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Leaf-fall (Autumn, September/October/November)
Time of day:
Dawn (4-5am)
Weather:
The blood-red of the sun rising over a stormy sky can well describe the plight of the Clans. Though the rains have lightened, chilly powerful gales still ravage the landscape. BrightClan is recovering from a devastating attack which they barely defended themselves from and DuskClan is still ravaged by sickness, though hope shines through as a cure is discovered.

DuskClan
Russetstar (@Skybreeze) - 7 lives
Deputies: Littleflower (@Daisyleap), Scorpionclaw (@Panthermask)
Medicine cats: Hollyshade (@Daisyleap), {reserved}
M/c apprentices: Carnelianpaw (@Willowfeather), Tulippaw (@Willowstorm)

FireClan
Redstar (@Daisyleap) - 8 lives
Deputies: Nightpelt (@Skybreeze), Sparkfeather (@Aquastar)
Medicine cats: Soraflight (@Leopardspots), Mudstreak (@Aquastar)
M/c apprentices: Owlpaw (@Willowstorm), Flurrypaw (@Quake)
Notice: FireClan camp is temporarily located within FrostClan due to the rogue takeover.

WaterClan
Sandstar (@Aquastar) - 7 lives
Deputies: Turtlesplash (@Leopardspots), Nightfoot (@Daisyleap)
Medicine cats: Peachcloud(@Daisyleap), Twistedleg (@Skybreeze)
M/c apprentices: Beechpaw (@Sorrelflight), {reserved}
Notice: WaterClan's Camp is currently located in their Swampy Forest due to flooding.

BrightClan
Ivorystar (@Willowstorm) - 4 lives
Deputies: Lynxcloud (@Daisyleap), Snowpuddle (@Snoo)
Medicine cats: Hazelflight (@Leopardspots), Seabreeze (@Sorrelflight)
M/c apprentices: Mistpool (@Mistpool), Dawnpaw (@Panthermask)

FrostClan
Dapplestar (@Leopardspots) - 2 lives
Deputies: Cloverlily (@Daisyleap), Thornsplash (@Skybreeze)
Medicine cats: Ivyfeather (@Aquastar), Greytail (@Skybreeze)
M/c apprentices: Falconswoop (@Willowstorm), Longpaw (@Daisyleap)
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Icespirit

Post by Icespirit on Mon Jan 23, 2017 12:59 am

Name: Icespirit
Age: 14 moons, freshly out of warrior training 
Gender: she-cat
Rank: Warrior
Clan: WaterClan 


Appearance: pure white she-cat with a black muzzle and black legs with a grey tail and a light grey stripe from her muzzle to across her back; crystal-ice blue eyes <-- my drawing of her


Personality: Icespirit is a brave cat who would defend her clan to even the cost of her life if she has to. She enjoys listening to tales of the Elders and swimming in the rivers. Icespirit is very curious in everything and explores undiscovered places with eagerness. However, she's bitter around those who contradict her or point out flaws in things, such as climbing and hunting techniques. 


Skills: (out of 10)
Fighting - 8
Hunting -6
Climbing - 4
Running - 5
Swimming -7 
Strength - 8
Memory skills - 4


Family:
Mother - Silverpelt (silver she-cat with white paws and tail tip; blue eyes)
Father - Ashfeather (dark grey tom with a white belly and paws; amber eyes)
Littermates/siblings - Hawkpaw (tortoise-shell tom with amber eyes), Diamondheart (grey she-cat with a white left hind paw and tail tip; crystal-blue eyes)


History: Icespirit was born into a litter of 3 kits: Hawkkit, Diamondkit, and herself, Icekit. She had unique markings and was the strongest of them all. She quickly gained lots of friends and loved to explore as much as she could of the Clan's camp. In her free time, she would sit by the rivers and gaze into their depths hoping to learn how to swim one day. When she earned her apprenticeship, Icepaw was quick witted and learned the essential attacks and hunting skills necessary for the clan. She also gained her skills in learning how to swim from her mentor. At her warrior ceremony, Icepaw gained her warrior name, Icespirit, and is now getting used to the night vigil and hunting without supervision.


Last edited by Icespirit on Thu Feb 02, 2017 5:30 am; edited 6 times in total (Reason for editing : Rankings and personality)
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Re: Icespirit

Post by Aquastar on Mon Jan 23, 2017 1:05 am

Hi! This is actually a pretty nice audition! But I need some more detail with some things


1) For personality, write some sentences describing her so we can know her better. Like: Icespirit is a fearless cat, always ready to help her clan...etc

For the skills, you can't have all skills high. Hunting and fighting especially can't be both good
1-4 bad
5-7 average 
8-10 good(only use like 2 of these numbers)

Also history, we need details. What struggles did she have? How was her early life? How were her friends?

