-leaf (Jun-Jul-Aug)
Mid-day (2-4 pm)
Chapter: One

Weather & News:
The intense Green-leaf sun bears down on the Clans in this, their darkest hour.
An earthquake has shaken the forest, destroying the territories as the Clans know it and killing dozens of cats. Forced to band together, the cats journey in search of a new home.

DuskClan

Leader: Robinstar (@Quake)
Deputies: Scorchthicket (@Feather)
Medicine cat: Tulipsnow (@Willowstorm)

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FireClan

Leader: Finchstar (@Willowstorm)
Deputies: Floralight (@Jack)
Medicine cat: Tanglepath (@Leopardspots)
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Leader: Sharkstar (@Willowstorm)
Deputies: Rosefeather (@Metzi)
Medicine cat: Autumnsky (@Feather)

Medicine apprentices: Sunshadow (@Jack), Peachpaw (@Daisyleap)

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Leader: Stagstar (@Leopardspots)
Deputies: Cricketsong (@Daisy)
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Leader: Poolstar (@Feather)
Deputies: Wolfwatcher (@Jack)
Medicine cat: Quartzshine (@Metzi)
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Wed Nov 02, 2016 9:43 pm
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.: Redfeather :.

"Even though I cannot fly, I sometimes feel like I can"
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b a s i c s

name ; Redfeather
age ; 36 moons
gender ; she-cat
clan ; Fireclan
rank ; Queen
description ; A beautiful sandy coloured she-cat with red Mackeral tabby stripes. A white paw and light blue eye. Her fur is not that long or short. She has permanent folded over ears.
skills ; out of ten Stamina: 4
Speed: 7
Climbing: 4
Swimming: 4
Strength: 5
Memory: 4
Hunting: 5
Fighting: 6


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b e h i n d t h e d cat

personality ; She's kind hearted, sweet, and never gets into fights. She can always rip apart her kits' fights if they have any, and she always tells them to smile. She is protective, ready to protect anyone she loves, even if they are her enemies from her clan. She deeply loves her kits. She tends to spoil those she loves. Sometimes she does not think before she speaks, annoying other cats.
history ; Redfeather was born as a normal kit. She was named after one of her uncles who had fought brilliantly in a battle and her parents hoped that she would rise up to the name. She was bullied when she was a kit, cause they knew she wouldn't fight back. When she was an apprentice, she trained as hard as he could, until she found out she was pregnant with her mentor's kits. She tried to hide it, but her warrior ceremony was when she gave birth to one beautiful kit. She was named Ratkit. Eventually they had their second and third litter.

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r o m a n t i c s

crush ;
mate ; Darkclaw (Dead)
kits ; Blackpaw, Rattail, Gorsekit and Flintkit
kin ; Darkclaw ~ Mate ~ Dead ~ Killed by warrior of Brightclan
Rowantail ~ Cousin ~ Alive ~ Fireclan

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m i s c.

sexuality ; Straight
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Wed Nov 02, 2016 10:38 pm
Odd question but why is she called Redfeather if nothing about her is red?
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Wed Nov 02, 2016 10:50 pm
I don't know. I adopted her and the audition was already made on the adoption thing
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Wed Nov 02, 2016 11:00 pm
Could you add some more personality?
Also, I don't think you have to put when she dies in the personality, lol. Just put it in a "other" if you want.

Also, fix a bit of the spelling like "preggers".

And in the history, you need some more detail. Someone doesn't bully someone just because they won't fight back, it's not really a good reason???

