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Ottercreek of WaterClan
Fri Aug 04, 2017 2:39 am
Name: Otterkit (past name) -> Otterpaw (past name) -> Ottercreek (current name)
Age: 33 moons
Gender: Tom
Rank: Warrior
Clan: WaterClan
Appearance: A tall, long-tailed tortoiseshell tom with a ginger, black, and brown color pattern on his coat. His amber eyes are greenish around the pupils, giving him an always serious look. He stand about 33 cm from the head and is almost two feet long from nose to tail tip. His tortoiseshell coat is marked with white markings that make his two fore-paws white, his tail tip white, and his belly white, giving him more of a she-cat's appearance rather than a tom's. He doesn't have much muscle-mass to him, mostly in his powerful legs that help him be able to swim as well as he does. His body is mostly lean though his tail is more thick-furred than the rest of his body.
Personality: Ottercreek is the bashful superhero who isn't afraid to go out on a limb to protect the ones he cares about. To she-cats who comment on his handsomeness he tends to get bashful if over-hearing and a bit shy. He's friendly, charming, and humorous to cats he knows but to those he doesn't he's usually seen as laid-back, a little brag-like, and the strong-but-silent type. To cats younger than him (apprentices/kits), he is usually seen as a good role model and is happy to play with any kit when given the chance to. He tries his best to protect his Clan/Clanmates and is always the best to be friends with. He gives advice to those who need it. He can be the overly-sensitive type and is often bossy if a cat younger than himself gets out of line. He is easily scared by loud noises and is often a by-stander to bullying.
Skills:
Fighting - 4/10
Hunting - 7/10
Climbing - 2/10
Running - 3/10
Swimming - 10/10
Strength - 5/10
Memory skills - 6/10
Family:
Mother - Acorndrizzle (deceased, died in battle as a warrior) - tortoiseshell she-cat with a ginger tail which gave her name
Father - Stripeclaw (deceased, died of old age as an elder) - cream tabby tom with a white underbelly which gave Ottercreek his
Littermates/siblings - Heatherfoot (sister): tortoiseshell and white queen, Grasswhistle (brother): tortoiseshell warrior, and Beekit (brother, deceased): tortoiseshell and white kit
History: Otterkit was born with his three siblings Heatherkit, Grasskit, ad Beekit around the middle of leaf-fall since they had a late arrival into the world. At first all seemed jolly for him, he had siblings to play with, and that was when green-cough spread through his Clan and it sadly cost the life of his identical brother Beekit, who had only lived for 3 moons. His sister and brother picked on him because he was different and even now they still do because he was the runt of the litter. He grew up and became apprenticed at the age of 6 moons to a mentor named Maplestripe (now a senior warrior). After a long time training with her and disagreeing with his siblings, he was finally made a warrior, though the celebration was awfully short. For his mother had died in a battle over prey and his grief stricken father retired early to the elders den, where he later died moons later to old age. Ottercreek was so grief stricken that when he became a warrior, even after 10 moons, he still missed seeing their faces. He was sad to not be able to know his identical brother, Beekit, better, even though they turned out the best of friends.
Age: 33 moons
Gender: Tom
Rank: Warrior
Clan: WaterClan
Appearance: A tall, long-tailed tortoiseshell tom with a ginger, black, and brown color pattern on his coat. His amber eyes are greenish around the pupils, giving him an always serious look. He stand about 33 cm from the head and is almost two feet long from nose to tail tip. His tortoiseshell coat is marked with white markings that make his two fore-paws white, his tail tip white, and his belly white, giving him more of a she-cat's appearance rather than a tom's. He doesn't have much muscle-mass to him, mostly in his powerful legs that help him be able to swim as well as he does. His body is mostly lean though his tail is more thick-furred than the rest of his body.
Personality: Ottercreek is the bashful superhero who isn't afraid to go out on a limb to protect the ones he cares about. To she-cats who comment on his handsomeness he tends to get bashful if over-hearing and a bit shy. He's friendly, charming, and humorous to cats he knows but to those he doesn't he's usually seen as laid-back, a little brag-like, and the strong-but-silent type. To cats younger than him (apprentices/kits), he is usually seen as a good role model and is happy to play with any kit when given the chance to. He tries his best to protect his Clan/Clanmates and is always the best to be friends with. He gives advice to those who need it. He can be the overly-sensitive type and is often bossy if a cat younger than himself gets out of line. He is easily scared by loud noises and is often a by-stander to bullying.
Skills:
Fighting - 4/10
Hunting - 7/10
Climbing - 2/10
Running - 3/10
Swimming - 10/10
Strength - 5/10
Memory skills - 6/10
Family:
Mother - Acorndrizzle (deceased, died in battle as a warrior) - tortoiseshell she-cat with a ginger tail which gave her name
Father - Stripeclaw (deceased, died of old age as an elder) - cream tabby tom with a white underbelly which gave Ottercreek his
Littermates/siblings - Heatherfoot (sister): tortoiseshell and white queen, Grasswhistle (brother): tortoiseshell warrior, and Beekit (brother, deceased): tortoiseshell and white kit
History: Otterkit was born with his three siblings Heatherkit, Grasskit, ad Beekit around the middle of leaf-fall since they had a late arrival into the world. At first all seemed jolly for him, he had siblings to play with, and that was when green-cough spread through his Clan and it sadly cost the life of his identical brother Beekit, who had only lived for 3 moons. His sister and brother picked on him because he was different and even now they still do because he was the runt of the litter. He grew up and became apprenticed at the age of 6 moons to a mentor named Maplestripe (now a senior warrior). After a long time training with her and disagreeing with his siblings, he was finally made a warrior, though the celebration was awfully short. For his mother had died in a battle over prey and his grief stricken father retired early to the elders den, where he later died moons later to old age. Ottercreek was so grief stricken that when he became a warrior, even after 10 moons, he still missed seeing their faces. He was sad to not be able to know his identical brother, Beekit, better, even though they turned out the best of friends.
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Re: Ottercreek of WaterClan
Fri Aug 04, 2017 11:10 am
Needs some flaws in personality and hunting and fighting can't both be over 6
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Re: Ottercreek of WaterClan
Fri Aug 04, 2017 12:44 pm
Edited, is that better? 
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Re: Ottercreek of WaterClan
Fri Aug 04, 2017 2:20 pm
Just to let you know, tortoiseshell tom cats cannot have kits as they're genetically sterile.
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Re: Ottercreek of WaterClan
Fri Aug 04, 2017 3:12 pm
Thanks
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