Graytail of Frostclan

Graytail
Graypaw
Graykit


Med. Cat
Tom
45 Moons
Frostclan


Mate: Littleowl
Crush: -
Kits: -

Personality: Graytail is a very kind and caring tom and will be very protective. Graytail isn't afraid to speak of what he believes, but still keeps his negative words to himself most of the time. He's quit the friendly, hardworking and cheerful tom and will always be there for help. Graytail is also very wise and intelligent, as well as strong.

Appearance:Graytail is a dark tom, mostly black but has gray tints in there as well. His tail, is obviously gray and his eyes are a bright blue (not like the pic, different blue!) He has silver whiskers and large paws, in fact he is quit a large cat in a good way, broad shoulders and a strong built body.

Skills:
Fighting4/10
Hunting3/10
Swimming6/10
Running8/10
Climbing4/10
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Memory5/10
Stamina8/10
Logic9/10
Agility2/10
Herbs Logic10/10

Family:
Mother-Leopordpounce-Alive-Elder-Open
Father-Patchclaw-Deceased-Elder-Closed
OlderSister-Copperpetal-Alive-Elder(only because of being half deaf)-Open
OlderBrother-Bumblefoot-Alive-Senior Warrior-Open
Brother-Stormbelly-Alive-Warrior-Open
YoungerSister-Tinykit-Deceased-Kit-Closed

Mate-Littleowl-Alive-Queen-Frostclan-Closed
Kits- Thunderkit(mine), Shadowkit(Willows), Windkit and Riverkit(Willows)

History:
Born to Leopardpounce and Patchclaw, beside his littermate, Stormkit and with his two older siblings, Copperpetal and Bumblefoot.
As a kit Graykit was having a normal kit life for any, playing around except he was always much more easier to take care since he was much less troublesome then the other kits in the nursery.
When Graykit became Graypaw, he had chosen to become a medicine cat apprentice and choose a different path then his brother, Stormkit, now named Stormpaw, wanted him to. When Graypaw was training, his first chance to deliver a kit with his mentor was his mother's. They expected more, but only one tiny kit came out, named Tinykit, but died shortly after. Graypaw was devastated and usually didn't like doing kit delivering anymore after that. A few moons later, older, he met a pretty she-cat named Littlepaw, a bit younger then him, who was from Waterclan. They soon became best friends, always hanging out at gatherings.
Once Graypaw was a medicine cat, Graytail and Littlepaw was a warrior, Littleowl, they started meeting even more, farther off away from the borders of clans in a secret broken down twoleg barn. They meeted so often, they fell in love and soon became mates in secret.  Graytail and Littleowl had four kits, named, Shadowkit, Riverkit, Windkit and Thunderkit. Littleowl took the kits since Graytail had his medicine cat duties. When Littleowl got back to Waterclan, she told them she found the kits abandoned and took them as her own. As the kits grow older, she plans to tell them who there father is, but for now it is kept a secret. Now back in Frostclan, Graytail  is having trouble thinking about Littleowl to often and unable to meet with her at gatherings or the secret barn since of the kits, so he starts searching for a apprentice to help out.

The end of the history looks kind of scrambled, but otherwise good

I can make his apprentice.

Okie dokie ^

So is this accepted or do you want me to change the history? Sorry about it being kind of confusing, I made it in a rush.

Could you maybe change it up? Like, it's hard to tell what happened when and all that.

Sure thing, I want him accepted soon so he can be in the gathering.

EDIT: Fixed.