Pseudowisp

Name: Pseudowisp
Age: 16 moons
Gender: Female
Rank: Warrior
Clan: Fireclan

Appearance:
Pseudowisp is a beautiful maincoon - ragdoll mix. She had long silver
fur that looks like wisps but as you get to her face, the beautiful
silver turns to a deep black. Along with her amazing fur design, this
she cat has freezing cold blue eyes.
Personality:

Skills:
Fighting - 9/10
Hunting - 7/10
Climbing - 7/10
Running - 8/10
Swimming - 2/10
Strength - 10/10
Memory skills - 8/10

Family:
Mother - Ravenchirp
Father - Brackenthorn
Littermates/siblings - N/A

History:
Pseudowisp is a cunning she-cat that is very manipulative. This beautiful she-cat, dispite her looks, has a prominent dark side. Think of her like Tigerclaw, but smoother and less noticable in her actions. She likes to put herself at the front and wants to gain power. Pseudowisp is a formittable enemy with deadly fighting skills, and terrifying ambition. Pseudowisp has a faded past, no one knows it and she likes it that way. Overtime she has also forgotten most of it, but one thing remains. The look on her mother's face when her father forced Pseudowisp to kill her. Stuck in a loop of her old ways, Pseudowisp is very dark minded and cruel. Though she has learned how to hide and push down these feelings.

Hey Pseudo! A few notes, as i'm a little to busy to list everything, but the prefix 'Pseudo' isn't an accepted one in the Clans, you seem to have forgotten her personality, and if you could please get rid of the '[code]' things so its easier to read. Thanks!

Alright How do I get rid of the Codes?

Hi! Welcome to WarriorClan! I'll just add on for Willow if that's okay haha.

Firstly, instead of putting it in the "code" just put it into the post normally.

Pseudow isn't a valid prefix, sorry. You need to change the name.

The skills are too high, maybe make more of them lower than 5?

Can you separate personality and history please.

Instead of putting "like Tigerstar," explain her personality in full - that'd be great.

It doesn't matter whether she's forgotten her past or not, you still have to write it down.

Can you explain the history more, too?

Finally, I'm not sure if you're allowed to have her father force her to kill her mother - I'm not sure it'd be something that happens and there'd be no way to force her to do it.

Thanks for joining!

Hello, and I will be fixing my errors soon. I will be back since I have to leave

Thanks and it's no problem! Just post once you've finished (please don't post twice in a row though)

#bump please! I edited your post for you to get rid of the code things.

#SecondBump, @Pseudowisp.