Echo and Sparrow

Name: Echo of Fallen Stars
Age/gender: 28 moon old she-cat
Clan/Tribe: Tribe of Rocky Cliffs
Rank: Cave Guard
Appearance: Silver she-cat with white paws and green eyes. On strong, long legs there are faded grey stripes.
Personality: Echo is highly intelligent, clever, and will speak her mind. She's very brave and will throw herself at danger to protect her tribe although it sometimes leads to recklessness. If she believes she's fighting for what's right Echo will not give up. She can be very narrow minded and stubborn when she believes she's fighting for what's right. Echo will also become very secretive, shy, and guarded when it comes to her emotions.
Skills: Fighting(One of the best), climbing(Ok), swimming(Terrible), running(Pretty good), and tracking(Ok)
Family/History: She was born to a tribe cat and a loner. She lived with her mother until she died by a tree which crushed her. Later father found her and her littermates and brought them back to the tribe where they were outcast for the longest while. Echo proven herself after fighting off a fox with the help of one of her littermates. She was trusted and still is today.
Mother: Unknown
Father: Howl that Rides Breeze
Siblings: ~Open~
Mate: ~Open
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Name: Sparrow that Flies at Dawn
Age/gender: 32 moon old tom
Clan/Tribe: Tribe of White Waters
Rank: Prey Hunter
Appearance: Dark brown tabby tom with a blue eye and a paler underbelly, chest, paw, tail tip, and underbelly.
Personality: Sparrow is seen as rude, lonely, and untrusting on the outside. He tends to spend time alone and isn't really all that social. He has few friends and enemies. Because most don't want to talk to him he is blamed for a lot of things that weren't even his fault. Once you get to know him though he's very kind, caring, loyal, and loving. He's very protective of his friends and family and he will fight for them. Although he's like this he also has a dark side. He's very sad a lot and will keep his feelings bottled up.
Skills: Hunting(Pretty good), swimming(Good), tracking(Great), jumping(Excellent), and running(Ok)
Family/History: When he born his mother died due to loss of blood leaving his father alone. Sparrow's father, Bracken, became crazy after the loss of his mate. Bracken blamed Sparrow and his littermates for the loss of Wing so he plotted his revenge. Bracken almost succeeded a few times, one of them taking Sparrow's eye, but the other times he failed. He was going to kill them again but didn't after he died from a rabid fox bite. Sparrow is still worried that his father's spirit is still out there trying to plot his revenge.
Mother: Wing of Flying Dove
Father: Bracken that Waves in Breeze
Siblings: ~Open~
Mate: ~Open~

How's this?

Accepted, i suppose