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Season & Weather
Greenleaf first moon (Summer, June)
The storm has faded to a light mist, leaving it safe for hunting. The ground is soft and the grass is a luscious green. The air is pleasantly cool, but will soon warm.
The battle has ended and medicine cats from every Clan are frantically trying to tend to the injured. A group of rogues, lead by a cat who calls herself Onyx, has driven FireClan out of their camp and is gaining more support from other rogues by the hour.

DuskClan
Russetstar(@Skybreeze) - 8 lives
Deputies: Littleflower (@Daisyleap), Scorpionclaw (@Panthermask)
Medicine cats: Hollyshade(@Daisyleap), Coldfoot(@Leopardspots)
M/c apprentices: Spiderpaw(@Skybreeze), Tulippaw (@Willowpoppy)

FireClan
Redstar(@Daisyleap) - 9 lives
Deputies: Nightpelt(@Skybreeze), Darkfrost(@Spottedleaf)
Medicine cats: Soraflight(@Leopardspots), Mudstreak (@Aquastar)
M/c apprentices: Owlpaw (@Willowpoppy), Flurrypaw (@Quake)
Notice: FireClan camp is temporarily located within FrostClan due to a sudden rogue takeover.

WaterClan
Sandstar(@Aquastar) - 9 lives
Deputies: Turtlesplash(@Leopardspots), Nightfoot(@Daisyleap)
Medicine cats: Mistleleaf(@Willowpoppy), Twistedleg(@Skybreeze)
M/c apprentices: Peachpaw(@Daisyleap), Sunpaw(@Sunshadow)
Notice: WaterClan's Camp is currently located in their Swampy Forest due to flooding.

BrightClan
Ivorystar(@Willowpoppy) - 7 lives
Deputies: Lynxcloud(@Daisyleap), Skybreeze (@Skybreeze)
Medicine cats: Hazelflight(@Leopardspots), Seabreeze(@Wishflight)
M/c apprentices: Mistpaw(@Littlelily), {reserved}

FrostClan
Dapplestar(@Leopardspots) - 5 lives
Deputies: Cloverlily(@Daisyleap), Thornsplash(@Skybreeze)
Medicine cats: Ivyfeather(@Aquastar), Greytail(@Skybreeze)
M/c apprentices: Longpaw(@Daisyleap), Falconpaw(@Willowpoppy)
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Snowheart and Silverclaw

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Snowheart and Silverclaw

Post by Snowheart on Mon Apr 24, 2017 1:05 am

Name:Snowheart
Age:16 moons
Gender:she-cat
Rank:warrior
Clan:DuskClan

Appearance: sleek, pure white she-cat with slightly clouded blue eyes

Personality: Snowheart is a very secretive cat, thanks to her wanting to hide her partial lack of sight. She also prefers to be alone, thriving in the solitude of hunting alone in the territory or simply just exploring or getting to know the land of her clan's territory. However, she is a complete pacifist, refusing to hurt another cat even in the thick of battle. She is also very stand-offish to cats she doesn't recognize, and can be hostile if on border patrols, even if she doesn't use her claws. She's also a bit of a coward, preferring to run away from difficult battles or situations instead of staying and fighting or challenging them head on, yes, she may be hostile at borders but if the situation gets out of her control, she will run.

Skills: (out of 10)
Fighting -4
Hunting - 5
Climbing - 5
Running - 8
Swimming - 3
Strength - 6
Memory skills - 9

Family:
Mother - Blizzard (a loner, may make later)
Father - unknown kittypet (she never met him, his name is Benny) 
Littermates/siblings - Silver (littermate)



History:
Snowheart was born a loner to her loner mother, and her kittypet father. Although she never met or even knew her father's name, she didn't let that bring her down in life. Unfortunately, during a snow storm when she was four moons old, she became partially blind, but because of this her memory greatly improved.  In this same snow storm, her mother had also passed away. She relied on her  sister until she was six moons old, and joined Duskclan. In Duskclan, she trained hard, working to get around her eyesight and to prove herself to her clanmates. During her first battle, she was horrified by the death and the violence, and violently decided she would never harm another cat. She can defend herself when needed, but she always keeps her claws sheathed unless hunting. Thanks to her peaceful nature, she was named Snowheart.


Name: Silverclaw
Age: 16 moons
Gender: she-cat
Rank: warrior
Clan: WaterClan

Appearance:a light silver she-cat with darker gray ears, toes, and tail tip with a calw mark scar going across her left shoulder and cold brown eyes
Personality:: Protective over those she cartes about, naturally distrusting, but extremely loyal if you managed to bulldoze your way through her natural distrust. She tends to answer every challenge with a battle cry, especially if someone she cares about is on the line. She is also an extremely proud cat.

