Birchpaw of FrostClan

Birchpaw-Birchbreeze
9 moon she cat
Frostclan apprentice (Possible future deputy?)
Birchpaw is a sleek brown cat with black markings. Birchpaw has soft, long fur and long, delicate whiskers. Birchpaw is not muscular but is tall. She has blue eyes

Personality: Birchpaw is an outgoing cat. Birchpaw is friendly but when it comes to training, she is all work and no play. She likes to show off her skills which can be annoying but Birchpaw doesn't care. Birchpaw hates kits and will do anything to NOT play a kit game. Birchpaw belives that she might be fuuture deputy and someday leader(Which probally wont happen but still)


Skills:
Hunting4
Fighting7
Stamina4
Climbing4
swimming0
Agility5
Strength3


History: Birchpaw was born to a cat named Sunstrike who loved her and cared deeply for her. Birchpaw was a behaving kit. She stayed out of the warriors den, she respected her elders, and she came by to say hello to the medicine cats every day. One day, Birchpaw went with a friend to explore a part of the forest. They got attacked by a badger which killed Birchpaws friend and wounded her. She learned a bit from the apprentices as well. Birchpaw was an eager to learn apprentice who learned quickly.

Mother: Sunstrike ( someone can make her)
Father: Oakface ( deceased)
Siblings: none

You need to add family, then it'll be good.

#bump, @Aquatail626, still needs family

She also needs more weaknesses and history. Remember to add more events than just the main things, we want in depth histories to really get to know your character. Plus, most skills under 5 are considered weaknesses, and you only have swimming(which is a very common one), and hunting.

#Bump ^^

Done

She still needs more in depth history

Don't you already have a cat with moon in them?

Moon?

Dragonmoon. And you have Birchpaw's future name as Birchmoon. Maybe change it? But It doesn't really matter.

#Bump , correct what Daisy has said

Psst, you also have a Icebreeze already as well

Shes Birchpaw right now

I don't think suffix matters that much guys :/

I know, I said she didn't really have to change it. But, why are there so many auditions with "possible future leader" or "possible future deputy" of Frostclan???

Cause the current one sucks lol

She is Birchpaw right now and I dont see any reasons to edit it