:{+ Seakit/dawn - Larkkit/strike - Tealkit/fur - Bluefeather +}:

Sun Oct 30, 2016 4:39 am

~~Seakit || Seapaw || Seadawn || Scarredpelt~~

~~She~~

~~DuskClan~~

~~5 Moons~~

~~Kit~~

Seakit is a stubborn, sissy, and fretful she-cat who acts more like a tom. She won't go back on her word and always speaks her mind. She can be rude at times, but only when she's aggrivated. She hates the thought of apprentices, and is spoiled to the ends of SoulClan. She is the total opposite of her brother, Larkkit. She loves to hunt and eat, but if she eats two prey, she only brings back one. If someone tried to argue with her, she will mother to deal with it. Overall, she's a brat.

Seakit is a beautiful, sleek furred stone-gray cat with white/black/brown stripes and spots. She has large amber eyes, and white socks. Her tail is tipped with white, and her fur is almost always groomed. She's tall, and muscular. She's lean and well-fed. She has sharp, thorn-like teeth and long black claws. She is fluffy, like her father, and has long legs, like her mother.

~~Hunting | 5/10 || Fighting | 7/10 || Swimming | 3/10 || Running | 5/10 || Stamina | 6/10 || Intelligence | 8/10 || Temper | 1/10~~

~~Parents~~

~~Bluefeather | Alive | Sick | Mother~~

~~Thornfur | Alive | Well | Father~~

~~Siblings~~

~~Larkkit | Alive | Well | Second litter | Younger brother~~

~~Featherkit | Deceased | Death caused by sickness | Second litter | Younger sister~~

~~??? | Deceased | Death at birth. Cause unknown | Second litter | Younger sister~~

~~Tealkit | Alive | Well | First litter | Twin brother~~

~~Blackkit | Deceased | Death caused by fox | First litter | Twin brother~~

Seakit was kind and caring, not stubborn nor brave, until her brother died when she was two moons old. The night before his death, almost pursuaded Seakit and Tealkit to go with him into the forest. The next dusk, his body was found far from camp. About three moons later, Bluefeather and Thornfur had a second litter. This litter also had three kits. The smallest she-kit died at birth for unknown reasons, and later when Seakit turned five moons, Featherkit and her mother Bluefeather became sick. Later, again, Featherkit died because of sickness. Now, only Larkkit, Tealkit and her are alive. Thornfur is struggling to take care of them all while Bluefeather is nearing her death.

ACCEPTED

~~Larkkit || Larkpaw || Larkstrike || Fallenstrike~~

~~Tom~~

~~DuskClan~~

~~1 Moon~~

~~Kit~~

Larkkit is a kind, brave, and idiot tom who won't go back on his word. He is the least favourite out of his siblings, so he hangs out of the nursery and in the shade of it instead. He loves mice, and other ground-like prey. He hates water, because of his fur. He can be rude though, and he can't control his temper well. He sometimes speak his mind, and will be kinda flirty with she-cats when he grows up.

Larkkit is a brown, short-haired, long legged cat with large amber eyes. He has white/black/gray stripes. He's lean and tall. His tail is long, and striped all the way down to the tip. His fur is always messy, and he isn't groomed. His teeth are long, and his claws are short and look like they will only prick you. His paws are white, and his legs/stomach is light brown.

~~Huntkit | 4/10 || Fighting | 6/10 || Swimming | 1/10 || Running | 8/10 || Stamina | 7/10 || Intelligence | 3/10 || Temper | 3/10 ||~~

~~Parents~~

~~Bluefeather | Alive | Sick | Mother~~

~~Thornfur | Alive | Well | Father~~

~~Siblings~~

Featherkit | Deceased | Death caused by sickness | Second litter | Twin sister
??? | Deceased | Death at birth. Cause unknown | Second litter | Twin sister
Tealkit | Alive | Well | First litter | Older brother
Blackkit | Deceased | Death caused by fox | First litter | Older brother
Seakit | Alive | Well | First litter | Older sister

He was never really aware how brutal Blackkit's death was, but he was devestaved when his sister, Featherkit died. He never really clung onto her death. Most of the memories he can remember in his life was his mother shouting at him, saying that he did this wrong, did that wrong. Hsi father, Thornfur, favoured him. He didn't mind that hsi mother didn't like him. He loves the thought of becoming an apprentice, and even a leader. He doesn't really like the other clans, other than FireClan, for no reason. When his mother became sick, he stayed away from her.

ACCEPTED

Tealkit || Tealpaw || Tealfur || Brokenleg

Tom

DuskClan

5 Moons

Kit

Tealkit is a quiet, shy, anti-social chocolate red smarty (WHY). He's not fond of either of his parents, or his siblings. He hates the other kits in the nursery, and usually hangs out with the apprentices. You might see him smile once or twice, but never after that. He's a ~~trump~~ grump, and always thinks he's better than others. He's ~~Blackpaw's DuskClan version~~ anti-social because he thinks he's to good to talk to. He will grow up to flirt with the she-cats, and be alot softer than when he was an apprentice.

Tealkit is a blue-gray (This is allowed since Bluestar was a thing) muscular tom with long legs like both his parents. He has black socks and white toes, and his tail is rounded off at the tip. His muzzle is long and black, and his teeth are sharp. His claws are long and black, and resemble a talon in shape. His fur is groomed, and he has transparent black/white/brown stripes/spots. He has amber/green eyes.

