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Roseblossom
Age: 23 moons
Gender:Female
Rank: Warrior
Clan: Duskclan
Appearance: Beautiful she-cat. Tan and silver tabby with black paws and white tail tip. Tall, fluffy and has pure emerald green eyes.
Personality: Kind, smart, sweet, reliable, compassionate, strong and easy to follow. She follows her heart and won't skip a beat to help a cat in trouble, whether it is a kit or a cat, to her, it doesn't matter if they are from another clan as long as they are in trouble. If she hears a cat crying out for help, she will automatically race to help, she often forgets about clan borders when trying to help others.
Skills: Swimming 2, climbing 3, speed 4, stamina 3, strength 5, intelligence 8, memory 9, herb lore 2, focus 4, cunning 5
Fighting - 9
Hunting - 10
History: Her mother was a kittypet and her father was a rouge. When her mother found that she was to have her, her sister Lily, and her brothers Storm and Spotted she begged her father to become a kittypet with her so they could raise them together, he said yes. After about 5 1/2 moons, he told her that he couldn't stay a kittypet because he was made for the outdoors. She said that if he was going to leave and become a rouge again that she had two requests. First, that he take two of their kits and second that he and the kits come and visit her and their siblings at least every 6 moons. He took Rose and her brother Spotted and raised them to be warriors. After 6 moons, their father gave them their warrior names Spottedstripe and Roseblossom. Then as he grew older, he told them that he was going to go back and live with their mother. Spottedstripe said that he would go back with him to live with their mother. Roseblossom said that she wanted to go and join the warrior clans that their father had come from and had told them so much about. Her father said to follow the rising sun and that would lead her to the clans. She said her goodbyes and left for the clans a few days later. After traveling for 2 moons she met a kind tom named Leaf and he joined her on her journey. Along the way, she taught him everything that her father taught her. After six moons, she gave him his warrior name, Leafstorm. They ended up becoming mates and finally reached the clans 3 moons after Leafstorm got his warrior name.
Family: Mother-Cream, father-Cloudspots, sister-Lily, brothers-Storm and Spottedstripe, mate-Leafstorm.
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Re: Roseblossom
First off, like Snoo said, the deputy positions are given to you by the admins(names in purple)
Second off, appearance, is she tall? Short? Fluffy or short-furred?
Third, personality. We try to have at least a short paragraph of personality, with at least one major flaw. No cat is perfect
Skills, it’s out of 10, so it would go from 1-10. You also need to add swimming, climbing, speed, stamina, strength, intelligence, memory, and herb lore. Remember, only 2 7+ skills and hunting and fighting can’t both be above 5
Lastly, just add history and family
Also please do not double post, you can edit your first one
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- A cat who's 12 moons old has probably only just become a warrior or may still be an apprentice, there's no way they'd be a deputy.
- Can you put a Clan please, they're all on the side, if she's gonna join one - probably why she has a Clan name - put her future Clan.
- "Skills: (Out of 10)"
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Her history really doesn't make much sense. If her father was a rogue he wouldn't like the Clans, and wouldn't give his kits warrior names because even though he was from them, he would understand that being a rogue means you're not a warrior any more. Why did he leave the Clans? It's all very confusing.
Her appearance and personality should be written also in full sentences, the type of ones that are in her history.
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