Audition

ok
the last one kept glitching out so
[code]Moonshine (if not allowed Moonflash)
30 Moons
She-Cat
Warrior
Frostclan

Black with shining cyan eyes

Very warmhearted and caring, but on the more fierce, protective side of that.
Afraid of heights, and eagles.
Will stare into space if bored.
Will be a tiny threat to saftey if excited.
Observant mainly, loyal, like, if you're not respected by her you don't exist to her,
and pushy. Very pushy.

Fighting -7
Hunting - 5
Climbing - 2
Running - 8
Swimming - 3
Strength - 7
Memory skills -8


Mother - Clawpaw (loner, actual name Rocket.)
Father - Harrison (kittypet)
Littermates/siblings - Treekit (Lives with Clawpaw. Actual name Woody)

Twinkle was a shy kit, born... in a pile of freaking wood.
Her mother, Rocket, was a kittypet, though she was an attention whore
and she would only come inside for food, spending the rest pretending
to be a clan cat named Clawpaw to impress the other kittypets. Her father
practically LIVED in his food bowl. Since she was born to two kittypets,
she was also a kittypet, and their housefolk sometimes acted like they
weren't there, and when they did they were mad at them.
So when her mother ran away, she followed suite a few days after, while
her housefolk were looking for her. She survived a few days in a
makeshift den, and she got to witness her brothers kittng when she
found Rocket.
She caught witness of other cats coming through to the area, and she ran
as fast as she could, and she was never seen again...
...Until she was found in Frostclan territory, when they asked her what
her name was, in fear of rejection, she said "Moonpaw" (Paw was the only
suffix she knows, and she was 8 moons old.)
Later, she was made a warrior, and she watched an eagle pick up a kit,
she grappled on to the eagle, and attacked as if digging into some fresh
kill, and succeeded in killing the eagle, but not immediatley.
She let go and the eagle carred the kit higher, before plumetting into
Fireclan territory.
After that, it's To Be RolePlayed[/code]
oh come pon
[code]how[/code]
how do you remove code?

i dont know how you made it a code.

I copied the original form from the audition thingy that's stickied, then the code stayed when copypasted, even if I remove the BBCode, copy it to a notepad file, and paste it, the code follows.

just use a different form????

If you edit your post and click the button on the bottom line the most to the right, get rid of the "[ code]" and "[ /code]" things and it should work.

Also @Scratchpaw we actually already have a cat named Moonshine in the Clans, so Moonflash would be better.

Ok. Moonflash it is.

Hello?

@Scratchpaw please don't double-post

Needs more personality other than that I think it's fine

#bump @Scratchpaw The appearance need to be more detailed, perhaps describing size, fur length, etc.

#SecondBump, @Scratchpaw.

#ThirdBump, @Scratchpaw. If not completed within three days this audition will be moved to the burial grounds.