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Flamefeather / Blueflame- Posts : 8
Age : 21
Location : this is private
Flamefeather/Blueflame's audition:
Fri Jan 19, 2018 7:00 am
Name:Blueflame
Age:13 moons
Gender:she-cat
Rank:warrior
Clan:Fireclan
Appearance:blue-ish grey shorthair pelt, with orange flamelike markings coming up from paws, muzzle, eyes, back, and tail. sparkling turqoise eyes, with scar on left side eye.
Personality:she can be playful, silly and helpful when being with others, but at times, she can be bossy, and overly confident, causing her to fail at things. she is also very senseful, which in times can be good.but when none of these are showing, she can be sorrowful, because of her past, in despite of her friend's efforts.
Skills: (out of 10)
Fighting - 4
Hunting - 5 1\4
Climbing - 5
Running - 7
Swimming - 3
Strength - 4 1\2
Gender:she-cat
Rank:warrior
Clan:Fireclan
Appearance:blue-ish grey shorthair pelt, with orange flamelike markings coming up from paws, muzzle, eyes, back, and tail. sparkling turqoise eyes, with scar on left side eye.
Personality:she can be playful, silly and helpful when being with others, but at times, she can be bossy, and overly confident, causing her to fail at things. she is also very senseful, which in times can be good.but when none of these are showing, she can be sorrowful, because of her past, in despite of her friend's efforts.
Skills: (out of 10)
Fighting - 4
Hunting - 5 1\4
Climbing - 5
Running - 7
Swimming - 3
Strength - 4 1\2
Stamina -4
Memory skills - 4
Family:
Mother - unknown
Father - unknown
Littermates/siblings - none
History:when she was a kit, her old clan was in a big war with another. just as her mother had her, she was killed. her father took her to a bush in Fireclan territory, then left her.Blueflame spent the rest of her moons as a kit learning to hunt and hide, when one day a Fireclan warrior found her, and she had lived there ever since.
Memory skills - 4
Family:
Mother - unknown
Father - unknown
Littermates/siblings - none
History:when she was a kit, her old clan was in a big war with another. just as her mother had her, she was killed. her father took her to a bush in Fireclan territory, then left her.Blueflame spent the rest of her moons as a kit learning to hunt and hide, when one day a Fireclan warrior found her, and she had lived there ever since.
- Flamefeather / Blueflame
- Posts : 8
Age : 21
Location : this is private
Re: Flamefeather/Blueflame's audition:
Fri Jan 19, 2018 7:01 am
thx! (i would delete this mssg but i dunno how to pls help i would if i could. theres no option to delete it tho)
DavewingForum Veteran
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Age : 24
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Re: Flamefeather/Blueflame's audition:
Fri Jan 19, 2018 8:39 am
Alright, you got a good start to an audition here, but there are a few things I'd like to point out.
First of all, the skills you should think as like this:
1-3 lower than average
4-6 average
7-10 above average
We want most of the skills to range in the 4-6, as not every cat is perfect. Having a skill up in the 10's means that they are the best of the best, and we usually don't allow that on this site. Also, taking into consideration of the Clan might help too. To give a cat such a high running skill, they would likely be more of a BrightClan cat, not FrostClan.
Another thing I'd like to touch on is that when creating a personality, we like to have a couple positive, neutral, and negative characteristics. Please type out the personality in full sentences as well. If you need help with coming up with ideas, I suggest looking at the already accepted auditions.
There is a button at the top right of your posts that will let you edit the post. Please do not post two posts in a row, as that is not allowed on the site and you will get a warning. So when you are ready to make changes to the audition, use the button to edit.
I'll let you make those changes, and post telling everyone when you are done. Then, we can look it over again and see if anything else might need fixing.
First of all, the skills you should think as like this:
1-3 lower than average
4-6 average
7-10 above average
We want most of the skills to range in the 4-6, as not every cat is perfect. Having a skill up in the 10's means that they are the best of the best, and we usually don't allow that on this site. Also, taking into consideration of the Clan might help too. To give a cat such a high running skill, they would likely be more of a BrightClan cat, not FrostClan.
Another thing I'd like to touch on is that when creating a personality, we like to have a couple positive, neutral, and negative characteristics. Please type out the personality in full sentences as well. If you need help with coming up with ideas, I suggest looking at the already accepted auditions.
There is a button at the top right of your posts that will let you edit the post. Please do not post two posts in a row, as that is not allowed on the site and you will get a warning. So when you are ready to make changes to the audition, use the button to edit.
I'll let you make those changes, and post telling everyone when you are done. Then, we can look it over again and see if anything else might need fixing.
- Flamefeather / Blueflame
- Posts : 8
Age : 21
Location : this is private
Re: Flamefeather/Blueflame's audition:
Sat Jan 20, 2018 12:50 pm
wait, you mean i will post ive edited it, or you will post that im now allowed to rp?Davewing wrote:
I'll let you make those changes, and post telling everyone when you are done. Then, we can look it over again and see if anything else might need fixing.
QuakeAudition Instructor
- Posts : 6480
Age : 18
Location : england!
Re: Flamefeather/Blueflame's audition:
Sun Jan 21, 2018 2:22 am
you post here once you've edited it and someone will post that you're allowed to rp (;
- Flamefeather / Blueflame
- Posts : 8
Age : 21
Location : this is private
Re: Flamefeather/Blueflame's audition:
Sun Jan 21, 2018 7:09 am
ok ive edited it (thx Valkyrie !)
gimme your estimate
gimme your estimate
- Flamefeather / Blueflame
- Posts : 8
Age : 21
Location : this is private
Re: Flamefeather/Blueflame's audition:
Sat Feb 03, 2018 9:43 am
i will wait for your choice.
- QuakeAudition Instructor
- Posts : 6480
Age : 18
Location : england!
Re: Flamefeather/Blueflame's audition:
Sat Feb 03, 2018 10:19 am
oh oops sorry
you can rp with her now : D
you can rp with her now : D
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