Cloudberry of FrostClan

Name: Cloudberry

Gender: She-cat

Age: 34 moons

Clan: FrostClan

Appearance: Pale gray she-cat with scattered dark gray spots across her whole body, Brilliant blue eyes. She has short legs, a slim but muscular build, and fluffy, thick fur. Her left ear has been reduced to a stump, and she has very strong hindlegs, with long claws.  

Personality:
  Pros: Cloudberry is kind to those not arguing with her, and alway protects the weaker who don't get a voice. She fights for what she thinks is right and would (probably) help the majority.
  Cons: She is stubborn, usually only listens to herself because she believes that she is always right. She isn't the most devoted to the warrior code, sometimes disobeying that and orders from those of a higher rank.
  Neutral: She is loud and will never shut up until she wins or she is threatened with apprentice duties. She also is known for her sharp-tongue that has completely made apprentices have a loss of words.
  Likes to win arguments, colorful flowers, the taste and scent of rabbits, climbing trees and the mountain, snow, and the wind blowing through her fur
  Dislikes those who annoy or oppose her, and the heat and bright sunshine due to being hot under her long fur

Skills (out of 10)
  (Hunting): 5.5
  (Fighting): 5.5
  (Climbing): 8
  (Agility): 6.5
  (Strength): 6
  (Speed): 8
  (Stamina): 4.5
  (Stealth): 3
  (Memory): 7
  (Herb Knowledge): 1.5
  (Leadership skills): 6
  (Tracking): 8

Family: 
(Mother): Cherryfall (deceased)
(Father): Palefeather (deceased)
(Siblings): None
(Mentor): Bluebelfeather (deceased)
(Mate): Twigtalon (deceased)
(Kits): Blizzardkit and Birchkit (Not born yet)

History: Cloudkit was born to Cherryfall and Palefeather, with no siblings. She was a very stubborn and loud apprentice but learned much from her mentor, Bluebelfeather. While an apprentice, the blizzard came earlier than expected while she was hunting with her family, whom she was very close too, and her parents were killed in the storm, Cloudpaw barely surviving by taking shelter in the massive twisting roots of a birch tree. Cloudpaw became very quiet and reserved for a few moons, giving Bluebelfeather a great relief from her stubbornness, though Bluebelfeather felt oddly empty without having his paws full with her nonsense. She came out of her trance a moon before her she became a warrior. She had lived a relatively uneventful moons of her warrior life, until she and Twigtalon became friends and eventually became mates. A bit after she announced that she was expecting, Twigtalon was struck down by a fox, dragging her into another mourning state.
 
Future: She will lose too much blood while having her kits, and will die. But before that happens, she will name her kits Blizzardkit and Birchkit, because she believed that her mother and father’s spirits that were lost in the blizzard would be put into Blizzardkit, and Birchkit because of the birch tree that she sheltered in the roots during the blizzard, and she thought that Birchkit would look out for her brother and all others like the birch watched over her, because her brother was born considerably smaller than Birchkit
 
(Also on Blizzardkit’s audition I’d like to make Birchkit live for a few minutes then die, so the naming makes sense. Also I made this character so Blizzardkit doesn’t come out of the blue.)

I'm not a huge fan of the personality format tbh, could you write traits in full sentences instead of just listing them? Otherwise this is fine.

Sure