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~~ Scarletpetal of Duskclan ~~
Age: 21 moons
Rank: Warrior
Clan: Duskclan
Appearance: Scarletpetal is a bright ginger she-cat with long soft fur, and a bushy tail. She has pointed ears with tufts of fur on the tips, darker tabby markings on her body, medium length legs, and a pink nose. She also has pale green eyes, sharp claws, and a scar running from the front of her neck to the back, right in between her shoulder blades.
Personality: Scarletpetal is a calm and collective she-cat. Always keeping to herself and not getting in anything she shouldn't be. When under amounts of pressure, such as in a clan battle or fight with a fox or rogues, she still remains calm and tries her best to help other cats be the same way. She does not have much of a soft side for any particular cat (yet), and she can have a quick temper if anyone provokes and accuses her or her clan of anything wrong or if she is asked about the scar running from the front of her neck to the back.
History: Scarletpetal was born to Petalstrike(mother; Cloudclan) and Lionscar(father;Leafclan). Both of her parents grew up seperate, but they would sneak out of their clans at night and see each other, where they were made warriors around fhethe same age. After a year of being apart from each other their two clans decided to merge, leaving Petalstrike and Lionscar the chance to be official mates, fight in many battles together and eventually give birth to their only daughter. She was the only of her litter, with no littermates, and her parents loved her dearly. Her mother was given the name Petalstrike because of her calm demeanor and loving attitude towards all her clanmates, but when it came to a dispute from other clans or even battles, she was quick with deadly attacks that could almost kill a cat; which she has actually done twice. Her father, Lionscar, got his name from fighting in so many battles, he would always come back to camp with fresh new ones, and he had a huge mane of fur. He was ferocious with almost any cat, anger-wise, but he loved his mate and daughter with all of his heart and would die to protect them. Her parents are both still alive, now senior warriors, with Lionscar being close to retiring due to his many scars and suffering some major injuries with a few wounds. Scarletpetal was mentored by a tom with the name of Tigerscar, who had happened to mentor her father when he was younger. Tigerscar was a tough mentor to have, as he was indeed tough on his apprentices, but he grew a bond with Scarletpetal, that of a father and daughter relationship even though Scarlet's real father was still alive. Tigerscar was very dear to her, and he sacrificed himself to save and protect her during a battle, where she earned the scar on her neck as a memory that she was almost killed, and her beloved mentor had died. Scarletpetal had endured one of the worst nights of her life when her mentor died in front of her, having just been made a warrior two nights before the battle. She became detatched from almost everyone except her parents, and even collected a short and quick temper, deciding to take off from warrior duties for a couple of moons. She eventually came back to her oldself; calm and collective, but still retains her short temper from time to time.
Family:
Mother- Petalstrike(open)
Father- Lionscar(open)
Siblings- none
Mate/Crush- N/A
Skills:
Hunting- 6
Fighting- 10
Swimming- 3
Climbing- 5
Healing- 1
Knowledge- 8
- LeopardspotsForum Storyteller
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Re: ~~ Scarletpetal of Duskclan ~~
-The ending is a bit confusingly worded
Otherwise it's all good, you just need some tweaks
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Re: ~~ Scarletpetal of Duskclan ~~
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Re: ~~ Scarletpetal of Duskclan ~~
any chance you want a mate for her? :3
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