Clan Information
Season & Time of Day:
Newleaf (Mar/Apr/May)
Mid-afternoon (4-5pm)

Weather & News:
Snow is beginning to fall on the territories, covering everything in a blanket of soft white powder. The winds are chilly coming off of the mountains, and it is suggested that everyone save their strength for hunting and training to defend your territory.
WaterClan is discussing a way to get rid of their alligator problem before leafbare truly sets in, while DuskClan is still facing an epidemic of sickness. FireClan and FrostClan have become cautious allies with BrightClan, since the prophecy contained all three Clans, and are trying to find a way to get rid of the rogues.


Jadestar (@Viper) - 9 lives

Deputies: Dragonmoon (@Aquastar), Heathermoon (@Valkyrie)

Medicine cats: Hollyshade (@Daisyleap), {reserved} (@Orion)

M/c apprentices: Tulippaw (@Willowstorm), {reserved} (@Panthermask)


Redstar (@Daisyleap) - 8 lives

Deputies: Sparkfeather (@Aquastar), Darkshadow (@Baydream)

Medicine cats: Soraflight (@Leopardspots), Mudstreak(@Aquastar)

M/c apprentices: Owlpaw(@Willowstorm), Flurrypaw (@Valkyrie)

Notice: FireClan camp is temporarily located within FrostClan due to the rogue takeover.


Sandstar (@Aquastar) - 5 lives

Deputies: Turtlesplash (@Leopardspots), Nightfoot (@Daisyleap)

Medicine cats: Peachcloud(@Daisyleap), Autumnsky (@Viper)

M/c apprentices: Beechpaw (@Baydream), {reserved} (@Savannah)

Notice: WaterClan's Camp is currently located in their Swampy Forest due to flooding.


Ivorystar (@Willowstorm) - 3 lives

Deputies: Lynxcloud (@Daisyleap), Snowpuddle (@Snoo)

Medicine cats: Hazelflight (@Leopardspots), Seabreeze (@Baydream)

M/c apprentices: Mistpool (@Orion), {reserved} (@Aquastar)


Dapplestar (@Leopardspots) - 2 lives

Deputies: Cloverlily (@Daisyleap), {reserved}

Medicine cats: Ivyfeather (@Aquastar), Falconswoop (@Willowstorm)

M/c apprentices: Longpaw (@Daisyleap), {reserved}
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I'm gonna rewrite Spottedleaf's Heart

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I'm gonna rewrite Spottedleaf's Heart

Post by Leopardspots on Tue May 02, 2017 1:25 pm

Anyone read Spottedleaf's Heart cause hooo boy it was bad

I casually daydreamed up an entire plot for a much better version of the story within one day so take that Vicky.

-it starts with spotted being super interested in medicine as a kit but redtail (why the fuck does no one ever bring up that they're littermates????) is like "aw dont be boring i want to train with you" so she sticks to going the warrior route w/ some creepy nightmares she goes to the med den for

-she becomes an apprentice and is gonna be mentored by Thistleclaw and she's like "oh the super scary/cool guy i keep seeing in my dreams this'll be interesting" but 1 training session later she very much dislikes him

-he brings her to the gathering as an incentive to get her to hate the other clans and it backfires a lot. also, redtail(an apprentice) gets into an argument with thistleclaw and bluestar sides with him over thistleclaw

-spotted and willowpaw(willowpelt) meets leopardstar(then leopardpaw) at the gathering and finds out that riverclan has had cats go missing. willowpaw doesn't care and goes to talk to Whitestorm or someone and Spottedpaw starts sharing things shes observed with Leopardpaw and the two strike up a friendship as detective partners. Leopardpaw is determined to prove to her over-protective dad that she's capable

-Spottedpaw has a training session with Thistleclaw and gets hurt. She goes to the medicine den to get her wounds treated and reawakens her kithood interest in medicine. She falls asleep and has a nightmare about two unidentifiable cats who smell of tar murdering someone at the sunningrocks. She wakes up and goes to the border to see no one there, and no evidence of anyone aside from blood streaks in the river

-The next day, she's out hunting near the sunningrocks and meets up with Leopardpaw. Leopardpaw mentions that an elder went to hunt at the rocks and never returned. The Clan doesn't seem too concerned because he's been wandering a lot but Leopardpaw is sure he's the next victim of the disappearing. They find some clues (including blood smeared on the rocks deliberately)

