Clan Information
Season & Time of Day:
Leafbare (Dec/Jan/Feb)
Noon (12-2pm)

Weather & News:
Snow is beginning to fall on the territories, covering everything in a blanket of soft white powder. The winds are chilly coming off of the mountains, and it is suggested that everyone save their strength for hunting and training to defend your territory.
WaterClan is discussing a way to get rid of their alligator problem before leafbare truly sets in, while DuskClan is still facing an epidemic of sickness. FireClan and FrostClan have become cautious allies with BrightClan, since the prophecy contained all three Clans, and are trying to find a way to get rid of the rogues.

DuskClan

Jadestar (@Viper) - 9 lives

Deputies: Littleflower (@Daisyleap), Dragonmoon (@Aquastar)

Medicine cats: Hollyshade (@Daisyleap), {reserved}

M/c apprentices: Tulippaw (@Willowstorm), Carnelianpaw (@Viper)


FireClan

Redstar (@Daisyleap) - 8 lives

Deputies: Nightpelt (@Skybreeze), Sparkfeather (@Aquastar)

Medicine cats: Soraflight (@Leopardspots), Mudstreak(@Aquastar)

M/c apprentices: Owlpaw(@Willowstorm), Flurrypaw (@Quake)

Notice: FireClan camp is temporarily located within FrostClan due to the rogue takeover.


WaterClan

Sandstar (@Aquastar) - 7 lives

Deputies: Turtlesplash (@Leopardspots), Nightfoot (@Daisyleap)

Medicine cats: Peachcloud(@Daisyleap), Autumnsky (@Echorose)

M/c apprentices: Beechpaw (@Sorrelflight), Sunpaw (@Sunshadow)

Notice: WaterClan's Camp is currently located in their Swampy Forest due to flooding.


BrightClan

Ivorystar (@Willowstorm) - 4 lives

Deputies: Lynxcloud (@Daisyleap), Snowpuddle (@Snoo)

Medicine cats: Hazelflight (@Leopardspots), Seabreeze (@Sorrelflight)

M/c apprentices: Mistpool (@Mistpool), {reserved} (@Aquastar)


FrostClan

Dapplestar (@Leopardspots) - 2 lives

Deputies: Cloverlily (@Daisyleap), {reserved}

Medicine cats: Ivyfeather (@Aquastar), Graytail (@Skybreeze)

M/c apprentices: Falconswoop (@Willowstorm), Longpaw (@Daisyleap)
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Shaderiver of WaterClan

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Shaderiver of WaterClan

Post by Viper on Fri Jun 09, 2017 12:55 pm

Name: Shaderiver
Age: 15 moons
Gender: Male
Rank: Warrior
Clan: Water

Appearance: He's a light grey tom with a black right ear, paws, and tailtip. There's a nick in his left ear as well as a small scar on his shoulder from a fight he got into with a rogue that had gotten past the border.

Personality: Brave and strong, Shaderiver would never hesitate to put his life on the line for any of his clanmates. He's loyal until the end of time, more willing to die than to betray his clan. At times he's egotistical and rude, getting too caught up in himself when he achieves something significant to himself. Later on, when he realizes it, he'll apologize profusely and offer to help whoever he hurt/offended with something.

Skills: (out of 10)
Fighting - 9
Hunting - 6
Climbing - 5
Running - 7
Swimming - 8
Strength - 10
Memory skills - 8

Family:
Mother - Vinesoar (deceased)
Father - Tigereye (deceased)
Littermates/siblings - Cherryrose (she-cat, deceased), Lostblaze (tom), Darkshine (she-cat)

History: Shaderiver grew up in WaterClan, devoting his life to the warrior code the day he saw his father's limp form being dragged into camp. He, his mother and littermates were told it was an ambush, five rogues that had been waiting for the patrol. Grief ridden and angry, he stormed off. The rest of that day had been spent in the elder's den, listening to their stories in hopes it would make him feel better.

When he and his siblings became warriors, he drifted away from them. Well, he did until Cherryrose died. Then suddenly he was pushed back into the past full of grief and abandonment. With his brother's help, he slowly started to come back but still hasn't fully returned to his regular self.


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Re: Shaderiver of WaterClan

Post by Aquastar on Fri Jun 09, 2017 4:14 pm

Personality needs flaws, and hunting and fighting can't both be good(and a lot of the skills are high. Maybe a few he's not so good at?)


Also the history could use a bit more detail

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DC: Smallberry, Dragonmoon, Smokeheart, Graycloud, Shiningkit
FC: Sparkfeather, Mudstreak


WC: Sandstar, Aquatail, Bramblehawk, Morningleaf, Rainpaw
BC: Whitefeather, Snakelily, Glaciershard, Feathersnow, Snowpaw, Blizzardpaw, Roosterkit,Frostwing, Pantherclaw, Shadestrike
FRC: Ivyfeather, Stormshadow, Bluetail,Maplepaw, Hailpaw
RLK: Mochi, Clover, Marmalade,Flint, Rooster, Waspkit, Tigertwig
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Re: Shaderiver of WaterClan

Post by Viper on Fri Jun 09, 2017 4:34 pm

Fixed it

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Re: Shaderiver of WaterClan

Post by Daisyleap on Sun Jun 11, 2017 2:37 am

The personality could still use a bit more. He still seems like a Gary-Stu to me because he just acts rude and egotistical "but doesn't mean to".

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Daisy's Cats:
Dusk- Littleflower, Hollyshade, Blizzardtuft, Daisyleap, Gingerpatch, Grassflight, Creamtuft
Fire- Redstar, Hawkstep, Featherdusk, Stormwatcher, Pebblesplash, Flamepaw, Adderpaw, Barley, Daffodilkit
Water- Nightfoot, Peachcloud, Salmonpelt, Seashell, Flowerbelly, Rosepaw, Shorepaw
Bright- Lynxcloud, Oceanspark, Aurorashade, Scorpionbite, Sparrowbelly, Shimmerpaw, Tumblepaw
Frost- Cloverlily, Longpaw, Scorchwind, Lunarshine, Wrenpaw, Sleetpaw, Ibispaw
RLK- Min, Peony, Indigo, Slash, Fleur, Blair, Tommy, Bellamy, Shark, Moon, Ryu
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Re: Shaderiver of WaterClan

Post by Viper on Sun Jun 11, 2017 2:44 am

Done

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Re: Shaderiver of WaterClan

Post by Daisyleap on Sun Jun 11, 2017 2:46 am

accepted

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Daisy's Cats:
Dusk- Littleflower, Hollyshade, Blizzardtuft, Daisyleap, Gingerpatch, Grassflight, Creamtuft
Fire- Redstar, Hawkstep, Featherdusk, Stormwatcher, Pebblesplash, Flamepaw, Adderpaw, Barley, Daffodilkit
Water- Nightfoot, Peachcloud, Salmonpelt, Seashell, Flowerbelly, Rosepaw, Shorepaw
Bright- Lynxcloud, Oceanspark, Aurorashade, Scorpionbite, Sparrowbelly, Shimmerpaw, Tumblepaw
Frost- Cloverlily, Longpaw, Scorchwind, Lunarshine, Wrenpaw, Sleetpaw, Ibispaw
RLK- Min, Peony, Indigo, Slash, Fleur, Blair, Tommy, Bellamy, Shark, Moon, Ryu
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