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Ravenkit of Frostclan
Appearance: Ravenkit is a smaller raven black with grey stripes going down his back becoming rings on his tail, His eyes are a color a striking green and Ravenkit has a malformed left ear which has the apperance of sloping inwards to the head, he was born with this.
Personality: Ravenkit tends to be a more laid back kit calmer, more relaxed, for being a young kit he has a strange amount of serenity, which can easily be mistaken for laziness. Raven kit also has an uncanny knowledge with relationships and has a generally easy time helping others into relationships. However Ravenkit has trouble expressing his own emotions most of the time, for example if say he lost in a competition, he would feel sad but then berate himself for feeling emotional over something that was either inevitable, or just a bit of bad luck. Ravenkit feels that he isn't aloud to share his sorrows and sadness, but he can only hold in his emotions for so long and eventually he will just explode in Insert emotion here. Ravenkit hates it when cats give up on life, their goals, and dreams and would consul a large amount of cats, but hates when people cause such sort of self doubt and depression. Ravenkit has a strange attraction to heights and birds, for example he might one night find it difficult to sleep and wander out of camp to cave in the mountains where he can observe the entire area.
Fighting: 5 Climbing: 8 Running: 6 Swimming: 1 Hunting: 7 Strength: 4 Stamina: 6 Memory: 7
History: Ravenkit's father, a rouge named Niko was a fairly anxious cat nearly all the time, but when he met the cat of his dreams his anxieties, had faded. He had met this cat in a mountain cave that he took shelter in during a thunderstorm which was apparently in FrostClan territory, at first she was hostile towards him but she eventually grew on him due to extended amounts of time her name was Browntail. After meeting they would have secret meetings, however Browntail was obviously acting slightlty different, always a bit more excited to go hunting alone, and she felt a bit more detached from her whole. eventually she got pregnant and this just made the clan all the more suspicious always asking, who's the father, what do you think its name should be? eventually she gave in the clan was furious. Niko never was a father he couldn't get to the cmap inside he didn't care whtat tried to stop him, a fox did, Niko died at the hands to the fox and Brown tail after raising this kit alone for about 3 moons, decided to go on another of her "huntiing trips" after she found out he was dead she searched the territory for any trace of a fox and she walked right into a hunters trap, now Ravenpaw is alone.
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Re: Ravenkit of Frostclan
First, unless your cat is a kittypet, we don't like cat breeds very much. In the wild you're not going to find an American Shorthair. You can still say that your cat has those gray stripes and the rings on his tail, but not American Shorthair please. Also, magenta is like pink-purple-ish. That isn't a very realistic color. Please stick to eye colors like amber, blue, green, yellow, ect.
And finally, the history seems a bit short. Could you explain how the parents met maybe? Or how she kept the secret from the Clan?
Other than that, everything looks great. Pretty good first audition. If you have any questions, please ask someone with a person with a purple, light green, or dark blue name.
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Re: Ravenkit of Frostclan
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