Thunder

Thunder
40 moon tom
Rogue, Onyx's group

Appearance: A yellow-brown tom with black spots. He has brown paws and amber eyes. He is tall and skinny, not at all muscular. He has a white tailtip.

Personality: Thunder is quite capricious. At a glance he seems upset most of the time. This is mostly true, considering the fact that he watched his half-sister kill his loving father right in front of his eyes and two days later being abandoned by his mother. He is usually short-tempered and he yells a lot. 
Skills:
Hunting:4
Fighting:7
Swimming:3
Climbing:2
Speed:8
Stamina:5
Agility:3
Strength:2
Herb Lore:4

History: Thunder's father, Lightining, was an old clan cat who used to be named Houndtooth. His mother told him that he was kicked out for killing his old mate. She told him that it was unfair because Houndtooth was only defending himself. Thunder grew to have the clans. His father taught him how to fight. They were really close with their relationship. When they worked together, almost nothing could stop them. But one day, Lightning was killed. He had run just as his half-sister, Frostwing, ripped open his belly and left him to die. Frostwing had glared at him then ran off. Thunder ran to his dying father and tried to save him. He couldn't save him. He ran to his mother and told her the news. They both mourned until they were to tired to stay awake. When Thunder woke up the next morning, his mom was gone. He traveled for awhile before stumbling on Onyx's group and joined.

Family:
Mother: Fountain
Father: Lightning/Houndtooth
Siblings/Half siblings: Frostwing(half), Winterfrost(half, dead)

He looks pretty good, i'm just confused about his appearance a little, and his personality could use a little more

Finished

Same thing stands for both his personality and appearance.

Finished. Also for appearances he's basically a yellow-brown tom with brown spots who is also tall and has brown paws

I still don't understand his appearance lol

Alright I changed it

bump I kinda need him for the battle

His personality could still use more?

Better?

I suppose, I literally don't see any changes but yeah i'll accept it anyway