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Chicorysplotch |.º.| FireClan
Thu Sep 21, 2017 5:04 am
Name: ⌔ Chicorykit - Chicorypaw - Chicorysplotch ⌔
Age: 21 moons
Gender: She-cat
Rank: Warrior
Clan: 
ＦｉｒｅＣｌａｎ
ＦｉｒｅＣｌａｎ Appearance: A bushy calico cat with yellow eyes replete with highlights. Most of her face is painted with black fur, with a white chin and a touch of ginger. Her ears are rounded at the tips. She has small, beetling tufts of black-grey fur at the tips of her ears. She also seems to have fangs at the bottom of her mouth that are larger than the ones at the top, which are strangely small. (Her appearance is my profile picture)
Personality: Chicorysplotch is friendly as it goes. As long as you can respect her, she'll respect you. She has an odd type of humour, which involves sometimes teasing and laughing at failure. She's a natural leader, is truly kind and cares about her friends. She loves to see relationships develop, although she has no current desire to have one of her own. She has a lot of misconceptions about herself, and really, is still kind of discovering who she is. She can also be annoying. She has never had a crush in her life. She is nosy for things to judge one on (mostly small things), is a slight bigot to those who she 'senses' don't respect her (which is really just nonsense), and is theatrical. Explain to her, don't show. She can't comprehend example-visuals very well (e.g. "This looks a little like that, except with white markings and black tufts around the ankles and with blue eyes instead of yellow, etc. etc."). She can be somewhat, yet rarely authoritative. She also drools a little during her sleep.
Skills: (out of 10)
Fighting - 4.1/10
Hunting - 7/10
Climbing - 4/10
Running - 9.3/10
Swimming - 2.5/10
Strength - 5/10
Memory skills - 3/10
Family:
Mother - Pebblethunder
Father - Brambletoe
Littermates/siblings - N/A
Crush - None, but open! It's hard to get her to crush on someone.
Mate - None
Kits - None
Former Mentor - Poolsprout
Apprentice - None
Crush - None, but open! It's hard to get her to crush on someone.
Mate - None
Kits - None
Former Mentor - Poolsprout
Apprentice - None
History:
Chicorysplotch was born to two FireClan cats; Pebblethunder, a stupidly courageous she-cat, and Brambletoe, a sassy tom. Chicorykit had never really wanted to leave camp but she could be found vying for the exit a few times. In the nursery, a few kits had viewed her as a bully, since she used to be brutal, and her parents worried. They worried because they knew that every time a kit acted like this, they grew up to be tyrannical. Chicorykit soon righted herself, relieving her parents' parasitic worry.
Chicorypaw tolerated training and found that her apprenticeship went by quickly. During this time she also twisted her forepaw on an oak root. It was her first time breaking a bone, even if it was minor. When she was an apprentice she also wondered what it would be like being a medicine cat apprentice, but she knew her path was that of a warrior's.
Chicorysplotch as she is now is most conforming to the personality I listed. She is good at explaining and would also love to be a mentor. She's not sure about having kits.
(I PM'd an admin, they said that -splotch might be allowed, and that I'd have to see.)
Chicorysplotch was born to two FireClan cats; Pebblethunder, a stupidly courageous she-cat, and Brambletoe, a sassy tom. Chicorykit had never really wanted to leave camp but she could be found vying for the exit a few times. In the nursery, a few kits had viewed her as a bully, since she used to be brutal, and her parents worried. They worried because they knew that every time a kit acted like this, they grew up to be tyrannical. Chicorykit soon righted herself, relieving her parents' parasitic worry.
Chicorypaw tolerated training and found that her apprenticeship went by quickly. During this time she also twisted her forepaw on an oak root. It was her first time breaking a bone, even if it was minor. When she was an apprentice she also wondered what it would be like being a medicine cat apprentice, but she knew her path was that of a warrior's.
Chicorysplotch as she is now is most conforming to the personality I listed. She is good at explaining and would also love to be a mentor. She's not sure about having kits.
(I PM'd an admin, they said that -splotch might be allowed, and that I'd have to see.)
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Re: Chicorysplotch |.º.| FireClan
Thu Sep 21, 2017 7:41 am
Hi there! I just wanted to point out in your personality, the “shipping” thing doesn’t make sense. I understand what you mean but cats would have no concept of it.
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Re: Chicorysplotch |.º.| FireClan
Thu Sep 21, 2017 8:50 am
Ohh, okay! I'll change it. How about "she likes to see relationships develop, but she has no current desire to have one of her own"?
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Re: Chicorysplotch |.º.| FireClan
Thu Sep 21, 2017 11:41 am
Hmm her personality seems almost too good. Typically characters are not purely good or bad, so maybe put a few things in that she's bad at?
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Re: Chicorysplotch |.º.| FireClan
Thu Sep 21, 2017 12:00 pm
Added! Hopefully this will balance it out.
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Re: Chicorysplotch |.º.| FireClan
Tue Sep 26, 2017 10:59 am
this is finished right? If so, 
and I will move it to accepted auditions
and I will move it to accepted auditions
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