:{+ Thornfur +}:

Tue Nov 01, 2016 9:18 am

Thornkit || Thornpaw || Thornfur

Tom

30 moons (2.6 years)

DuskClan

Warrior

Thornfur is a kind but strict, loving father to his kits Larkkit, Seakit and Tealkit. He never wants to be like his parents, and he's always trying his best. When he was an apprentice, he pretty much hated everything especially his now mate, Blueflower. He always only wants a quiet place, and he's calm. He can't bring himself to kill cats, or anything large like foxes and badgers.

Thornfur is a fluffy, brown tom with a white underbelly and shining green eyes. He has darker brown stripes/spots going down his back all the way to his tail. His legs are long, and his face is flat. His claws are like a talon in shape, and his teeth are short and sharp. His tail is long and bushy, and both his ears are chipped. His muzzle, tail, neck, ears and toes are white, and his legs are black. He has a scar gogin from the top of his eye, through his mouth, and down to the middle of his neck from battle.

Hunting : 7/10 || Fighting : 8/10 || Swimming : 1/10 || Running : 5.5/10 || Stamina : 5/10 || Intelligence : 8/10 || Temper : 7/10

Parents

Twistedjaw (Rednose) | Deceaced | Death caused of old age | Father

Stumptail (Blazingstrike) | Deceaced | Death caused of old age | Mother

Mate

Bluefeather | Alive | Sick

Kits

Larkkit | Alive | Well | Second litter

Featherkit | Deceaced | Death caused of sickness | Second litter

??? | Deceaced | Death at birth. Cause unknown. | Second litter

Tealkit | Alive | Well | First litter

Seakit | Alive | Well | First litter

Blackkit | Deceaced | Death caused by fox | First litter

Thornkit was born into an abusive family with no friends or family to protect him. Most of his 'long term' friends died because of battles at apprentice age. He was alone until he made a friend named Bluekit. They stayed friends untill apprentice age, where Thornpaw became more sensitive and sassy. He pushed Bluepaw away and became a warrior two moons before she did. Once they were both warriors, the started developing feelings for eachother, but his parents did not approve. They soon later died of old age. He didn't cling onto their deaths for long, since Bluefeather became a queen and was expecting his kits. He was depressed after the accident with Blackkit, who was slaughtered by a fox, the later found out that they were having a second litter. Two moons later, there were three kits, but two of them died. Now, Bluefeather is sick and he's left to take care of three kits on his own.

Wed Nov 02, 2016 9:49 am

Uh... what are his parents names..?

Also, he can't bring himself to kill what? Cats? Prey? Anything?

You also need to put the rest of his family in.

Wed Nov 02, 2016 12:30 pm

So, I need to put in grandparents and stuff? He doesn't have siblings.

o.o Can't bring himself to kill CATS. I think I accidentily ended that early.

Wed Nov 02, 2016 7:54 pm

You can put in mates and kits lol

Also not everyone changes their name due to an injury. Only some cats even change their name after.

Wed Nov 02, 2016 11:09 pm

^^ Right.

Also, it doesn't really make sense for his future name and his father to both have the prefixes of "twisted"???

And the future name doesn't make sense all in all. Twistedtooth? Why would he change his name to that? You can't really have a Twistedtooth and it's not a major accident, if it would be an accident, to change to a new name?

Also, you forgot the basic information needed. Like, gender, age, clan and rank.

Thu Nov 03, 2016 11:26 am

Done!

Fri Nov 04, 2016 2:39 am

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