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Mid-day (2-4 pm)
Chapter: One

Weather & News:
The intense Green-leaf sun bears down on the Clans in this, their darkest hour.
An earthquake has shaken the forest, destroying the territories as the Clans know it and killing dozens of cats. Forced to band together, the cats journey in search of a new home.

DuskClan

Leader: Robinstar (@Quake)
Deputies: Scorchthicket (@Feather)
Medicine cat: Tulipsnow (@Willowstorm)

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FireClan

Leader: Finchstar (@Willowstorm)
Deputies: Floralight (@Jack)
Medicine cat: Tanglepath (@Leopardspots)
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WaterClan

Leader: Sharkstar (@Willowstorm)
Deputies: Rosefeather (@Metzi)
Medicine cat: Autumnsky (@Feather)

Medicine apprentices: Sunshadow (@Jack), Peachpaw (@Daisyleap)

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Leader: Stagstar (@Leopardspots)
Deputies: Cricketsong (@Daisy)
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Leader: Poolstar (@Feather)
Deputies: Wolfwatcher (@Jack)
Medicine cat: Quartzshine (@Metzi)
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Mon Nov 28, 2016 9:12 am
 Swanwatcher White_cat_with_green_eyes_by_reconreno-d5kkolm
.: Swanwatcher :.

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b a s i c s

name ; Swanwatcher
age ; 29 moons
gender ; She-cat

clan ; Waterclan
description ; A pure white cat with long silky fur. She has green eyes and a lean body. Her tail is long and fluffy while her paws are large and great for swimming. Her claws are short but sharp and her ears are large.

Skills ; Out of ten
Memory: 5
Stamina: 4
Speed: 7
Fighting: 1
Hunting: 9
Climbing: 3
Swimming: 10
Motherness: 10
Strength: 1
Herb lore: 1

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personality ; A kind mother, Swanwatcher always has her kits needs at heart. She is stubborn and ignorant cat to orders when caring for her kits, as well as spoiling those kits. She is very adventurous, always trying new things. She is also what some say, a Mouse-brain. She loves helping others with problems and will always be there to help.


history ; When Swankit was born, everyone could see that she was different. She would always hang out with the elder cats. When she was only 3 moons, her brother Icekit, was killed by a fox when Icekit had snuck out of camp. She became a apprentice under the name Swanpaw, with the mentor Stoneclaw. She trained as hard as she could, training with her mentor and fellow apprentice Gullpaw. She soon became a warrior under the name Swanwatcher, while Gullpaw became Gullface. She became Gullface's mate and is expecting their kits.
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r o m a n t i c s

crush ; Gullface
mate ; Gullface
kits ; Soon
kin ; Mother= Cloudwater, Open

Father= Blanket (Kittypet)open
Brother = Icekit, dead from fox
Sister = Snowkit, stillborn


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sexuality ;Straight
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Swanwatcher Empty Re: Swanwatcher

Mon Nov 28, 2016 9:28 am
It doesn't even say her Clan or skills??
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Mon Nov 28, 2016 9:28 am
And she also has the personality traits of an apprentice.
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Swanwatcher Empty Re: Swanwatcher

Mon Nov 28, 2016 9:30 am
Wow wow wow guys!


It didn't SAVE! So I made the skills and it didn't save
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Swanwatcher Empty Re: Swanwatcher

Mon Nov 28, 2016 9:31 am
You just told us it was finished on the chat, chill out, Lily.
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Mon Nov 28, 2016 9:31 am
It's not a "WIP" anymore so we're just giving you advice that you missed. No need to be rude.
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Swanwatcher Empty Re: Swanwatcher

Mon Nov 28, 2016 9:32 am
It didn't save. I posted and it didn't save. Fixing it now


And daisy, I wasn't trying to be rude
I was angry with the thing for not saving XD
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Mon Nov 28, 2016 9:33 am
It comes across as rude in writing, Lily. Please just control your anger or make it clear that it's not towards us.
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Swanwatcher Empty Re: Swanwatcher

Mon Nov 28, 2016 9:37 am
Ok finished!
She is as posed to be childish.
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Swanwatcher Empty Re: Swanwatcher

Mon Nov 28, 2016 9:38 am
Then she wouldn't be a good mother if she was childish, those two don't go well together
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Swanwatcher Empty Re: Swanwatcher

Mon Nov 28, 2016 9:42 am
That better?
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Mon Nov 28, 2016 10:24 am
You need to fix the following things~


  • She still doesn't even have a Clan?
  • She needs a longer appearance
  • You can't just put "nope" for kin, as it's been told to you many times that a family is needed for cat auditions
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Mon Nov 28, 2016 10:27 am
That better?
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Swanwatcher Empty Re: Swanwatcher

