Firekit-paw-Daisy audition

Welcome to the site, Firedaisy. It looks like you got yourself a good start here, but there is still more to add before it can be accepted.

The first thing I see is the appearance. The appearance has a good start, and is realistic. A lot of the time though we like to know more of the unique characteristics, such as fur length or whisker length. Are they really muscular, or do they have a weaker build? Think of questions like that.

The next thing is the personality. Try to have two or three good characteristics, maybe a couple neutral ones, and around two more negative traits. It gives your cat more of a personality, and no one is perfect.

As for skills, we want to see the skills she'll have as a warrior, even if she is still a kit. Think of 1-3 as the worst, 4-6 as normal or average, and 7-10 as the best.

And lastly, the family and history. As a kit, though she might not have a family that the Clans know of, she still has one. What happened to her mother and father? Not having littermates is okay, but please list the mothers name at the least. Did she die? Did she abandon her kit?

This might seem like a lot to change, but you do have a good start. I suggest looking at already accepted auditions if you need ideas or help. You can also contact me, a mod, or an admin if you have a question too. Again, welcome to the site.

Ok I edited it

It's looking better, but there are still a couple things I'd fix.

The first I see is the skills. Most of them are above 5 or 6, and that means that she is really good at those skills. However, we don't want perfect cats. Most skills will be around 4-6, and we want one or two below 5. Since your cat is going to be in FireClan, I suggest lowering swimming or stamina.

And the next thing is that history and family still needs to be added to. We like a little information about the parents at least, especially for a kit. I told you in my last post to please give the mother a name, and a reason for abandoning her kit in Clan territory.