And I'm pretty sure you forgot Memory and Stamina in the skills. Smile
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Sat Nov 05, 2016 5:16 am
FINISHED!
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Sun Nov 06, 2016 4:55 pm
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Sun Nov 06, 2016 5:06 pm
Here (Red: Mackeral Stripes | Feather: Long fur?) idk. She got the audition from me, so I'm the on to blame.
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Sun Nov 06, 2016 5:07 pm
I changed it up a bit
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Sun Nov 06, 2016 5:08 pm
ik. I saw.
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Sun Nov 06, 2016 5:18 pm
Cats like that don't actually exist so we can't use it as an appearance sorry.
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Sun Nov 06, 2016 5:20 pm
That better?
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Sun Nov 06, 2016 7:39 pm
Um...also not really possible. The black is what's wrong.
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Sun Nov 06, 2016 7:49 pm
That better?
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Mon Nov 07, 2016 5:40 pm
I the appearance could use a bit more.
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Tue Nov 08, 2016 6:10 am
That better?

I'm remaking the pic so don't lock it yet.
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Tue Nov 08, 2016 12:37 pm
Again, hunting and fighting are the most important skills, always put them in your auditions.
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Tue Nov 08, 2016 8:02 pm
That better?
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Tue Nov 08, 2016 10:52 pm
1. You need to add clan & rank.
2. I'd like to see a bit more appearance added.
3. Add some more detail to her personality. Why does she never get into fights? Is she shy or just mature etc?
4. And, like I said before, it doesn't make sense for kits to just bully her if she couldn't fight back. They wouldn't start bullying her out of nowhere at first, they wouldn't know if she fought back anyways when they bullied her the first time. It needs more of an explanation.
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Sun Nov 13, 2016 1:08 am
Skybreeze wrote:1. You need to add clan & rank.
2. I'd like to see a bit more appearance added.
3. Add some more detail to her personality. Why does she never get into fights? Is she shy or just mature etc?
4. And, like I said before, it doesn't make sense for kits to just bully her if she couldn't fight back. They wouldn't start bullying her out of nowhere at first, they wouldn't know if she fought back anyways when they bullied her the first time. It needs more of an explanation.

#bump for this
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Sun Nov 13, 2016 4:36 am
Maybe you can change her name to Reedfeather instead? Because it's still kind of off to name her Redfeather for just a few red stripes.
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Sun Nov 13, 2016 5:50 am
I could make it she was named for her elder brother who was killed by something?
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Tue Nov 15, 2016 7:25 pm
Skybreeze wrote:1. You need to add clan & rank.
2. I'd like to see a bit more appearance added.
3. Add some more detail to her personality. Why does she never get into fights? Is she shy or just mature etc?
4. And, like I said before, it doesn't make sense for kits to just bully her if she couldn't fight back. They wouldn't start bullying her out of nowhere at first, they wouldn't know if she fought back anyways when they bullied her the first time. It needs more of an explanation.

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Fri Nov 18, 2016 9:41 am
Calm down. I'll make it when I get on PC this avo
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Fri Nov 18, 2016 11:14 am
You're just being reminded, Lily, no need to be sassy
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Mon Nov 21, 2016 10:40 pm
#MajorBUMP

This was three weeks ago, please finish!
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Tue Nov 22, 2016 9:39 am
Please finish soon or will be deleted within the week.
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Wed Nov 23, 2016 11:22 pm
This will be deleted Saturday if not finished by then.
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Wed Nov 23, 2016 11:52 pm
Lock this please! I can't get on PC for ages. I'll try to finish it as soon as I get on pc
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Wed Nov 23, 2016 11:52 pm
Alright, pm me when you get on pc so I can unlock.
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Mon Nov 28, 2016 10:57 pm
Finished! (Finallly!)
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Tue Nov 29, 2016 8:30 am
Her personality has no flaws
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Tue Nov 29, 2016 8:33 am
That better?
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Tue Nov 29, 2016 8:40 am
You said at the start that she never gets into fights, and now you've added that she does get into fights?

A personality flaw is something that makes a cat more realistic. Like maybe she has trust issues, or doesn't think before she speaks
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Tue Nov 29, 2016 8:41 am
Sorry! I just got that personality from Jack XD
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Tue Nov 29, 2016 10:10 am
Sorry i was a real n00b back then.
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Tue Nov 29, 2016 4:19 pm
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