Wispnettle l l BrightClan

Thu Oct 24, 2019 12:16 am

Name: Wispnettle

Age: 22 moons

Gender: She-cat

Rank: Warrior

Clan: BrightClan (not Clan-born)

Appearance: Wispnettle is a small, energetic, ginger-and-cream she-cat with white wispy, feather-like tufts of fur dotting her pelt. She has a thick, long, feathery tail and shimmering sapphire blue eyes.

Personality: Wispnettle is a very opinionated, honest she-cat. If she doesn't like you, she'll tell you. If she does, you'll know, as she's very bubbly and energetic. She's also quite clumsy, tripping over her own tail at times. She's hardworking, and loyal. Being non-clanborn she often feels insecure and as if she has to prove herself even more to her clan. She's closest with her brother, Nutpine. She has a fear of losing those she loves.

Skills: (out of 10)

Fighting - 7

Hunting - 8

Climbing - 3.5

Running - 9

Swimming - 0

Strength - 6

Stamina - 9

Memory skills - 10

Family:

Mother - Wishes

Father - Unknown (His name is Chestnutwhisker. None of his kits know him, nor know he's a clan-cat.)

Littermates/siblings - Dreamflower, Hazelkit, Chipwhisker, Nutpine

History: Her mother, Wishes, was a loner. A moon after giving birth to five kits, she became sick. She knew there were a big group of cats that lived around there. She'd heard rumors that they defended each other fiercely and cared for one another. Gathering her kits, Wisp, Hazel, Chip, Nut, and Dream, she weakly began her trek down into Clan territory. She was found, sprawled out by a hazel thicket, by a dawn patrol, who the brought her back to camp, sine no honorable warrior would neglect a queen and her kits. The medicine cat began treating her, and she stayed in the medicine cat den overnight. The next morning she told the cat her kits' names, and how she wanted them to join this clan, as they were kind enough to try to save her life. She died at sunhigh that day. The clan took the kits in, and since their names went well with clan names, they kept them the same, just adding 'kit'. They were five moons old when Hazelkit died, and it affected her pretty bad. They became apprenticed, and then Warriors. Wispnettle's name comes from her pelt(wisp), and the fact that as an apprentice, on her first time out, she tripped and stumbled into a patch of nettles, scattering them everywhere. For almost a moon, she swore there were still some nettles in her pelt(nettle).

Thu Oct 24, 2019 4:06 am

The skills are entirely too high. Only one of fighting or hunting can be seven or above, and only two skills total can be seven or above, including the one of hunting or fighting. ~~Wisp and~~ Chip also aren't accepted prefixes, and ~~pine isn't an accepted suffix~~. Go here to see what ones are accepted, please!

Also, please change your profile picture so it's smaller, otherwise it might block out some of the texts on yours posts!

Edit: Spoke with Willow and he's added Wisp to the accepted prefixes, and pine to the suffixes. Chip, however, isn't accepted.

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