stormwing of Waterclan

name=stormwing
rank= warrior
clan= Waterclan
age/gender= she-cat/ 18 moons
appearance= stormwing is a light grey she-cat with long claws, and one black paw. stormwing is very lean, and small for her age. stormwing has short fur, and a pink nose.
parents ( these are not real cats) mother= stormheart  father= lionfrost.
siblings= none

past life= Stormwing was born in a rouge group, but was sent to Duskclan as a spy, but left Duskclan because the clan figured out they where spies for a rouge group, and tried to kill her and her family, they killed her family but not her, after this, she desided not to go back to the rouge group.This all happened when she was a newly made apprentice. After she got away from Duskclan, she ran across the Waterclan border, stormwing was taken into Waterclan, and lived the rest off her life there. Not much has happened to her in her warrior life so far.

personality= . Stormwing is headstrong, and always believes in whats right. She tries to give everyone a fair chance, and give everyone a second chance. She is very popular in waterclan because she is so nice, and has many friends. she is also a brave young she-cat. stormwing hates being bossed around, and only really lessons to senor warriors and the leader.



skills fighting= 10/10    running= 7/10    hunting= 4/10    sneak attacks= 6/10   climbing= 2/10   swimming= 1/10 herb knowledge= 5/10   stamina= 8/10
memory=  6/10

EchoClan never once had a crazy leader and WaterClan is many miles away from EchoClan.

lol, ok, witch clan is close to waterclan, witch clan had a crazy leader?

SunClan, or you know it as DuskClan! From like 22-11 moons ago, Viperstar was their leader! He's dead now though.

so, was in duskclan, duskclan had crazy leader?

Not really.... just read my recap https://warriorclan.forumotion.com/t3896-history-of-the-clans

ok, fixed  it

Heart- isn't a prefix acceptable for the mother

Needs memory, herb lore, stamina, etc, etc.

How is she nice and gives everyone a fair chance if she has anger problems that are hard to control?

Daisyleap wrote:Heart- isn't a prefix acceptable for the mother

Needs memory, herb lore, stamina, etc, etc.

How is she nice and gives everyone a fair chance if she has anger problems that are hard to control?

Still need to be fixed.
Also, you just deleted the whole sentence of that from her personality, now she needs more.

done, I think I fixed it

The history could use a little work, but