Hunting | 7/10 || Fighting | 8/10 || Swimming | 1/10 || Running | 5/10 || Stamina | 4/10 || Intelligence | 8/10 || Temper 2/10

Parents

Bluefeather | Alive | Sick | Mother
Thornfur | Alive | Well | Father

Siblings
Larkkit | Alive | Well | Second litter | Younger brother
Featherkit | Deceased | Death caused by sickness | Second litter | Younger sister
??? | Deceased | Death at birth. Cause unknown | Second litter | Younger sister
Blackkit | Deceased | Death caused by fox | First litter | Twin brother
Seakit | Alive | Well | First litter | Twin sister

Just like his sister, he was kind and loving until he was two moons old, and his brother Blackkit died. He wasn't bothered by it until he was three moons old, and he overheard his mother talking to his father about a second litter. He got really frustrated, thinking that they were just pushing Blackkit's death away, but the second litter was really just an accident. He grew up quiet and snobby, and always hanged out at the apprentices den since he was going to be there in a moon anyways. He pushes his siblings and parents aside, and blabbs behind their backs.

Bluekit || Bluepaw || Bluefeather ||

Bluefeather is a sassy, apprentice acting she-cat with a temper of ZERO. She will cause a sissy fit if her mate disagrees, and will always turn her head if she doesn't get her way. She's only loving to Tealkit and Seakit, who she both loves to the end of the world. She hates kits other than that, and is usually complaining to Russetstar asking if she culd move back to the warriors den.

Bluefeather is a beautiful blue-gray she cat with stone-gray patches covering her. Sh has white paws, and a white underbelly. She has tabbied-white fur, and a white tipped tail. Her teeth are thorn-like, and her claws are long. She has long legs, and a long muzzle. Her muzle is white, and her eyes are a blazing amber, and are sharp. Her ears have tufts, and her chest is fluffy. Her fur is groomed, and is short (Other than her chest).

Hunting | 2/10 || Fighting | 2/10 || Swimming | 8/10 || Running | 4/10 || Stamina | 1/10 || Intelligence | 9/10 || Temper | 0/10

Parents

Wolftooth | Deceaced | Death caused by old age | Father

Grayspot | Deceaced | Death caused of old age | Mother

Siblings

Darkfur | Alive | First litter | Brother (OPEN)

Lightshell | Alive | First litter | Sister (OPEN)

Mate

Thornfur | Alive | Well

Kits

Bluekit was born to a family that spoiled her and her siblings one hundred percent of the time. She met Thornkit when he was stealing moss from the leaders den. After that, they became friends. When she became an apprentice with ~~idiotface~~ Thornpaw, she became more sassy and sensative. Her parents moved to the elders den, and later when her and Thornfur were warriors, Thornfur confessed. They became mates, and later had a first litter. When Blackkit died, she was devestated and later found out she was having a second litter by accident. She became sick when they were born, and infected one of them. Her kit later died, and that's where we are now!

Sun Oct 30, 2016 6:01 am

I don't know if it's necessary for me to say this, but Seakit wouldn't be a purebred Russian blue cat unless she had been a kittypet before. Plus a queen with kits to immediately get pregnant right after she had her first litter probably wouldn't happen. Cats are pregnant for more than two months, meaning she would have been pregnant immediately after her first litter were born. Also I don't think it's necessary to kill off all of her siblings but one. It's just not necessary.

Sun Oct 30, 2016 2:58 pm

Panthermask wrote:I don't know if it's necessary for me to say this, but Seakit wouldn't be a purebred Russian blue cat unless she had been a kittypet before. Plus a queen with kits to immediately get pregnant right after she had her first litter probably wouldn't happen. Cats are pregnant for more than two months, meaning she would have been pregnant immediately after her first litter were born. Also I don't think it's necessary to kill off all of her siblings but one. It's just not necessary.

Fixed. :3

Sun Oct 30, 2016 3:05 pm

It's still the same?

Sun Oct 30, 2016 3:39 pm

Panthermask wrote:It's still the same?

NOWW It's fixed. I was editing. XD

Sun Oct 30, 2016 10:48 pm

Seakit;

Larkkit; personality is a bit of a Mary-sue. Too positive, maybe change that a little.

Mon Oct 31, 2016 2:39 pm

Mkay. (Mary-sue XD)

Mon Oct 31, 2016 8:06 pm

Wed Nov 02, 2016 9:53 am

Tealkit; basically grumpy and anti-social. More person a needed...

Also I just saw something; why do they all have a 4th name????

Wed Nov 02, 2016 12:40 pm

Sometimes my OCs have a fourth name if something happens to them, either that or it's an elder name. When Tealfur is five years old, he will break his leg so badly that he'll have to go to the elders den early. Lark falls off a tree and is named Fallenstrike. These are all OCs from my own OC books soz idk if I should leave them out or not. Bluefeather dies a warrior so she gets no special name HAHAHAHAHAHAH

Also, Idk how to change Tealkit's personality since that's all he is... I'll try, but you probs won't get more than two more sentences.

Wed Nov 02, 2016 7:58 pm

That's fine lol, but you might want to make more cats that DON'T so it's balanced out.

Bluefeather; audition accepted

Tealkit;

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