Lilyshadow (REMAKE)

Lilyshadow      She-cat       Waterclan      Senior warrior      70 moons

Lilyshadow is a beautiful Light Grey she-cat with white paws and white tip to tail. She has a white belly and a 4 leaf clover shape on her chest.


Lilyshadow is a caring cat who loves to play. She is kind to herself and others and says kind stuff to others when they need it. She is loyal to her clan and friends that she loves. She is a thoughtful and quiet warrior who will speak to others when they need it. She is a unique and presious warrior. She believes that no one is truly good or evil.




Skills:
fighting:5/10
hunting: 6/10
herb knowledge: 3/10
swimming: 7/10
climbing: 4/10
memory: 6/10
running: 10/10
stamina: 10/10
tracking: 4/10
sneak attacks: 2/10




Past Life:

Lilyshadow was born to Snowhare of Waterclan and Thunderstrike of WaterClan. She was originally named Brownkit but her name was changed when her mother and father found out she was as sweet as a lily. She lived most of her life hunting and doing patrols. She met Ivorystar at a gathering and she does not like her one bit. She is close to Aquatail of Waterclan, her being her best friend. She has never had a mate or kits. She knows that her friend is troubled and she is trying her hardest to find out what is troubling her.

More detailed history and skills need to be lower - only 2 are under 5.

Is that better?

Still needs less 10s

Also, she would need to be higher then 1 at fighting

Hopefully that's better?

Since she's near elder age, her memory probably wouldn't be a solid 10/10, and probably not swimming either. You could change those.

I changed those. She's a adopted cat so I had no idea what her personality and that was... All I had was caring, thoughtful and a loyal warrior! Haha!

Aight,