Stormshadow of Frostclan

Stormshadow
28 moon female
Frostclan warrior
Cloudy gray cat with long whiskers and long tail with blue eyes.
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Personality: Stormshadow is a friendly and fierce cat who is not afraid of almost anything. Stormshadow is a loyal cat who would give up her life for her clan. Stormshadow has some anger issues though, whenever cats keep telling her what to do, she explodes( when I say that I mean like she gets REALLY mad). Stormshadow is an hard cat to make friends with even when she's mad. Stormshadow doesn't like listening to orders but she TRIES to keep that a secret.

Skillz
Hunting4
Fighting 7
Climbing 2
Strength 5
Stamina7
Agility 3
Memory 5
Logic4

History
Stormshadow had two parents( well duh) 3 brothers and sisters and 2 half brothers. Stormshadow's father had kits with two she cats the first one died at birth and later her kits died as apprentices. So then Stormshadow's father mates with Stormshadow's mom who's kits died except for Stormshadow. Stormshadow never knew about her siblings and her parents never said anything about them. When Stormshadow's mother died in a battle, she told Stormshadow about her siblings. Stormshadow wanted to prove to her mother, and her siblings that she could be a true warrior.When Stormshadow's father died in the elders den , Stormshadow felt completely lost without them but eventually got over it.

The history needs more than just her lineage and her personality needs to match up better

If she explodes when told what to do, how can she also keep her dislike of following order's a secret? If she has anger-management problems then how can she be easy to befriend?

Ok

Still needs more consistency, it's incredibly hard to make friends with things like that.

I understand