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Season:
Leaf-fall (Autumn, September/October/November)
Time of day:
Dawn (4-5am)
Weather:
The blood-red of the sun rising over a stormy sky can well describe the plight of the Clans. Though the rains have lightened, chilly powerful gales still ravage the landscape. BrightClan is recovering from a devastating attack which they barely defended themselves from and DuskClan is still ravaged by sickness, though hope shines through as a cure is discovered.

DuskClan
Russetstar (@Skybreeze) - 7 lives
Deputies: Littleflower (@Daisyleap), Scorpionclaw (@Panthermask)
Medicine cats: Hollyshade (@Daisyleap), {reserved}
M/c apprentices: Carnelianpaw (@Willowfeather), Tulippaw (@Willowstorm)

FireClan
Redstar (@Daisyleap) - 8 lives
Deputies: Nightpelt (@Skybreeze), Sparkfeather (@Aquastar)
Medicine cats: Soraflight (@Leopardspots), Mudstreak (@Aquastar)
M/c apprentices: Owlpaw (@Willowstorm), Flurrypaw (@Quake)
Notice: FireClan camp is temporarily located within FrostClan due to the rogue takeover.

WaterClan
Sandstar (@Aquastar) - 7 lives
Deputies: Turtlesplash (@Leopardspots), Nightfoot (@Daisyleap)
Medicine cats: Peachcloud(@Daisyleap), Twistedleg (@Skybreeze)
M/c apprentices: Beechpaw (@Sorrelflight), {reserved}
Notice: WaterClan's Camp is currently located in their Swampy Forest due to flooding.

BrightClan
Ivorystar (@Willowstorm) - 4 lives
Deputies: Lynxcloud (@Daisyleap), Snowpuddle (@Snoo)
Medicine cats: Hazelflight (@Leopardspots), Seabreeze (@Sorrelflight)
M/c apprentices: Mistpool (@Mistpool), Dawnpaw (@Panthermask)

FrostClan
Dapplestar (@Leopardspots) - 2 lives
Deputies: Cloverlily (@Daisyleap), Thornsplash (@Skybreeze)
Medicine cats: Ivyfeather (@Aquastar), Greytail (@Skybreeze)
M/c apprentices: Falconswoop (@Willowstorm), Longpaw (@Daisyleap)
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Shaderiver of WaterClan

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Shaderiver of WaterClan

Post by Echorose on Fri Jun 09, 2017 2:55 pm

Name: Shaderiver
Age: 15 moons
Gender: Male
Rank: Warrior
Clan: Water

Appearance: He's a light grey tom with a black right ear, paws, and tailtip. There's a nick in his left ear as well as a small scar on his shoulder from a fight he got into with a rogue that had gotten past the border.

Personality: Brave and strong, Shaderiver would never hesitate to put his life on the line for any of his clanmates. He's loyal until the end of time, more willing to die than to betray his clan. At times he's egotistical and rude, getting too caught up in himself when he achieves something significant to himself. Later on, when he realizes it, he'll apologize profusely and offer to help whoever he hurt/offended with something.

Skills: (out of 10)
Fighting - 9
Hunting - 6
Climbing - 5
Running - 7
Swimming - 8
Strength - 10
Memory skills - 8

Family:
Mother - Vinesoar (deceased)
Father - Tigereye (deceased)
Littermates/siblings - Cherryrose (she-cat, deceased), Lostblaze (tom), Darkshine (she-cat)

History: Shaderiver grew up in WaterClan, devoting his life to the warrior code the day he saw his father's limp form being dragged into camp. He, his mother and littermates were told it was an ambush, five rogues that had been waiting for the patrol. Grief ridden and angry, he stormed off. The rest of that day had been spent in the elder's den, listening to their stories in hopes it would make him feel better.

When he and his siblings became warriors, he drifted away from them. Well, he did until Cherryrose died. Then suddenly he was pushed back into the past full of grief and abandonment. With his brother's help, he slowly started to come back but still hasn't fully returned to his regular self.


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Re: Shaderiver of WaterClan

Post by Aquastar on Fri Jun 09, 2017 6:14 pm

Personality needs flaws, and hunting and fighting can't both be good(and a lot of the skills are high. Maybe a few he's not so good at?)


Also the history could use a bit more detail

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Re: Shaderiver of WaterClan

Post by Echorose on Fri Jun 09, 2017 6:34 pm

Fixed it

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Re: Shaderiver of WaterClan

Post by Daisyleap on Sun Jun 11, 2017 4:37 am

The personality could still use a bit more. He still seems like a Gary-Stu to me because he just acts rude and egotistical "but doesn't mean to".

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Water- Nightfoot, Peachcloud, Salmonpelt, Seashell, Flowerbelly, Rosepaw, Shorepaw
Bright- Lynxcloud, Oceanspark, Aurorashade, Scorpionbite, Sparrowbelly, Shimmerpaw, Tumblepaw
Frost- Cloverlily, Longpaw, Scorchwind, Lunarshine, Wrenpaw, Sleetpaw, Ibispaw
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Re: Shaderiver of WaterClan

Post by Echorose on Sun Jun 11, 2017 4:44 am

Done

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Re: Shaderiver of WaterClan

Post by Daisyleap on Sun Jun 11, 2017 4:46 am

accepted

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Fire- Redstar, Hawkstep, Stormwatcher, Pebblesplash, Flamepaw, Adderpaw, Barley, Daffodilkit
Water- Nightfoot, Peachcloud, Salmonpelt, Seashell, Flowerbelly, Rosepaw, Shorepaw
Bright- Lynxcloud, Oceanspark, Aurorashade, Scorpionbite, Sparrowbelly, Shimmerpaw, Tumblepaw
Frost- Cloverlily, Longpaw, Scorchwind, Lunarshine, Wrenpaw, Sleetpaw, Ibispaw
RLK- Min, Peony, Indigo, Slash, Fleur, Blair, Tommy, Bellamy, Shark, Moon, Ryu
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