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FINISHED || Webfoot | Queen | FireClan
Sun Dec 10, 2017 6:16 am
Name: Webkit || Webpaw || Webfoot
Age: 29 moons
Gender: Female
Rank: Queen
Clan: FireClan
Mentor: Dappledleaf | Deceased
Apprentice: N/A
Appearance:
Webfoot is a white she-cat with pale gray stripes that darken along her long tail. She has blue eyes and a small yet lithe body, which is perfect for slipping through small spaces. Her short fur is always well groomed and has little scars from previous fights. She has a delicate build, and yet is surprisingly agile and light on her feet.
Personality: Webfoot is a kind and caring she-cat, who is very affectionate and loyal to her clanmates. She does, however, often put her kits above the needs of the clan, and is not one to hide her hostility for other clan cats as well as any other kind of outsiders. She can also be quite passive aggressive and is easily one of the first cats to have a sharp remark ready in an argument.
-Good Traits: loyal, affectionate, sweet
-Bad Traits: sweet (as in rude in a sweet way), puts her kits first, hates strangers
Skills: (out of 10)
Fighting - 7
Hunting - 4
Climbing - 6
Running - 7
Swimming - 3
Strength - 5
Stamina - 7
Memory skills - 6
Family:
Mother - Poppybreeze | Deceased
Father - Ashfoot | Deceased
Sibling(s) - Hawkthroat | Alive || Kestrelwing | Alive | (Other Litter)
Mate - Timberwind
Kits - Dovekit | Alive || Tornadokit | Alive
History: Webfoot was born with her brother during a rather harsh leafbare, though both kits managed to make it alive. Webfoot particularly had a small and fragile body, making her parents fret over her constantly throughout her days as a kit and then as an apprentice. Webfoot trained tirelessly to use her small frame to her advantage and to better her skills to prove herself, especially since her brother seemed to be able to do anything effortlessly. Webfoot was exceedingly proud of herself when she became a warrior, as she was named for her cleverness and speed. Webfoot soon became close with the tom Timberwind and after quite some time, the two became mates. Recently, Webfoot just gave birth to her first litter, Dovekit and Tornadokit. Much to her brother's disdain and to her clanmates' amusement, Webfoot has become fiercely overprotective over her kits. She would not hesitate to harm should any cat mess with them in any way or by any means.
Age: 29 moons
Gender: Female
Rank: Queen
Clan: FireClan
Mentor: Dappledleaf | Deceased
Apprentice: N/A
Appearance:
Webfoot is a white she-cat with pale gray stripes that darken along her long tail. She has blue eyes and a small yet lithe body, which is perfect for slipping through small spaces. Her short fur is always well groomed and has little scars from previous fights. She has a delicate build, and yet is surprisingly agile and light on her feet.
Personality: Webfoot is a kind and caring she-cat, who is very affectionate and loyal to her clanmates. She does, however, often put her kits above the needs of the clan, and is not one to hide her hostility for other clan cats as well as any other kind of outsiders. She can also be quite passive aggressive and is easily one of the first cats to have a sharp remark ready in an argument.
-Good Traits: loyal, affectionate, sweet
-Bad Traits: sweet (as in rude in a sweet way), puts her kits first, hates strangers
Skills: (out of 10)
Fighting - 7
Hunting - 4
Climbing - 6
Running - 7
Swimming - 3
Strength - 5
Stamina - 7
Memory skills - 6
Family:
Mother - Poppybreeze | Deceased
Father - Ashfoot | Deceased
Sibling(s) - Hawkthroat | Alive || Kestrelwing | Alive | (Other Litter)
Mate - Timberwind
Kits - Dovekit | Alive || Tornadokit | Alive
History: Webfoot was born with her brother during a rather harsh leafbare, though both kits managed to make it alive. Webfoot particularly had a small and fragile body, making her parents fret over her constantly throughout her days as a kit and then as an apprentice. Webfoot trained tirelessly to use her small frame to her advantage and to better her skills to prove herself, especially since her brother seemed to be able to do anything effortlessly. Webfoot was exceedingly proud of herself when she became a warrior, as she was named for her cleverness and speed. Webfoot soon became close with the tom Timberwind and after quite some time, the two became mates. Recently, Webfoot just gave birth to her first litter, Dovekit and Tornadokit. Much to her brother's disdain and to her clanmates' amusement, Webfoot has become fiercely overprotective over her kits. She would not hesitate to harm should any cat mess with them in any way or by any means.
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Re: FINISHED || Webfoot | Queen | FireClan
Tue Dec 19, 2017 11:52 am
You are missing stamina in the skills. The personality could also be elaborated on some more. The list of good and bad traits is fine, but they should be explained more in the actual paragraph.
- Konesans
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Re: FINISHED || Webfoot | Queen | FireClan
Wed Dec 20, 2017 11:12 am
Fixed.
- Konesans
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Re: FINISHED || Webfoot | Queen | FireClan
Mon Dec 25, 2017 10:38 am
Bumping. :3
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Re: FINISHED || Webfoot | Queen | FireClan
Mon Dec 25, 2017 11:04 am
Please do not double post. If you'd like your audition to be checked, private message an administrator instead of bumping.
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