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Time of day:
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The blood-red of the sun rising over a stormy sky can well describe the plight of the Clans. Though the rains have lightened, chilly powerful gales still ravage the landscape. BrightClan is recovering from a devastating attack which they barely defended themselves from and DuskClan is still ravaged by sickness, though hope shines through as a cure is discovered.

DuskClan
Russetstar (@Skybreeze) - 7 lives
Deputies: Littleflower (@Daisyleap), Scorpionclaw (@Panthermask)
Medicine cats: Hollyshade (@Daisyleap), {reserved}
M/c apprentices: Carnelianpaw (@Willowfeather), Tulippaw (@Willowstorm)

FireClan
Redstar (@Daisyleap) - 8 lives
Deputies: Nightpelt (@Skybreeze), Sparkfeather (@Aquastar)
Medicine cats: Soraflight (@Leopardspots), Mudstreak (@Aquastar)
M/c apprentices: Owlpaw (@Willowstorm), Flurrypaw (@Quake)
Notice: FireClan camp is temporarily located within FrostClan due to the rogue takeover.

WaterClan
Sandstar (@Aquastar) - 7 lives
Deputies: Turtlesplash (@Leopardspots), Nightfoot (@Daisyleap)
Medicine cats: Peachcloud(@Daisyleap), Twistedleg (@Skybreeze)
M/c apprentices: Beechpaw (@Sorrelflight), {reserved}
Notice: WaterClan's Camp is currently located in their Swampy Forest due to flooding.

BrightClan
Ivorystar (@Willowstorm) - 4 lives
Deputies: Lynxcloud (@Daisyleap), Snowpuddle (@Snoo)
Medicine cats: Hazelflight (@Leopardspots), Seabreeze (@Sorrelflight)
M/c apprentices: Mistpool (@Mistpool), Dawnpaw (@Panthermask)

FrostClan
Dapplestar (@Leopardspots) - 2 lives
Deputies: Cloverlily (@Daisyleap), Thornsplash (@Skybreeze)
Medicine cats: Ivyfeather (@Aquastar), Greytail (@Skybreeze)
M/c apprentices: Falconswoop (@Willowstorm), Longpaw (@Daisyleap)
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Cloudheart Of Fireclan

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Cloudheart Of Fireclan

Post by Mistpool on Mon Jun 13, 2016 5:45 am

Cloudheart    Tom   20 moons Warrior    Fireclan


Black tom with white patches all over him. Leaf green left eye and blue right eye. Has white paws and a white tail and ear.(Picture soon)


Independent, lazy, terrible hunter, stubborn, hates other toms, loves kits, loves his mate, Sunbreeze, loves to kill, wants to be a deputy, hates the taste of bird, wants to learn to hunt so he can hunt for his mate. Also wants to have more kits and also, oneday he wants a apprentice.


Skills: Smell:1/10, Touch:8/10, Taste: 10/10, Sight:10/10, Hear:10/10, Pounce:1/10, Leap:1/10, Speed:1/10, Attack:1/10, Steath:1/10, Stamina: 8/10, Memory:9/10, Running:4/10, Swimming:6/10,

Was once a kittypet but became mates with Sunbreeze. Adopted Littlepaw and Snowkit. Has very dark secrets. Past Unknown by all cats except himself...


He came to the clans after Sunbreeze said she was expecting kits. He loves her dearly and fought Redstar to come in the clan. His deepest darkest secret is his father. His father was a rouge. His father, was a warrior killer... He was only 15 moons when he joined Fireclan. He almost killed Redstar but stopped, because he didn't want to be his father. Unknown to him, His father had almost killed Redstar Before Cloudheart joined. Redstar could see his father in him.


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Re: Cloudheart Of Fireclan

Post by Daisyleap on Mon Jun 13, 2016 6:04 am

He needs more personality and more in depth history. How did he come to the Clans? Did Sunbreeze persuade him to come for the sake of kits? What are his dark secrets? How old was he when he joined? Did Sunbreeze fight for Cloudheart(since Redstar prob would have refused to let him in)? Things like that.

