V i x e n p a w

Sun Apr 30, 2017 1:32 pm

"I'm The Best Apprentice!"
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b a s i c s
name ; Vixenpaw - ~~Vixenfang~~
age ; 6 Moons
gender ; She
clan ; Frostclan
rank ; Apprentice - ~~Warrior~~
description ; Vixenpaw has long, messy, dirty, orange fur with a black splodge on her front paws, and a white part on his tail and chin. She has sea blue eyes. She has short whiskers, a black nose and a bob-tail. She is a tall She, and a normal weight

skills ; out of ten
Fighting - 5
Hunting - 8
Climbing - 4
Running - 5
Swimming - 1
Strength - 6
Memory skills - 1
Stamina - 4

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b e h i n d t h e c a t
personality ; Vixenpaw is a egotistical she, she thinks he's better then starclan and everything, Yet when she's around her friends, or people she likes, she is much less egotistical. She is also always wants her way, all the time, his poor mentor, always, does want Vixenpaw wants. Minus this, she is super Hard-Working, She always goes on patrols, unless she's sick, And even if she is, she will try to go, And this, also makes her loyal.
history ; Vixenkit was born to a young, Frostclan she-cat, and a also yound, Brightclan tom, near waterclan territory; with 3 siblings. Because The Frostclan queen wanted to keep 2 kits, she took Vixenkit and blackkit. While walking back, the she fell into a river. Blackkit got swept away. A Waterclan Patrol Picked up Vixenkit, while the Frostclan queen drowned drowned. The waterclan warriors took her to frostclan. A Young Queen, Summerlily, Even though she had 4 kits of her own, Took him in. He was mentored to ------
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r o m a n t i c s
crush ; Darkpaw
mate ; Future: Darkpaw
kits ;
kin ;
Dapplestream (Mother ;; Deceased ;; Met? No ;; Open) Summerlily (Adoptive-Mother ;; Alive ;; Met? Yes ;; @Sushi)

Bubblefang (Father ;; Alive ;; Waterclan ;; Met? No) Swiftwing (Adoptive-Father ;; Alive ;; Met? Yes ;; @Opem)

Scourge (Loner ;; Sister ;; Alive ;; Met? Not Really ;; @Sushi)

Swiftpaw (Apprentice ;; Waterclan ;; Alive ;; Met? No ;; @Open)

Treekit (Kit ;; Deceased ;; Met? No)

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m i s c.
sexuality ; Straight
Favourite Prey ; Rabbit
Favourite Season ; New-Leaf
Favourite scent ; Her clan
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Sun Apr 30, 2017 1:54 pm

If this is a cat, the picture shouldn't be of a fox.

Sun Apr 30, 2017 1:56 pm

Panthermask wrote:If this is a cat, the picture shouldn't be of a fox.

fixing

Sun Apr 30, 2017 2:51 pm

doneo

Sun Apr 30, 2017 2:53 pm

I don't really think 'responsible' is the right word for someone who does whatever they want, whenever they want. Loyal works, or hard-working, but not responsible.

Sun Apr 30, 2017 2:54 pm

fixed

Sun Apr 30, 2017 2:55 pm

Also Water and Fire are opposite sides of the territory...?

Sun Apr 30, 2017 2:58 pm

and so..?

Sun Apr 30, 2017 2:59 pm

A relationship between two cats from those Clans would be very, very impractical. Try Fire and Frost, or Fire and Bright.

Sun Apr 30, 2017 3:02 pm

gatherings

Sun Apr 30, 2017 3:03 pm

Willowpoppy wrote:A relationship between two cats from those Clans would be very, very impractical. Try Fire and Frost, or Fire and Bright.

Sun Apr 30, 2017 3:06 pm

fixed

Mon May 01, 2017 2:05 am

The history is very confusing. If a WaterClan patrol picked him up, then how and why is he residing in FireClan now?

Mon May 01, 2017 7:33 am

Also, a vixen is what a female fox is called, so it doesn't make sense for Vixenpaw to be male.

Mon May 01, 2017 6:10 pm

fixed and fixed

Mon May 01, 2017 6:59 pm

FrostClan and WaterClan is just as bad as FireClan and WaterClan in terms of territory.

Mon May 01, 2017 8:29 pm

fixed

Mon May 01, 2017 8:38 pm

...no you haven't?

Mon May 01, 2017 8:41 pm

Vixenkit was born to a young, Frostclan she-cat, and a also yound, Brightclan tom, in waterclan territory;

Mon May 01, 2017 8:45 pm

Why in a WaterClan territory though, makes no sense because it's on an island and neither of those clans can swim

Mon May 01, 2017 8:46 pm

fixed

Tue May 02, 2017 12:21 pm

Daisyleap wrote:The history is very confusing. If a WaterClan patrol picked him up, then how and why is he residing in FireClan now?

You never fixed this. The Clan was just changed to FrostClan. Also, why is Swiftpaw, Scourge, and Treekit not mentioned in the history at all? And who is Blackkit, as there is no Blackkit in Vixenpaw's family section. Why/how did Scourge leave to become a loner, and how did Treekit die, and how did this take an effect on Vixenpaw? And why is Swiftpaw in a different Clan, and how did that effect Vixenpaw as well?

Tue May 02, 2017 6:00 pm

Vixenpaw never met treekit, scourge is blackkit

and fixed

Sat May 06, 2017 1:11 pm

The history is just so confusing. If the kits' father had taken two literally newborn kits back to his clan, they would have died, since they need to be fed so often. Therefore, all of the kittens would have to nurse on their mother for at least a moon (Vixenpaw would know her siblings) before they could be taken a distance to another clan. If a newborn kit was dropped into a river, it would definitely die (I mean, the mom died but not the kit?) I need a bit of coverage on the siblings too. How did Treekit die? How does it affect Vixenpaw and Swiftpaw that they have almost no family in their clans? How did Blackkit become Scourge?

Mon May 08, 2017 3:58 pm

The picture also isn't showing, not sure if that's just me though.

Thu May 11, 2017 12:57 am

Bump please @Sushi

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