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Green-leaf (Jun-Jul-Aug)
Mid-day (2-4 pm)
Chapter: One

Weather & News:
The intense Green-leaf sun bears down on the Clans in this, their darkest hour.
An earthquake has shaken the forest, destroying the territories as the Clans know it and killing dozens of cats. Forced to band together, the cats journey in search of a new home.

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Leader: Robinstar (@Quake)
Deputies: Scorchthicket (@Feather)
Medicine cat: Tulipsnow (@Willowstorm)

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Leader: Finchstar (@Willowstorm)
Deputies: Floralight (@Jack)
Medicine cat: Tanglepath (@Leopardspots)
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Leader: Sharkstar (@Willowstorm)
Deputies: Rosefeather (@Metzi)
Medicine cat: Autumnsky (@Feather)

Medicine apprentices: Sunshadow (@Jack), Peachpaw (@Daisyleap)

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Leader: Stagstar (@Leopardspots)
Deputies: Cricketsong (@Daisy)
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Leader: Poolstar (@Feather)
Deputies: Wolfwatcher (@Jack)
Medicine cat: Quartzshine (@Metzi)
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Safari, loner (fixed) Empty Safari, loner (fixed)

Wed Jul 19, 2017 5:38 am
NAME:Safari

Age: 24 moons

Gender: Female




Appearance: Safari's fur has a marble look with a little orange, brown, and mostly black black. On her face is it seems that orange was smudged on her forehead. Her eyes are a hazel color. She is quite a small cat, from her front legs to her ears is about 12 centimeters or about 5 inches. She is quite slender and her fur is at medium length. 




Personality: Safari was always the one to go up and face something head on for the sake of curiosity. She is also very exprecent of her own emotions, which it can annoy cats around her. Safari over the moons have developed a distrust of other cats motives. Because her life has changed a lot, she is quite adaptable to her own surroundings. Safari can be a stubborn trout when she thinks she is doing something right. At first when you meet her, she may seem very aggressive and paranoid, but once you get her trust, she will get less aggressive and she seems much more open to you. At those times, you will see she is very honest, which can become her downfall, she is also very skeptical with who she is with.  You will see that she is actually quite bossy sometimes. 




Skills: hunting 5; climbing 9; memory 8; swimming 3; fighting 4; stalking 6; running 7; stamina 4; Herb knowledge 2; strength 6; Knowledge 5







Family: Clementine; mother

Ranger; father




History: She started off at life being born in an abandoned car in a driveway of an old postal man. When she was 4 moons old, her mother,Clementine, was going to go hunt so she left Safari with a friend of her’s at another driveway across from Safari’s. Her friend had 5 other kittens of her own. When she wasn’t looking, Safari found an opening in a dark place. She squeezed herself through the hole and explored. Then hours passed and when Safari was done exploring, she tried to find her way back, but she got lost. She started to yowl at the top of her lungs in fear. Then she saw a light, and a huge hand came in and took her. Safari was taken in by a family of 5. 2 adults and three children. There were other cats there too, named Harold, Maude, and Isis. They didn’t like her that much. Safari became very close with one of the children quickly named Emily. When she became old enough to go outside, she tried to find her mom. When she found her, her mom jumped in joy. When Clementine and Safari were talking about life, Clementine asked if she liked being a kittypet. Safari said yes and this angered her mother. Clementine scolded at her and got very angry. Safari ran back home and stayed as a kittypet. Then the family had to move. They took all of the pets with them. The move was stressful for all of the living beings in this big family. While they were staying at a hotel, the other cats, Maude and Harold were gossiping. Maude was saying of before she was here with this family, another family abandoned her while they took the rest of the pets. Safari was eavesdropping on them and her heart speed up in fear. Maude and Harold noticed this and went up to her. Harold was saying of how he was not going to be the one left behind this time because he was here the longest. Maude agreed and said herself too. Isis was staying back and sleeping with one of the children. Safari asked of what harold meant this time. Harold said every time they moved, one cat got left behind, especially the newest member.Safari shoke in fear and planned on leaving before the humans would abandon her. During the evening, one of the humans came back to the hotel. They seemed very tired from unknown reasons. Safari took the advantage and ran out. She somewhat stayed behind to see what would happen. Then during that night, she heard the wailing of her friend Emily, calling her name. She heard this and ran as fast as she could go, realizing how stupid she was. Then she say the van she has been riding in for the move, driving away with Maude and Harold looking straight at her with eyes as cold as the water in winter. Safari’s world went down hill and she didn’t move from that area for days. Then she knew she needed to move on and travelled as far away as she could away from that awful hotel. Now she will be beginning a new life, for better or for worst. (I'm not sure if she might join the clans or not, but for now, not)








Last edited by kikitheangrykitty on Thu Jul 20, 2017 5:24 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : Added more of description in personality, skills, and appearance.)
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Safari, loner (fixed) Empty Re: Safari, loner (fixed)

Wed Jul 19, 2017 11:30 am
Hi there Kiki! This is an awesome audition, glad you joined the site!

The first thing is her appearance, typically here we add a lot more detail into it in order to get a sense of the cat as if it were real. Are her tortoiseshell patterns dappled or patches? Does she have any white? What's her body like, small, tall, strong, skinny? 

Personality we typically write out in sentences. If you're struggling, feel free to have a look at the other auditions to get an idea of what we mean by this. You can include things like your cat's favourite prey, whether they prefer to hunt or fight that sort of stuff.

The skills need to have all of the ones listed on the Auditions topic
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Safari, loner (fixed) Empty Re: Safari, loner (fixed)

Wed Jul 19, 2017 11:40 am
Okay, thank you. I will improve on it.
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Safari, loner (fixed) Empty Re: Safari, loner (fixed)

Wed Jul 19, 2017 9:36 pm
I edited it
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Thu Jul 20, 2017 6:22 pm
She seems good! audition accepted

just a note, we don't double post just to avoid spamming Smile
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