Clan Information
Season & Weather
Greenleaf first moon (Summer, June)
The storm has faded to a light mist, leaving it safe for hunting. The ground is soft and the grass is a luscious green. The air is pleasantly cool, but will soon warm.
The battle has ended and medicine cats from every Clan are frantically trying to tend to the injured. A group of rogues, lead by a cat who calls herself Onyx, has driven FireClan out of their camp and is gaining more support from other rogues by the hour.

DuskClan
Russetstar(@Skybreeze) - 8 lives
Deputies: Littleflower (@Daisyleap), Scorpionclaw (@Panthermask)
Medicine cats: Hollyshade(@Daisyleap), Coldfoot(@Leopardspots)
M/c apprentices: Spiderpaw(@Skybreeze), Tulippaw (@Willowpoppy)

FireClan
Redstar(@Daisyleap) - 9 lives
Deputies: Nightpelt(@Skybreeze), Darkfrost(@Spottedleaf)
Medicine cats: Soraflight(@Leopardspots), Mudstreak (@Aquastar)
M/c apprentices: Owlpaw (@Willowpoppy), Flurrypaw (@Quake)
Notice: FireClan camp is temporarily located within FrostClan due to a sudden rogue takeover.

WaterClan
Sandstar(@Aquastar) - 9 lives
Deputies: Turtlesplash(@Leopardspots), Nightfoot(@Daisyleap)
Medicine cats: Mistleleaf(@Willowpoppy), Twistedleg(@Skybreeze)
M/c apprentices: Peachpaw(@Daisyleap), Sunpaw(@Sunshadow)
Notice: WaterClan's Camp is currently located in their Swampy Forest due to flooding.

BrightClan
Ivorystar(@Willowpoppy) - 7 lives
Deputies: Lynxcloud(@Daisyleap), Skybreeze (@Skybreeze)
Medicine cats: Hazelflight(@Leopardspots), Seabreeze(@Wishflight)
M/c apprentices: Mistpaw(@Littlelily), {reserved}

FrostClan
Dapplestar(@Leopardspots) - 5 lives
Deputies: Cloverlily(@Daisyleap), Thornsplash(@Skybreeze)
Medicine cats: Ivyfeather(@Aquastar), Greytail(@Skybreeze)
M/c apprentices: Longpaw(@Daisyleap), Falconpaw(@Willowpoppy)
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My warrior

Post by purplekitton on Thu Jun 22, 2017 5:59 am

Name:Midnightpelt
Age:10
Gender:female
Rank:warrior
Clan:Fireclan

Appearance:black

Personality:playful

Skills: (out of 10)
Fighting - 10
Hunting - 10
Climbing - 10
Running - 9
Swimming - 7
Strength - 8
Memory skills - 6

Family:
Mother - Moonclaw
Father - Flamecall
Littermates/siblings - Stormfall

History:Helped all clans
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Re: My warrior

Post by Davewing on Thu Jun 22, 2017 7:43 am

Hi purplekitton, I am Davewing. Welcome to the site and good start on your audition. It looks like it needs a little more information before it can be accepted though. Please take a look at this link if you haven't already: http://warriorclan.forumotion.com/t209-creating-a-character It will help you with creating your audition and everything required for it to be accepted.

The first thing I want to address is the age. You put 10, would that be ten years? On this site we like it in moons/months as well as years, usually. Also, the appearance is pretty small. Is she fully black? What is her eye color? Is she small, is she strong? Dose she have long whiskers?

And the personality needs both positive and negative characteristics. Think more than just "playful". You can look to other auditions for help, or feel free to contact a mod or admin for help for ideas. And the skills are all a bit high, there needs to be some low skills or your character will seem "perfect" and no one is perfect.

And finally, you can't write "Helped all clans". That does not explain anything about the cat's history, and this site does have a past timeline and plot that you may want to keep in mind.

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