Blizzardkit

Name: Blizzardkit (Futurely Blizzardtail)

Gender: Tabby-Tom

Age: Unborn

Clan: FrostClan

Appearance: He is light gray with dark gray stripes, and wide, intelligent, ice blue eyes. He is wiry, with a short, thick coat, long whiskers, and strong hind legs. He was born with slightly blurry vision in right eye. He has a few faint scars on left hind leg from tumbling into thorns when he was a kit. 

Personality:
  Pros: He is kind, good at making his Clanmates come out of their shell and feel better. He is also funny when times are dark, and strong willed, not giving up secrets easily.
  Cons: Nervous/jumpy, is scared at the smallest unexpected noises and can occasionally have the personality not unlike a blizzard (Furious, loud, and raging)
  Neutral: Passionate, not easily persuaded to the other side of an arguement, usually quiet unless he has an opinion he'd like to voice or if he's directly spoken too.
  Likes:Snow, ice, mint, sound of rushing water, hares, night, and squirrels
  Dislikes:Dislikes: Deer, Foxes, Twolegs, rain, sunrise(morning), and birds

Skills (out of 10)
  (Hunting): 7.5
  (Fighting): 5.5
  (Climbing): 6
  (Agility): 8.5
  (Strength): 4
  (Speed): 9
  (Stamina): 3
  (Stealth): 8
  (Memory): 4
  (Herb Knowledge): 2
  (Leadership skills): 4.5
  (Tracking): 4.5

Family: 
(Foster Mother): Stormshadow
(Foster Father): Redstripe
(Foster Siblings): Bubblekit, Coalkit, Owlkit, Poppykit, and Sunkit
(Mother): Cloudberry (Deceased)
(Father): Twigtalon (Deceased)
(Sibling): Birchkit (Deceased)

History: Twigtalon was hunting by himself when a fox leaped at him and broke his neck.  Blizzardkit and Birchkit were born half a moon later, two sunrises after Stormshadow's litter was born. Birchkit was born dead, and the birth was difficult for Cloudberry and she had lost too much blood, dying shortly after. Blizzardkit was now the last of his family, and was raised by Stormshadow and Redstripe.

Needs more depth in personality. Like maybe: He is very kind, always there to help another cat. 

(Also I have Stormshadow who can be a foster mom since she's going to have kits soon)

Thanks! I fixed it.
(That be great, thanks!)
Also does FrostClan accept loners? Because if so, I'll make his real parents two loners, the mother dying when giving birth to me and my stillborn sibling, Birch. My father wouldn't be able to raise me and he thought I would die so he pleaded to FrostClan to take me in (just Blizzard, not himself), and then you said that your cat Stormshadow could raise me.

FrostClan usually doesn't accept loners, Dapplestar is rather strict.

Okay then. I'll just have Blizzardtail's mother, father, and sister die due to disease, his father died 4 sunrises before he was born, then his mother has been infected for a moon before his birth, and his sister was a stillborn. His mother passed away while giving birth to him. In this scenario they are all pure FrostClan warriors. Is that good?
(That just sounded plain dumb and unrealistic, now that I reflect on it )

Maybe his sister was a stillborn, mother lost too much blood during birth, and father was killed by a fox?

Almost accepted, just needs the future warrior name now.

Okay, added that in. Thanks for the help!

Looks good, but I don't see Blizzardkits age in this audition, could you add that in please?

Sure!

A quote is not needed, but I see you put a spot for it. did you have one before I accept?

I'll just take that part out. I'm not good with patriotic speaking.