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Featherwish of Brightclan
Fri Feb 03, 2017 12:25 am
- Featherwish:
.: Featherwish :.
"It was all my fault! You know that! If I hadnt run away, he would be alive!"
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b a s i c s
name ; Featherwish
past names ; Featherkit, Featherpaw
age ; 30 moons
gender ; She-cat
clan ; Brightclan
rank ; Queen
description ; A beautiful tabby she-cat with blue eyes. She has long fluffy fur and delicate ears. Her body is lean and strong. Her long legs make for a great running pace. She also has a torn ear.
skills ; out of ten
Fighting -7
Hunting - 4
Climbing - 6
Running - 9
Swimming - 3
Strength - 2
Memory skills - 7Stamina - 5
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b e h i n d t h e c a t
personality ; Featherwish is one of those cats who are hurt (Emotionally) easily. She hates being blamed for something she did not do. She also loves to run, feeling the wind in her soft fur. She loves her kits and spoils them often. She also hates to feel the wetness of water. She loves to watch her kits grow up into strong young warriors.
history ;- Kit history:
- Featherkit was born to Stoneleap and Quartzstep. Two moons later, Featherkit ran from camp after a argument with her father. Quartzstep ran after her. Featherkit had been cornered by a fox who ripped her ear. Quartzstep killed the fox but was sustained with heavy injuries. Featherkit sat next to her father as he died, saying sorry over and over again. Featherkit was devestated at her fathers death, being depressed. Stoneleap calmed her down and she became an apprentice under the name of Featherpaw.
- Apprentice History:
- Featherpaw was given the mentor Thunderflash, who hated her from the start. He pushed her to the very limits. He almost killed her twice. After seeing this, the leader told him that Featherpaw was no longer his apprentice. The leader gave her training with other warriors, including Owlpaws mentor. Soon she was named Featherwish, for the wish to become the best.
- Other history:
- Featherwish and Owldash met as apprentices and grew fond of each other's company quickly when Owldash's brother Ebonypaw died due to a freak accident with a badger. The pair became literally inseperable as warriors, and their kits were soon expected in the late moons of last greenleaf. However, since the litter was so large, there were bound to be complications, and when the kits were born poor Furzekit, the runt, didn't make it. He was named and given to SoulClan, but the other four kits have grown fast and are almost ready to become apprentices.
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r o m a n t i c s
crush ; Owldash
mate ; Owldash
kits ; Midnightkit || Jack
Tumblekit || Daisy
Echokit || Sky
kin ; Quartzstep ~ Father ~ Dead ~ Killed By Fox
Stoneleap ~ Mother ~ Dead ~ Died of Old Age
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m i s c.
sexuality ; Straight
Favourite Prey ; Vole
Favourite Season ; Leaf bare
Favourite scent ; Pine mixed with the scent of tomorrow
Zodiac ; Pisces
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Wow, this is the best audition ive ever done.
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Re: Featherwish of Brightclan
Fri Feb 03, 2017 1:26 am
' You forgot to add stamina in the skills.
' You cannot have two "above average" skills, you have one that is 10/10 and one that is 9/10, so lower at least one of the two.
That's about it, the rest looks fine.
' You cannot have two "above average" skills, you have one that is 10/10 and one that is 9/10, so lower at least one of the two.
That's about it, the rest looks fine.
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Re: Featherwish of Brightclan
Fri Feb 03, 2017 3:28 am
Fixed!
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Re: Featherwish of Brightclan
Fri Feb 03, 2017 9:03 am
You also forgot to put Ryekit in the family lol
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