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"I need Chervil! Come on Fox-Hearts! I need Chervil now!"
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b a s i c s
name ; Angel ~ Angelsky
age ; 20 moons
gender ; She-cat
clan ; Duskclan
rank ;
description ; Angelsky is a brown tabby she-cat with soft silky fur and a mix of blue and green eyes. She has no disabilities, other then asthma, which makes her not able to breathe sometimes.
skills ; out of ten
Fighting - 3
Hunting - 1
Climbing - 5
Running - 6
Swimming - 2
Strength - 4
Memory skills - 9
Stamina - 4
Herb Knowledge - 8
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personality ; Loyalty. Bravery. That is all seen in a common warrior. Passion, Empathy and Compassion are all seen in a medicine cat. Angelsky shows some of these traits. She is loyal and will do anything for the cats she cares for, however she is shy and doesn't enjoy cats staring at her. She is self-conscious, hating cats judging her. She feels that cats would hate her for how she looks and her history. She shows compassion to her clans enemies, healing them at the cost of her clan-mates trust. She sometimes can be very silly, especially when she is extremely happy and around friends, however she doesn't think she deserves to be happy after what happened to her mother. She isn't silly when she isn't happy. She is kind to those she knows and loves kits.
history ; Angelsky has a hard history. Raised by rogues, she was taught it was kill or be killed. She was taught herbs by her mother. She thought peace was possible between the clans, however the rogue leader, her father believed otherwise and out of rage, attacked her. Her mother took the blunt of the blows and died in the battle. She ran and tried to find shelter, pursued by her father and his rogues. She couldn't believe it. Her father viewed her as a traitor and gave her one last chance to prove herself when he caught her. She had to kill her best friend, Ghost. She had seen her father kill her mother. She didn't want the same to happen to her. She refused to kill Ghost and her father killed him in rage. She felt as if Ghost's death was her fault and ran again, running into Duskclan territory. She was caught again by the rogue and screamed for help, before Jadeleaf and her patrol found them and Jadeleaf herself killed the rogue. She then turned to Angel and asked what happened and Angel spoke of her hard history, head down with shame. Jadeleaf took Angel to the clan and Russetstar kept her prisoner until a moon later when Jadeleaf became leader and the medicine cat offered her the position, after she helped with some injuries. Angel couldnt believe it and accepted. That night Soulclan visited her and Coldfoot thanked her for taking his role. She was given no prophecies, but she was sent back to Duskclan, where she woke up to the medicine cat den, when she and Hollyshade who went over the herbs in there. She became a full medicine cat and her name was changed into Angelsky, for her flight of passage from rogue to Medicine cat. She and Jadestar are very close. She trusts Jadestar with her life and feels in depth of her, however Jadestar doesn't feel that way and tells her constantly that she owes nothing.
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r o m a n t i c s
crush ; None
mate ; None
kits ; Lol No
kin ; Father ~ Demon
Mother ~ Helen
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m i s c.
sexuality ; Straight
favourite prey ; None
favourite season ; None
favourite scent ; Daisy
zodiac/theme song ; What doesn't Kill me Makes me Stronger
smells like ; Caramel
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Aquastar wrote:The personality doesn’t have enough flaws, I don’t see any other than her hating being called a loner or whatever
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Your flaws need to go in depthWillowstorm wrote:Aquastar wrote:The personality doesn’t have enough flaws, I don’t see any other than her hating being called a loner or whatever
Also the personality doesn’t really make sense it’s all over the place
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I'm sorry but I cant think of any other ways to improve it
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Willowstorm wrote:Her personality kind of doesn't make sense now?
bump please @Hela the position will be given away to someone else if this is not completed properly.
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