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Daisy's Cats:
Dusk- Littleflower, Hollyshade, Blizzardtuft, Daisyleap, Gingerpatch, Grassflight, Creamtuft
Fire- Redstar, Hawkstep, Stormwatcher, Pebblesplash, Flamepaw, Adderpaw, Barley, Daffodilkit
Water- Nightfoot, Peachcloud, Salmonpelt, Seashell, Flowerbelly, Rosepaw, Shorepaw
Bright- Lynxcloud, Oceanspark, Aurorashade, Scorpionbite, Sparrowbelly, Shimmerpaw, Tumblepaw
Frost- Cloverlily, Longpaw, Scorchwind, Lunarshine, Wrenpaw, Sleetpaw, Ibispaw
RLK- Min, Peony, Indigo, Slash, Fleur, Blair, Tommy, Bellamy, Shark, Moon, Ryu
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Re: Cloudheart Of Fireclan

Post by Mistpool on Mon Jun 13, 2016 6:12 am

Is that a bit better?

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Post by Daisyleap on Mon Jun 13, 2016 6:18 am

It's better, but it could use a little more. Maybe you could say that his father almost killed Redstar before Cloudheart joined the Clans, but she never knew it was his father? <3

Also, I need to see some skills like swimming, running, memory, stamina, hunting, and fighting.

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Daisy's Cats:
Dusk- Littleflower, Hollyshade, Blizzardtuft, Daisyleap, Gingerpatch, Grassflight, Creamtuft
Fire- Redstar, Hawkstep, Stormwatcher, Pebblesplash, Flamepaw, Adderpaw, Barley, Daffodilkit
Water- Nightfoot, Peachcloud, Salmonpelt, Seashell, Flowerbelly, Rosepaw, Shorepaw
Bright- Lynxcloud, Oceanspark, Aurorashade, Scorpionbite, Sparrowbelly, Shimmerpaw, Tumblepaw
Frost- Cloverlily, Longpaw, Scorchwind, Lunarshine, Wrenpaw, Sleetpaw, Ibispaw
RLK- Min, Peony, Indigo, Slash, Fleur, Blair, Tommy, Bellamy, Shark, Moon, Ryu
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Re: Cloudheart Of Fireclan

Post by Mistpool on Mon Jun 13, 2016 6:54 am

Ok! Here it is!

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Re: Cloudheart Of Fireclan

Post by Daisyleap on Mon Jun 13, 2016 6:58 am

I still need to see the above skills that I recommended, like swimming, running, stamina, etc. Look here for help: http://warriorclan.forumotion.com/t209-creating-a-character

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Daisy's Cats:
Dusk- Littleflower, Hollyshade, Blizzardtuft, Daisyleap, Gingerpatch, Grassflight, Creamtuft
Fire- Redstar, Hawkstep, Stormwatcher, Pebblesplash, Flamepaw, Adderpaw, Barley, Daffodilkit
Water- Nightfoot, Peachcloud, Salmonpelt, Seashell, Flowerbelly, Rosepaw, Shorepaw
Bright- Lynxcloud, Oceanspark, Aurorashade, Scorpionbite, Sparrowbelly, Shimmerpaw, Tumblepaw
Frost- Cloverlily, Longpaw, Scorchwind, Lunarshine, Wrenpaw, Sleetpaw, Ibispaw
RLK- Min, Peony, Indigo, Slash, Fleur, Blair, Tommy, Bellamy, Shark, Moon, Ryu
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Post by Mistpool on Mon Jun 13, 2016 7:02 am

Ok! Hunting is pounce and that, and fighting is attack. The rest are pretty much there. I think I may just get better at this for future cats! Thanks for helping! Anything else?

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Post by Daisyleap on Mon Jun 13, 2016 7:04 am

I'm glad I was able to help you get better! He's  accepted I can't wait to roleplay with him.

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Dusk- Littleflower, Hollyshade, Blizzardtuft, Daisyleap, Gingerpatch, Grassflight, Creamtuft
Fire- Redstar, Hawkstep, Stormwatcher, Pebblesplash, Flamepaw, Adderpaw, Barley, Daffodilkit
Water- Nightfoot, Peachcloud, Salmonpelt, Seashell, Flowerbelly, Rosepaw, Shorepaw
Bright- Lynxcloud, Oceanspark, Aurorashade, Scorpionbite, Sparrowbelly, Shimmerpaw, Tumblepaw
Frost- Cloverlily, Longpaw, Scorchwind, Lunarshine, Wrenpaw, Sleetpaw, Ibispaw
RLK- Min, Peony, Indigo, Slash, Fleur, Blair, Tommy, Bellamy, Shark, Moon, Ryu
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