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FC: Sparkfeather, Mudstreak, Heatherpaw, Foxpaw, Waspkit, Mistkit 
WC: Sandstar, Aquatail, Morningleaf, Rainwing, Rainpaw
BC: Whitefeather, Icebreeze, Glaciershard, Featherpaw, Breezepaw, Snowpaw, Blizzardpaw, Flurrykit,  Aquakit, Nightkit, Frostwing, Pantherclaw, Shadestrike
FRC: Ivyfeather, Stormshadow, Bluetail, Starpaw, Birchpaw, Maplepaw, Hailpaw
RLK:  Rose(R), Clover(K),Phoenix(R), Emerald(R). Taylor(L), Misty(R), Gold(R), Glow(R), Waterfall(R), Thunder(R), Marmalade(R), Solar(R), Lunar(R), Flint(R), Rooster(t)
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Re: Icespirit

Post by Icespirit on Mon Jan 23, 2017 5:17 am

Updated! ^.^

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Re: Icespirit

Post by Quake on Mon Jan 23, 2017 2:11 pm

Some of the skills need to be lower then 5, and she needs some more personality. Other than that, it looks great.

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lqwXVOO0gl0 - for putting down pineapples with some random yodelling
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Re: Icespirit

Post by Icespirit on Mon Jan 23, 2017 9:19 pm

Updated XD

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Re: Icespirit

Post by Daisyleap on Mon Jan 23, 2017 9:24 pm

She is still really overpowered, you need to change more than just climbing as a skill under 5.

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Dusk- Littleflower, Hollyshade, Blizzardtuft, Daisyleap, Gingerpatch, Grassflight, Creamtuft
Fire- Redstar, Hawkstep, Stormwatcher, Pebblesplash, Flamepaw, Adderpaw, Barley, Daffodilkit
Water- Nightfoot, Peachcloud, Salmonpelt, Seashell, Flowerbelly, Rosepaw, Shorepaw
Bright- Lynxcloud, Oceanspark, Aurorashade, Scorpionbite, Sparrowbelly, Shimmerpaw, Tumblepaw
Frost- Cloverlily, Longpaw, Scorchwind, Lunarshine, Wrenpaw, Sleetpaw, Ibispaw
RLK- Min, Peony, Indigo, Slash, Fleur, Blair, Tommy, Bellamy, Shark, Moon, Ryu
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Re: Icespirit

Post by Icespirit on Mon Jan 23, 2017 11:09 pm

Dooooonnneee xDD

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Re: Icespirit

Post by Davewing on Wed Jan 25, 2017 5:23 am

She doesn't have any negative personality traits. Could you please put some?

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Hey everyone, I'm Dave/Dove. I'm an "Elder" on this site, here since the beginning. And though I am not RPing right now, I can answer any question you might have. I mostly stick around to talk on chat, help with auditions, and welcome new members. Feel free to PM me, if needed.


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Re: Icespirit

Post by Daisyleap on Sun Jan 29, 2017 5:35 pm


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Dusk- Littleflower, Hollyshade, Blizzardtuft, Daisyleap, Gingerpatch, Grassflight, Creamtuft
Fire- Redstar, Hawkstep, Stormwatcher, Pebblesplash, Flamepaw, Adderpaw, Barley, Daffodilkit
Water- Nightfoot, Peachcloud, Salmonpelt, Seashell, Flowerbelly, Rosepaw, Shorepaw
Bright- Lynxcloud, Oceanspark, Aurorashade, Scorpionbite, Sparrowbelly, Shimmerpaw, Tumblepaw
Frost- Cloverlily, Longpaw, Scorchwind, Lunarshine, Wrenpaw, Sleetpaw, Ibispaw
RLK- Min, Peony, Indigo, Slash, Fleur, Blair, Tommy, Bellamy, Shark, Moon, Ryu
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Re: Icespirit

Post by Icespirit on Thu Feb 02, 2017 5:30 am

eeeedddiittteeeddd lollll

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Re: Icespirit

Post by Leopardspots on Thu Feb 02, 2017 5:33 am

accepted
my only problem is the fact that one of her littermates is still an apprentice while the other two are warriors but that could be solved by being held back/injured.

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DuskClan: Blueshine(elder), Coldfoot(medicine cat), Tawnysky, Dawnfire, Shadowblaze, Hawksky
FireClan: Soraflight(med. cat), Birchstripe, Robinheart, Martenstrike, Flamekit
WaterClan: Turtlesplash(deputy), Marshfeather(app Carppaw), Snailnose, Carrotnose, Leopardspots, Willowpaw(Lostblaze), Spiderpaw(____)
BrightClan: Hazelflight(med. cat) Petrelflight(app Snowpaw), Jasperheart(app Blizzardpaw), Riptidewind, Crabpaw(Snowyspirit) , Mothpaw(Crimsonfang)
FrostClan: Dapplestar, Hailstreak, Fennelstrike, Owlstripe, Crowsong (app: Badgerpaw)
Other: Shard, Jingle, Angus, Dottie, Raccoon

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