Maplespot of FrostClan

Name: Maplespot
Age: 18 moons
Gender: Female
Rank: Warrior
Clan: FrostClan

Appearance:
Sand-colored she-cat with white on her paws and chest. white tail-tip and white around her muzzle. Short, soft fur. Long whiskers. Normal-sized ears. Amber eyes. Slightly longer fur at the base of her tail.

She is also my profile picture.

Personality:
Sweet, kind, & Protective, but she can seem rude sometimes. She is brave at most times, but can become cowardly in times of great danger. After long periods of waiting, she gets very impatient. She does not get angry easily and would rather be out hunting than be stuck in the warrior's den. She also is reluctant to eat crowfood because she thinks that all crowfood is poisonous.

Skills: (out of 10)
Fighting - 4
Hunting - 7
Climbing - 6
Running - 6
Swimming - 3
Strength - 4
Stamina - 7
Memory skills - 5

Family:
Mother - Cedarwing (Elder, adoptable)
Father - Hawkmask (Warrior, adoptable)
Littermates/siblings - Patchskip (Apprentice, adoptable), Flamekit (Deceased), Mudeye (warrior, non-adoptable)

History: Maplespot was born in leafbare with two other littermates, her other sibling had been born 10 moons earlier. Maplespot's sister, Flamekit, was the runt of the litter, and that mixed with the cold weather led to Flamekit's unhappy demise only 8 days after she was born. The days after Flamekit's death, were very sad for Maplespot. Flamekit was her best friend. Many months later, when maplespot and her other littermate had turned six moons old, they both became Maplepaw and Patchpaw. In their last moon as apprentices, Cedarwing stepped down from her rank as warrior and became an elder, to forever live out her days calmly and peacefully. And now, only two moons ago, Maplepaw and her brother became Maplespot and Patchskip.

Instead of listing the personality, can you put it all as one paragraph? Other than that, it looks awesome!