Emerald, a rogue in Queen Blythe's group

Emerald
10 moons
Healer in Queen Blythe's group

Fox Dung just got real

Appearance: Emerald is a pretty light brown and white cat (mixed together) with emerald green eyes, giving her the name Emerald. She is small but skinny, which gives her a small fighting advantage. Emerald has a pink nose that is the color of a peach in the sunlight and her paws are white like fallen snow.

Personality: Emerald is a tender and loving cat. Her heart burns with love for her patients and other group members. Emerald used to be a kittypet, so she doesn't act like a rogue. For example, she doesn't attack when others invade, instead trying to talk it out. Other than that, Emerald does what she feels is right.


Skills:
Hunting:6
Fighting:6
Swimming:7 (her old twolegs had a pool)
Climbing:4
Speed:6 (after months of being chased by twolegs)
Strength:3
Stamina:7 
Memory:7
Herb Lore:7 (also comes from the herbs from her twoleg garden)



History: Emerald was born as a pampered kittypet. She had a wonderful life until her twolegs adopted a twoleg kit. That twoleg kit chased her around a lot and didn't really give her peace to herself. After a few moons, she ran away, sick of her twolegs, looking for somewhere else to be. She looked for other loving homes to be but the cats there either scared her off, the twolegs didn't want her, or no one responded to her cries. So she went off and became a loner. She tried to take her collar off with some old scrap of metal but ended up scratching herself and drawing blood, but she remembered how to treat it and finally got the rest of the collar off, scraping herself more, but applied the herbs to help it. She then set off the next day and found Queen Blythe's group where she later became leader.


Family:
Stormy-Mom-Alive
Red-Dad-Deceased-Killed by dog 
Stonepaw-Brother-Alive-Ran off to clans later on-For Adoption
Cloudpaw-Sister-Alive-Ran off to clans- For adoption


Extra info
Favorite herb-All of them!
Favorite Prey-Mouse
Favorite Season- Summer 
Favorite Saying: Fox-Dung just got real
Smells like: Herbs and Mint

A bit of history:
Emerald's eyes widened. The twoleg kit was right behind her. She desperately tried to get out the car door but the twoleg was too quick. It grabbed her with a hairless paw and pat her head. Emerald hissed. She was hungry! And she was just trying to get some food! The twoleg finally put her down and that's when she made the decision. She was leaving. She ate as much food and drank as much water as she could hold and went outside. That's when she leaped over the fence and was free.

How would being small and skinny give her a fighting advantage? Seems more of a disadvantage to me.

Finished!


Also it's like she's skinny so she can easily slide under a cat

If she's good at fighting why is the fighting skill below average?

Okay finished

Aquatail626 wrote:Emerald
10 moons
Healer in Queen Blythe's group

Fox Dung just got real

Appearance: Emerald is a pretty light brown and white cat (mixed together) with emerald green eyes, earning her the name Emerald. She is small but skinny, which gives her a small fighting advantage. Emerald has a pink nose that is the color of a peach in the sunlight and her paws are white like fallen snow.

(Closest I could find sorry admins)
Personality: Emerald is a tender and loving cat. Her heart burns with love for her patients and other group members. Emerald used to be a kittypet, so she doesn't act like a rogue. For example, she doesn't attack when other rogues invade, instead trying to talk it out. Other than that, Emerald does what ??? 


Skills:
Hunting:6
Fighting:6
Swimming:7(her old twolegs had a pool)
Climbing:4
Speed:6 (after months of being chased by twolegs)
Strength:3
Stamina:7 
Memory:7
Herb Lore:7(Also comes from the herbs from her twoleg garden)



History: Emerald was born as a pampered kittypet. She had a wonderful life until her twolegs adopted a twoleg kit. That twoleg kit chased her around a lot and didn't really give her peace to herself. After a few moons, she ran out, sick of her twolegs, looking for somewhere else to be. She looked for other loving homes to be but cats either scared her off, the twolegs didn't want her, or no one responded to her cries. So, she went off and became a loner. She tried to take her collar off with some old scrap of metal but ended up scratching herself and drawing blood, but she remembered how to treat it. She finally got the rest of the collar off, scraping herself again, bur applied the herbs to help it. She then set off the next day and found Queen Blythe's group where she later became leader.


Family:
Stormy-Mom-Alive
Red-Dad-Deceased-Killed by dog 
Stonepaw-Brother-Alive-Ran off to clans later on-For Adoption
Cloudpaw-Sister-Alive-Ran off to clans- For adoption


Extra info
Favorite herb-All of them!
Favorite Prey-Mouse
Favorite Season- Summer 
Favorite Saying: Fox-Dung just got real
Smells like: Herbs and Mint

A bit of history:
Emerald's eyes widened. The twoleg kit was right behind her. She desperately tried to get out the car door but the twoleg was too quick. It grabbed her with a hairless paw and pat her head. Emerald hissed. She was hungry! And she was just trying to get some food! The twoleg finally put her down and that's when she made the decision. She was leaving. She ate as much food and drank as much water as she could and went outside. That's when she leaped over the fence and was free.

Corrections are in blue, missing stuff is in green.

Finished

the few typos don't really matter :3