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Clan Information
Season & Time of Day:
Green-leaf (Jun-Jul-Aug)
Mid-day (2-4 pm)
Chapter: One

Weather & News:
The intense Green-leaf sun bears down on the Clans in this, their darkest hour.
An earthquake has shaken the forest, destroying the territories as the Clans know it and killing dozens of cats. Forced to band together, the cats journey in search of a new home.

DuskClan

Leader: Robinstar (@Quake)
Deputies: Scorchthicket (@Feather)
Medicine cat: Tulipsnow (@Willowstorm)

Medicine apprentices:

FireClan

Leader: Finchstar (@Willowstorm)
Deputies: Floralight (@Jack)
Medicine cat: Tanglepath (@Leopardspots)
Medicine apprentices:

WaterClan

Leader: Sharkstar (@Willowstorm)
Deputies: Rosefeather (@Metzi)
Medicine cat: Autumnsky (@Feather)

Medicine apprentices: Sunshadow (@Jack), Peachpaw (@Daisyleap)

BrightClan

Leader: Stagstar (@Leopardspots)
Deputies: Cricketsong (@Daisy)
Medicine cat:
Medicine apprentices:

FrostClan

Leader: Poolstar (@Feather)
Deputies: Wolfwatcher (@Jack)
Medicine cat: Quartzshine (@Metzi)
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Fri Feb 23, 2018 12:45 am
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"I'm so sorry, Swiftclaw..."
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b a s i c s

name ; Brokenfang ~ Brokenpaw ~ Brokenkit
age ; 13 moons
gender ; Male
clan ; Brightclan
rank ; New warrior
description ; A brown tabby tom with hazel eyes and a medium coat length. Larger then most cats, however he is not that large. He has large paws, causing in him tripping over most of the time.
skills ; out of ten
Fighting - 6
Hunting - 5
Climbing - 4
Running - 6
Swimming - 5
Strength - 8
Memory skills - 7
Stamina - 7


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b e h i n d t h e c a t

personality ; A very clumsy cat, Brokenfang is. He was named for the broken tabby markings on him, that his mother loved. He loves his sister and feels sorry for her. He is very loyal and if there is a chance to save one he loves, he will take it, even if it takes him down the wrong path. He is snappy. He studies and uses a form of fighting unlike that of another cat, which includes leaping, slashes and charging, a quick difficalt way of fighting which is a aggressive form of fighting his mentor made up. Even though many cats know this, he tends to stick to it, no mater what. He tends to snap when other cats make fun of cats, since he believes it is not kind.
history ; Brokenkit wanted to help his sister no matter what. He was there when she experienced the fight and tried to keep her away, however whatever he did, it could not effect it. He grew up with the knowledge that he had failed his sister, blaming himself. He became an apprentice, working hard despite his clumsiness, which lead to his mentor deciding that he wasn't worth training and passed him along to another cat. This cat taught him ways of fighting and hunting even he did not know, asking him to choose his own way. Naturally he chose the way of his trainer, which was a good thing, as the fighting style was acrobatic and also very offensive, rather then defensive, which put his large paws to use. He became a warrior and requested the name 'Brokenfang' in honour of his mentor, who taught him everything.

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r o m a n t i c s

crush ; None
mate ; None
kits ; None
mentor ; Fangclaw
kin ; Mother: Fiercelily (living)
Father: Snakestrike (living)
Sister: Swiftclaw (@Pkd163)

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m i s c.

sexuality ; Straight
favourite prey ; None
favourite season ; Green leaf
favourite scent ; His sisters - Smells of the grasses of the plains
zodiac/theme song ; Get off of my back (Spirit) and/or I will always return (Spirit)

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Last edited by Orion on Sun Mar 18, 2018 1:58 pm; edited 3 times in total
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Fri Feb 23, 2018 2:57 am
1) add more flaws to him, sure he’s snappy but go in depth, Why is he snappy? Is he snappy to everyone?

2) also clans already learn aerodynamics
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Fri Feb 23, 2018 7:09 pm
Finished
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Fri Feb 23, 2018 7:45 pm
More depth in personality, and all clans learn the same moves that are already a bit of everything, including quick and aggressive
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Fri Feb 23, 2018 8:17 pm
a brightclan cat with a running skill of 2 would literally get kicked out. Their Clan is known for running. Literally.
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Thu Mar 15, 2018 2:15 pm
Fixed
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Sun Mar 18, 2018 5:54 am
What is a medium coat
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Sun Mar 18, 2018 1:51 pm
Its not long and not short
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Sun Mar 18, 2018 1:52 pm
so a medium length coat, then?
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Sun Mar 18, 2018 1:57 pm
Yep, I'll quickly fix that
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