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Clan Information
Season & Time of Day:
Green-leaf (Jun-Jul-Aug)
Mid-day (2-4 pm)
Chapter: One

Weather & News:
The intense Green-leaf sun bears down on the Clans in this, their darkest hour.
An earthquake has shaken the forest, destroying the territories as the Clans know it and killing dozens of cats. Forced to band together, the cats journey in search of a new home.

DuskClan

Leader: Robinstar (@Quake)
Deputies: Scorchthicket (@Feather)
Medicine cat: Tulipsnow (@Willowstorm)

Medicine apprentices:

FireClan

Leader: Finchstar (@Willowstorm)
Deputies: Floralight (@Jack)
Medicine cat: Tanglepath (@Leopardspots)
Medicine apprentices:

WaterClan

Leader: Sharkstar (@Willowstorm)
Deputies: Rosefeather (@Metzi)
Medicine cat: Autumnsky (@Feather)

Medicine apprentices: Sunshadow (@Jack), Peachpaw (@Daisyleap)

BrightClan

Leader: Stagstar (@Leopardspots)
Deputies: Cricketsong (@Daisy)
Medicine cat:
Medicine apprentices:

FrostClan

Leader: Poolstar (@Feather)
Deputies: Wolfwatcher (@Jack)
Medicine cat: Quartzshine (@Metzi)
Medicine apprentices:
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Icespirit
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Age : 23
Location : Hogwarts

Deertail Empty Deertail

Fri Mar 17, 2017 6:55 am
Name: Deertail
Age: 20 moons
Gender: She-cat
Rank: Warrior
Clan: FrostClan

Appearance: Brown with white paws, ears, end of tail, and has white spots on her back of various sizes like a stripe that end where her tail starts; 3 white upside-down triangles under each eye; amber eyes; tall and slender with long legs and medium-sized paws

Personality: Deertail is quick and intelligent, strong, and respective of others. She isn't afraid to stand up for herself or for those she loves when needed. Swimming in the rivers and running are some of her greatest passions and strengths. However, she can be very arrogant at times and even a little bossy when irritated. Her stubbornness can sometimes get her in trouble. 
Skills: (out of 10) as a Warrior
Fighting- 4
Hunting- 4
Climbing- 4
Running- 7
Swimming- 7
Strength- 6
Memory skills- 4

Family
Mother- Ivy~deceased
Father- Moon~deceased
Littermates/siblings- none

History
Deertail was born to Ivy and Moon, two rogues. When she was just a couple moons old, her parents were killed by a group of Twolegs who shot them, mistaking them as foxes, for hunting their turkeys during Leafbare. Deertail then hunted on her own and took care of herself. While she was hunting in FrostClan's territory, one of its warriors was merciful enough to question her instead of immediately attacking and killing her. As she told them about her parents' and thus, her own downfall, the anonymous FrostClan warrior took her to their camp and she was accepted into their clan, a while after she proved her worthiness and loyalty.


Last edited by Icespirit on Fri Mar 17, 2017 10:01 am; edited 5 times in total
Willowstorm
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Deertail Empty Re: Deertail

Fri Mar 17, 2017 7:17 am
StreamClan doesn't exist.
Icespirit
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Deertail Empty Re: Deertail

Fri Mar 17, 2017 7:19 am
I know, but that's where she came from before experiencing these clans.
Willowstorm
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Deertail Empty Re: Deertail

Fri Mar 17, 2017 7:21 am
She can't have, the only canon clans in this site are the ones we roleplay as.
Icespirit
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Deertail Empty Re: Deertail

Fri Mar 17, 2017 7:23 am
Ohhh ok, I see haha. Thanks for letting me know that!! So, would it be ok if I made her formerly a rogue? I think I can go from that.
Willowstorm
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Deertail Empty Re: Deertail

Fri Mar 17, 2017 7:30 am
Yeah that could work.

Her skills also seem a little high
Icespirit
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Deertail Empty Re: Deertail

Fri Mar 17, 2017 7:37 am
Alrighty, edited her story and strength numbers (I agree, they were too high hehe) Smile
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Deertail Empty Re: Deertail

Fri Mar 17, 2017 9:56 am
She only has two skills under 5, so I recommend making a few more skills lower (maybe 2 more?).

Also, Twolegs don't hunt domestic cats for game.
Icespirit
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Deertail Empty Re: Deertail

Fri Mar 17, 2017 10:01 am
Fixed =P
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Fri Mar 17, 2017 10:07 am
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