-The winter where Bluestar lost her kits starts and the disappearances stop. Spottedpaw ditches training for the medicine den. She's helping out Featherwhisker when someone comes into the medicine den with a bloody nose, complaining about an ambush. She runs to the stones, sure she'll catch the murderer, but instead finds Leopardpaw snooping around for more clues. They get into an argument as no one has vanished recently and Spottedpaw tells her to drop it

-Bluestar's kits are missing and Spottedpaw wonders if whoever was killing at the river had spread and was attacking ThunderClan. She has a nightmare about a cat getting their skull crushed and keeps hearing 'two cats of the shadow with pelts of snow' as the cat dies. She wakes up and goes on dawn patrol to distract herself. When she gets there, she finds a bunch of RiverClan cats gathered around a spot on the ice. A half-frozen blueish grey cat lays on the ice and she overhears one of the RiverClan cats saying "i suppose that explains where Greypool got them" (this is a red herring, it's just a random rogue who looked like a RiverClan cat)

-a small time skip to spring, she's working more as a medicine cat apprentice than as a warrior apprentice. Willowpelt and Redtail have been made warriors at this point, but she's been skipping her duties. Thistleclaw is furious about this and drags her to the border with RiverClan. She sees Leopardpaw there (now Leopardfur), and Thistleclaw brutally attacks her, overpowering her and smashing her head into the water in an attempt to drown her. Spottedleaf gets him to stop (maybe by biting his tail?) and saves her using the skills she picked up from the medicine den. A RiverClan patrol comes by, and the two lie about Leopardpaw slipping and falling onto a sharp rock

-A larger time skip and Bluestar is leader. Thistleclaw is dead. Bluestar admits to Spottedleaf that she gave up her kits to prevent Thistleclaw from becoming deputy and Spottedleaf admits that Thistleclaw had been brutally murdering intruders. A little while later, Spottedleaf starts having dreams about a "mysterious cat with a coat of fire". Later in the chapter, the "fire alone will save our Clan" thing happens and she wonders if it connects to her dreams

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DuskClan: Blueshine(elder), Coldfoot(medicine cat), Tawnysky, Dawnfire, Shadowblaze, Hawksky
FireClan: Soraflight(med. cat), Birchstripe, Robinheart, Martenstrike, Flamekit
WaterClan: Turtlesplash(deputy), Marshfeather(app Carppaw), Snailnose, Carrotnose, Leopardspots, Willowpaw(Lostblaze), Spiderpaw(____)
BrightClan: Hazelflight(med. cat) Petrelflight(app Snowpaw), Jasperheart(app Blizzardpaw), Riptidewind, Crabpaw(Snowyspirit) , Mothpaw(Crimsonfang)
FrostClan: Dapplestar, Hailstreak, Fennelstrike, Owlstripe, Crowsong (app: Badgerpaw)
Other: Shard, Jingle, Angus, Dottie, Raccoon

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Re: I'm gonna rewrite Spottedleaf's Heart

Post by Willowstorm on Tue May 02, 2017 1:32 pm

Even in Bluestar's Prophecy, Spottedpaw was doing both duties because Goosefeather is an ass lol

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this isn't up to date FYI
Dusk - Tulippaw(m), Stormpoppy, Riverswoop, Nightfrost, Rainpaw, Moonpaw, Sablepaw, Brindlepaw, Eveningkit, Wisteriakit
Fire - Owlpaw(m) Acornwhisker, Thorntail, Ambershine, Sundapple, Clayfrost, Cloudpaw, Milkkit, Pepperkit, Petalkit
Water - Mistleleaf(m) Rubblewind, Cedarhowl, Poolglow, Silverdawn, Snowlily, Tanglewind, Quartzpaw, Carppaw, Bumblepaw, Mallowkit, Sorrelkit, Blossomkit
Bright - Ivorystar, Snowyspirit, Cherrywind, Bluedawn, Sleekfire, Wavespirit, Risingsun, Thrushpaw, Ryepaw, Flickerpaw, Lionkit, Aspenflame(e)
Frost - Falconpaw(m), Foresthowl, Lynxfang, Echowing, Hailfeather, Briarscorch, Lichenpaw, Clearpaw, Emberpaw, Twilightkit
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