Larkpaw of Frostclan

name= Larkpaw
clan= Frostclan
age/gender= she-cat/ 8 moons
parents= mother=Leaf-fur father= Suncloud ( not real cats.)
siblings= Jadepaw and Thrushpaw
cousins= Starlingpaw ( Leaf-fur is Starlingpaws mothers sister.)
appearance= Larkpaw is a light brown she-cat with light grey markings on her tail and feet. Larkpaw is small for her age. She is lean yet muscular. Larkpaw has a very long tail, regular sized legs and short claws. Larkpaw has bright green eyes, and a pink nose.

past life= Larkpaw was born in Frostclan, and was treated great as a kit. When Larkpaw was around 7 moons old, her mother died in a battle, and her dad disappeared soon after. No one knows what happened to her dad. Not much has happened since her mom died and dad left, she hopes to someday find her dad.

personality= Larkpaw can sometimes come across as mean, so she does not have many friends. Larkpaw does not try to be mean, she just says something and it sounds mean. Larkpaw can easily get distracted, and when she zones out, don't get near her. If you shake her when she zones out, you might leave with a new scar. Larkpaw is a very independent she-cat. She hates to ask for help, she when help is offered she often turns it down. Its only in the greatest time of need does she ask for help.

skills as a warrior
fighting=7/10
hunting= 6/10
memory= 6/10
swimming= 2/10
herb knowege= 3/10
climbing=1/10
running= 6/10
sneak attacks= 7/10

Leaffur would have two f's, and maybe a dash in between them. Otherwise this is pretty good aside from some grammatical errors.

Ok I put caps on all the names, and I fixed leaf-fur

Not all the names are capitalized and there are other grammatical errors

I cant find any more, other then how I spelled greypaw breypaw... though I found some names not capitalized.