Skills: (out of 10)
Fighting -9
Hunting - 4
Climbing - 5
Running - 4
Swimming - 7
Strength - 8
Memory skills -4

Family:
Mother - look above
Father - look above
Littermates/siblings - Snowheart (littermate)

History:

She grew up in the forest with her sister. Loosing their mother to the same snowstorm that robbed Snowheart of most of her sight, Silverclaw took on the responsibility of being the "older"  sister, doing her best to provide for her. Once they were six moons however, SoulClan had a different idea. Silverclaw felt a pull towards Waterclan, while Snowheart went to DuskClan. Although not natural to water like her clanmates, Silverclaw still trained hard, finding her love of battle very quickly. Although she still refuses to take on a clan name, she does, after so many moons of being in the clan, find herself trusting her clanmates, despite her resolve not to. However, unlike her sister, who has accepted SoulClan as her ancestors, Silverclaw shies away from the idea, even to this day. Her love of battle is what got her the warrior name Silverclaw.


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Re: Snowheart and Silverclaw

Post by Wishflight on Mon Apr 24, 2017 1:33 am

Welcome to the site snow! This is a pretty good first audition, but there are a few things you should fix  

Snowhearts audition: 
Snowhearts personality could use a bit more, and Could you put it in full sentances instead of just a word? 
   On her history some of the sentences don't really make since, like this sentence here: 
" she relied on her until she was six moons old." Who did she rely on? 

In a Silvers audition it says their mother died in the snow storm, but it doesn't mention this in Snowhearts audition. 


Silvers audition: 
She could use a bit more personality as well. 
I'm not exactly sure if she can keep her loner name in a clan, I'll ask a admin. 


Other then that it seems good to me! Smile

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frostclan: Redstripe, Suntail, Oakpaw , Larksong, Thrushwhisker, Blackfrost Blossomkit,

brightclan: Nightmoon, Springpaw, Barkwing, Mudwhisker, Dovefeather, Ivypaw, Lightningpaw,

fireclan: Darkshadow, Ravenheart, Sedgekit, Sparrowkit, Sunflight, Fawnshadow

waterclan: Riverpaw, Stormwing, Wrenfeather, Silverwing

duskclan: Honeyfllight, Lilypaw, Mistystorm,

rouges: Wind, Willow, Shadow, Dust, Sand, Ivy, Blaze, Flash, Scar, Thor, Hatuh, Lapu, Sevel

Waiting: Tansykit and Chervilkit
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Re: Snowheart and Silverclaw

Post by Snowheart on Mon Apr 24, 2017 1:44 am

Thank you so much for your help!

I edited it and if I will change Silver's name if I have too, thanks again Smile

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DuskClan
Snowheart (she-cat)
Stonepaw (Tom)
Patchpaw (she-cat)

WaterClan
Silverclaw (She-cat)
Yarrowkit (Tom)

FireClan

FrostClan
Palestripe(Tom)

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Re: Snowheart and Silverclaw

Post by Wishflight on Tue Apr 25, 2017 1:03 am

On Silverclaws history and such you need to change " Silver" to " Silverclaw"

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frostclan: Redstripe, Suntail, Oakpaw , Larksong, Thrushwhisker, Blackfrost Blossomkit,

brightclan: Nightmoon, Springpaw, Barkwing, Mudwhisker, Dovefeather, Ivypaw, Lightningpaw,

fireclan: Darkshadow, Ravenheart, Sedgekit, Sparrowkit, Sunflight, Fawnshadow

waterclan: Riverpaw, Stormwing, Wrenfeather, Silverwing

duskclan: Honeyfllight, Lilypaw, Mistystorm,

rouges: Wind, Willow, Shadow, Dust, Sand, Ivy, Blaze, Flash, Scar, Thor, Hatuh, Lapu, Sevel

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Re: Snowheart and Silverclaw

Post by Snowheart on Tue Apr 25, 2017 1:03 am

....crap ok give me a sec to do so

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DuskClan
Snowheart (she-cat)
Stonepaw (Tom)
Patchpaw (she-cat)

WaterClan
Silverclaw (She-cat)
Yarrowkit (Tom)

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FrostClan
Palestripe(Tom)

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Re: Snowheart and Silverclaw

Post by Wishflight on Tue Apr 25, 2017 1:35 am

I think that's good!  accepted

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frostclan: Redstripe, Suntail, Oakpaw , Larksong, Thrushwhisker, Blackfrost Blossomkit,

brightclan: Nightmoon, Springpaw, Barkwing, Mudwhisker, Dovefeather, Ivypaw, Lightningpaw,

fireclan: Darkshadow, Ravenheart, Sedgekit, Sparrowkit, Sunflight, Fawnshadow

waterclan: Riverpaw, Stormwing, Wrenfeather, Silverwing

duskclan: Honeyfllight, Lilypaw, Mistystorm,

rouges: Wind, Willow, Shadow, Dust, Sand, Ivy, Blaze, Flash, Scar, Thor, Hatuh, Lapu, Sevel

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