Willow, Dust, Sand, finished ( willow for adoption.)

name= Willow
clan= none.
age/gender= 34 moons/ she-cat
mother= Lily
father=Storm
siblings= none
mate= Rock
kits= Dust and Sand
appearance= Willow is a light brown tabby with dark grey swirls. She is a medium sized cat with green eyes. She has medium sized limbs, and a pink nose.

past life= Willow was a only child, and loved her parents. They loved her, and were always there for her. She always had a warm nest, and a full belly. She had started to learn to hunt with her parents, and always wanted to go out with them. When she was 6 moons old she wrenched her shoulder, and her parents told her to rest.  One time when she was 6 moons old her parents disappeared while hunting. Before they went out she had begged them for her to come with them, but they repeated. " REST." .  She wandered the woods for a while, until she found her parents dead bodies mangled by a badger. She was very sad and cried for a long time. She then found Rock and started to feel a bit better. Her and Rock instantly became bestfriends. When she was 27 moons Rock asked her to be his mate, she happily said yes. Rock later died when a fox attacked Willow. Her kits were not born yet.

personality= Willow is like water, calm and protecting. She always wants to help everyone, and doesn't like to see cats in pain. She loves everyone and everything. Willow hates fighting, but will kill to save her kits. She has a very caring and mothering instinct, and treats everyone like they are her kits. She is a bit shy at first but if you get to know her you will learn she is a very curious and confident cat. She doesn't have many friends, but the ones she does have she protects with all her might.

skills
hunting= 8/10
fighting= 5/10
tracking= 6/10
sneak attacks= 6/10
swimming= 2/10
climbing= 3/10
stamina= 7/10
memory= 7/10
herb knowledge= 4/10




























name= Sand
clan= none
age/gender= 1 moon/ she-cat
mother= Willow
father= Rock
siblings= Dust
appearance= Sand is a light brown, almost pale she-cat. She is very lean and agile. She is very sure footed, and has long legs. She has regular sized claws and a regular sized tail. She is about the size she is spost to be, and has green eyes. She also has a black nose.

personality= Sand is a very nice, but brave cat. She is always getting in trouble, but then acting innocent. Sand hates when she gets caught. When ever she does anything she drags Dust into it. She is very curious, and sometimes her curiosity gets the better of her. Sand can be a bi disrespectful, and always speaks her mind. Sand is almost never put down, and is always in high spirits.

skills
fighting= 7/10
hunting= 8/10
stamina= 9/10
climbing= 3/10
swimming= 2/10
sneak attack= 7/10
herb knowledge= 3/10
memory= 6/10
tracking= 5/10

name= Dust
clan= none
siblings= Sand
mother= Willow
father= Rock
age/gender= 1 moon/ tom
appearance= Dust is a light grey tom with black specs around his tail. He is very scrawny and lean. He barley has any muscle, and is very weak. He has very long limbs, and amber colored eyes like his father. He also has a black nose.

personality= Dust is a very shy, and respectful cat. He is always getting dragged into trouble by Sand but he hates getting caught. He this his sister is annoying, but still loves her. He is a very quiet cat, and only usually speaks to Sand or his mother. He is a little scared of his dad, and yet always tries to impress him. He is a very thoughtfull and timid cat. He doesn't have many friends, and is sometimes picked on for being so quiet and small.

skills
fighting= 6/10
hunting= 7/10
tracking= 8/10
swimming= 2/10
memory= 9/10
climbing=  3/10
herb knowledge= 4/10
stamina= 8/10
sneak attacks= 5/10

There's already a rogue named River.

ok. I changed his name and finished the rest of the cats. check please?

The parents need more history that's less confusing and more grammatically correct.

I fixed some grammer but I don't understand the  less confusing part. I added some more history to Rock though.

Rock's history makes almost no sense and Willow's doesn't explain enough of the parent situation.

i added to willows and i thought about fixing rocks, but i didnt know what else to put or how to arange it, so i gave up on him and deleted him.

What happened to her parents is still not explained.

fixed.