Tigertwig

Tigertwig 
He is forty moons
Tom-cat
Rogue in Deadpool's group
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Tigertwig is a tabby brown cat with dark brown striped and amber eyes. Tigertwig has a bushy tail and a brown nose. Tigertwig used used to be skinny as an apprentice so his warrior name was named after his body.



Personality:
Tigertwig is a friendly cat. He is energetic and fun to be with. He can be to happy at the wrong times and that gets kinda annoying.  Tigertwig loves to rant a lot though and will gossip as much as possible. He likes to tell others about what happened during this patrol, how this person messed up during hunting, etc. Other than that, he is okay. He is a tiny bit arrogant but not very. Tigertwig is headstrong and believes in what he says


Skills:
Hunting:7
Fighting:5
Swimming:6(used to be WaterClan)
Climbing:4
Agility:4
Stamina:5
Memory:9
Herb Lore:1


History: Tigertwig was born a WaterClan cat and raised as one. He was strong and always got into trouble. He was later apprenticed too Greenheart who was a strict mentor and demanded a lot from Tigertwig. Tigertwig never found himself at home when he was in the clan. He felt most alive when out in the wild alone. So he left one day. He had been a loner for awhile until he got attacked by a badger. Tigertwig had jumped over a branch to defend himself and the badger ran into the breach hard so he named himself Tigertwig. He then found Deadpool's group and he is part of his group today

Tigertwig??? I'm pretty sure that's not even an acceptable name

He's not a Clan cat though.

Unless he changed it after he left the Clan, twig isn't a suffix we use lol

"He had been a loner for awhile until he got attacked by a badger. Tigertwig used a small twig to defend himself so he named himself Tigertwig."

Can't really defend yourself from a badger with a twig tbh

Or maybe he jumped over a fallen branch the the fox ran into?

Yeah I don't mind but his name is okay because it's not a warrior one

Finished!

He could use a little more personality. And I'm not saying to add more sentences, just add more detail to his current traits.

This better Daisy?

I didn't read the personality before, but I think it looks alright.