Mon Nov 28, 2016 10:28 am
I don't think stalker is an acceptable suffix. Also you can't have 100000000 as a level.
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Swanwatcher Empty Re: Swanwatcher

Mon Nov 28, 2016 10:46 am
Fixed
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Swanwatcher Empty Re: Swanwatcher

Mon Nov 28, 2016 10:18 pm
Lower some of the skills, you can't have most things as 9 or 10
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Mon Nov 28, 2016 10:19 pm
That better?
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Wed Nov 30, 2016 8:46 am
Littlelily wrote:
Swanwatcher White_cat_with_green_eyes_by_reconreno-d5kkolm
.: Swanwatcher :.
"When I swim, it's better then flying!"
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b a s i c s

name ; Swanwatcher
age ; 29 moons
gender ; She-cat

clan ; WaterClan
description ; A pure white cat with long silky fur. She has green eyes and a lean body. Her tail is long and fluffy while her paws are large and great for swimming. Her claws are short but sharp and her ears are large.

Skills ; Out of ten
Memory: 5
Stamina: 4
Speed: 7
Fighting: 1
Hunting: 9
Climbing: 3
Swimming: 10
Motherness: 10

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b e h i n d  t h e  cat

personality ; A kind mother, Swanwatcher always has her kits' needs at heart. She is stubborn and ignores orders when caring for her kits, as well as she tends to spoiling those kits. She is very adventurous, always trying new things. She is also what some say, a Mouse-brain. She loves helping others with problems and will always be there to help.


history ; When Swankit was born, everyone could see that she was different. She would always hang out with the elder cats. She became a apprentice under the name Swanpaw, with the mentor Stoneclaw. She trained as hard as she could, training with her mentor and fellow apprentice Gullpaw. She soon became a warrior under the name Swanwatcher, while Gullpaw became Gullface. She became Gullface's mate and is now expecting his kits.
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r o m a n t i c s

crush ; Gullface
mate ; Gullface
kits ; Soon
kin ; Mother= Cloudwater, Open

Father= Blanket (Kittypet)open
Brother = Icekit, dead from fox
Sister = Snowkit, stillborn


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sexuality ;Straight
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Corrections in purple Razz
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Wed Nov 30, 2016 10:18 am
Fixed
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Swanwatcher Empty Re: Swanwatcher

Thu Dec 01, 2016 5:03 pm
Is watcher even an acceptable suffix??
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Swanwatcher Empty Re: Swanwatcher

Thu Dec 01, 2016 5:04 pm
It is, Aqua

Also there is no mention of Icekit's death in her history
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Fri Dec 02, 2016 10:23 am
Fixed
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Swanwatcher Empty Re: Swanwatcher

Fri Dec 02, 2016 10:28 am
Doesn't really make sense, though. No fox is gonna get near the nursery, so maybe if he snuck out of camp it would.
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Fri Dec 02, 2016 10:32 am
Fixed
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Swanwatcher Empty Re: Swanwatcher

Fri Dec 02, 2016 5:30 pm
I just want to say that her quote makes no sense. 
"When I swimming, its better than flying!" 
It makes her seem as if she's flies before o.O
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Swanwatcher Empty Re: Swanwatcher

Sat Dec 03, 2016 12:38 am
Aqua, the quotes don't matter. The quotes are their to give me some fun
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Swanwatcher Empty Re: Swanwatcher

Sat Dec 03, 2016 1:45 am
Well I'm going to be the picky admin of the day so either explain it to me, or not have the cat say it at all.
Also is it supposed to fit with the name?
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Swanwatcher Empty Re: Swanwatcher

Sat Dec 03, 2016 9:09 am
Aqua.... She isn't going to say it.... The quotes are for prettying up..
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Swanwatcher Empty Re: Swanwatcher

Sat Dec 03, 2016 9:10 am
A quote is something the cat says, like a catchphrase.
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Swanwatcher Empty Re: Swanwatcher

Sun Dec 04, 2016 11:10 am
Better?
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Swanwatcher Empty Re: Swanwatcher

Tue Dec 06, 2016 3:09 am
I don't know if I count 'motherness' as a skill..
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Swanwatcher Empty Re: Swanwatcher

Tue Dec 06, 2016 4:19 am
Strength and Herb Lore are needed in skills
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Swanwatcher Empty Re: Swanwatcher

Tue Dec 06, 2016 10:21 am
Herb lore is actually not needed, just strength/stamina.
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Tue Dec 06, 2016 10:23 am
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Tue Dec 06, 2016 12:59 pm
I'm going to accept it.

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