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Dappleheart
Sun Apr 02, 2017 1:51 am
- Dappleheart:
- My Loyalty Is My PrideFirst Site
Name : Dappleheart
Past/Future : Dapplepaw, Dapplekit, Dapple
Rank & Clan : Frostclan Queen
Gender & Age : 30 Moon Old Queen
Looks : Dappleheart is a elegant and beautiful Grey Tabby, With Blackish Tabby strikes. She has Swamy Blue-Green Eyes that shine in the sunlight. She Is A Normal Height, And is slightly overweight. She has Long Grey Whiskers. She has brown, rosette like marks on her body.
Digging Deeper
Kin :
Mother : Thunderlily (Dead, Reason: Badger)
Father : Fang (Alive, Rouge of Onyx's Group,Adopt)
Sister(s) : Delta (Alive, Loner, Open)
Brother(s) : Applefrost (Alive,Frostclan,Open) Littlerose (Alive,Frostclan,Open)
Kit(s) : Cloudkit (Alive, Unborn, @Sushi) Sandpaw (Alive,Frostclan,Open)
Mate : Wisteriaheart (Alive,Frostclan,Open)
Skills :
Fighting : 4
Hunting : 4
Strength/Stanima : 5
Memory : 10
Running : 5
Swimming : 1
Climbing : 7
Herb Lore : 0.1
The Core
History : Dapple was born to Thunderlily, A Brown Tabby From Frostclan and Fang, A Grey Rouge. Her Mother, Thunderlily, Always wanted to be the leader. Fang Promised her that he would teach her how. Thunderlily would sneak out And Meet Fang. After about 6 Moons Thunderlily realised she was having Fang's kits. She Told Fang That She Would Give him one, But he could name them all. The Kits were born in the barn(?). Fang Named Dapple for her Rosette like markings; Apple for his appleish coloured pelt; Little for him being the runt and Delta for her being the fourth born. Fang Choose to take Delta In, Because she looked most like him. Dapple, Apple and Little got the kit suffix when they joined frostclan. Dapplekits Kit-Hood was very normal, Minus Applekit and Littlekit would fight about who was going to be the best warrior. When Dapplekit became Dapplepaw, Fang Decided to Stay In camp to watch his kits; No-one knew why Delta wasn't there. Fang stayed for her warrior ceremony and then left. Dapplepaw got the name Dappleheart because of her kindness. When she was 20 Moons she became mates with a Tom called Wisteriaheart, and half-a-moon later, She was having her first litter, She had one kit and named her Sandkit. Then, 10 Moons later she was having Another litter. That Brings us to today.
Personality : Dappleheart is a Kind cat who is very motherly: She can be very bossy to her kits because of her motherlyness. She Thinks her kits are the best kits in the forest, and if anyone says theirs are better and or she's not true, She will start a argument with them at least, and Hate them at most.
DaisyleapForum Overseer
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Re: Dappleheart
Sun Apr 02, 2017 11:08 am
Her personality is a little two-dimensional, that could be improved on, as well as the history. How and why did Fang stay in FrostClan camp? If he's a rogue he definitely wouldn't even be allowed on the territory.
Could you also please fix the grammar and spelling? It's really difficult to read like this.
Could you also please fix the grammar and spelling? It's really difficult to read like this.
LeopardspotsForum Storyteller
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Re: Dappleheart
Sun Apr 02, 2017 1:41 pm
Yeah Dapplestar isn't too lenient on the whole "rogue" thing and given her age she would've been leader at the time she joined.
QuakeAudition Instructor
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Re: Dappleheart
Sun Apr 09, 2017 7:07 am
Sight not site*
Also bump from what they said, you still need to fix that ^.^
Also bump from what they said, you still need to fix that ^.^
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