Grayleaf, Beetletail , Blackkit, and Stormkit of FireClan. finished

name= Grayleaf
clan= FireClan
rank= warrior/queen
kits= Blackkit and Stormkit
mate= Beetletail
mother= Larkclaw
father= Brownpelt
siblings= none
age/gender= 47 moons/ she-cat
appearance= Grayleaf is a light grey she-cat with a few black streaks down her tail. She is a very lean, un-muscular cat. Grayleaf is small for her age, she has long legs, tail, and claws.  She also has amber colored eyes, and a pink nose.

past life= Grayleaf was born in the clan as a only kit. She was quite lonely as a kit and didn't have many friends. Grayleaf is sometimes over looked by the rest of her clan mates. She was a very stubborn apprentice, and she always thought she was the best. She became a warrior early  because she single handedly led a dog off their territory. Her parents both died peacefully in their sleep as elders.

personality= Grayleaf can be a very stubborn cat. She is often accused of being to harsh. Grayleaf is very unsympathetic, and some cats say that she is a horrible mother. She is only hard on her kits to get them ready for the real world. Grayleaf is almost the opposite of caring, and often jumps to conclusions. She can be a bit mean at times, but she doesn't mean to be. She has never been very popular in the clans, and she wishes she had more friends.

skills
fighting= 8/10
hunting= 6/10
running= 7/10
climbing= 4/10
herb knowledge= 2/10
swimming= 1/10
memory= 7/10
stamina= 5/10
sneak attack= 6/10

name= Beetletail  (adopted by honor.)
clan= FireClan
rank= warrior
kits= Blackkit and Stormkit
mate= Grayleaf
mother= Whitestorm
father= Mudfrost
siblings= None
age/gender= 45 moons/ tom
appearance= Beetletail is a dark brown tom with dark grey splashes on his legs and tail. He is very muscular, with short a stubby tail, and long legs. He has regular sized claws, blue eyes, and a black nose.

past life= Beetletail was born in the clan, but his parents hated him. He was a bit abused as a kit, and has become very tough because of it. Not having a sibling didn't bother him very much because he had plenty of friends. His mom was killed when he was a newly made warrior. A WaterClan cat had killed her in a border skirmish. His father died shortly after because of green cough. Beetletail wasn't sad, nor happy when his parents died. He acted as if just one of his clan mates had died, and that he wasn't related to them at all. 

personality= Beetletail is a very brave and curious cat. He often comes across as mean but he only acts that way because his parents abused him as a kit. When it comes to Gayleaf or his kits though, he is the kindest cat ever. He can be a little to easy on his kits, and this upsets his mate sometimes. Beetletail is very popular in the clans and has many friends even though he can be a bit snappy.    

skills=
fighting= 8/10
running= 8/10
hunting= 6/10
swimming= 2/10
herb knowledge= 3/10
memory= 5/10
climbing= 4/10
stamina= 7/10
sneak attacks= 8/10

name= Stormkit
clan= FireClan
rank= kit
age/gender= 1 moon/ tom
siblings= Blackkit
mother= Grayleaf
father= Beetletail
appearance= Stormkit is a light grey kit like his mom. He is a very muscular cat, with amber colored eyes. He has a long tail, short legs, and long claws. He is large for his age, and has a pink nose.


personality= Stormkit is a very brave kit. He is always leading the other kits around. He often gets in trouble, and when he does acts innocent. Stormkit can be a bit rude at times, and doesn't seem to accept that he isn't always perfect, and the best. When he realizes that he's not the best he always works himself to the bone. Stormkit is a very devoted cat, and always tries his hardest.

skills
hunting= 6/10
fighting= 9/10
sneak attacks= 6/10
swimming= 3/10
herb knowledge= 4/10
climbing= 3/10
running= 8/10
stamina= 5/10
memory= 9/10

name=Blackkit (adopted by honer)
clan= FireClan
rank= kit
age/gender= 1 moon/ she-kit
siblings= Stormkit
mother= Grayleaf
father= Beetletail
appearance= Blackkit is a solid black kit, and is small for her age like her mother. She has short legs, a long tail, and regular sized claws. She is very lean, but still has seeable muscals. She has bright blue eyes, with specks of green in them. She also has a pink nose.

personality= Blackkit is a bit shy. She hates to get in trouble, and doesn't mind being a follower and not a leader. Blackkit is a very respectful and quiet kit. She is a bit of a mommy's girl. She doesn't like playing with the other kits, and would rather listen to the elders stories. Blackkit is a very caring cat, and always wants to help others.

skills
fighting= 8/10
hunting= 6/10
climbing= 3/10
swimming= 4/10
stamina= 8/10
running= 6/10
herb memory= 4/10
sneak attacks= 7/10

Gayleaf 
G*rayleaf is 

Beatlekit is spelled Beetlekit. The word 'Beatle' is the band, not the bug.

fixed and finished.

I'll take Beetletail and Blackkit if you want.

ok. that would be great!

ok cool!

its been 3 days since someone checked it.

Beetletail has a few...uh...errors in spelling, but otherwise is accepted.

I fixed some, but I didn't find many do you mind pointing some out?

Gayleaf. As elders or as an elder if it were to be singular, not as a elder. 

And then for the kits, it's muscles, not musicals? Specks has a k, demoted is not synonymous with devoted,

ok. fixed all.

The more cats you have accepted, the higher audition standards get btw.

ok. i have realized that btw

You'll need to separate Beetletail from the rest of this.