Maple and Burr of Mochi 's group

Maple is a very graceful, lean and fluffy she-cat. She takes after her mother quite a-lot, a ginger and white she-cat with black patches. But instead she's ginger and black with milky white patches. Her fur is much thicker then her brother's, and her eyes are a vivid green against black, white and ginger. Maple's tail is rather short.


Maple tends to be rather over-dramatic and clingy. She has a loving heart but she just...is a bit clingy. She is incredibly over-protective of her kits and remaining brother. If she didn't despise the idea of infection she might've wanted to train as a healer but...she ended up nudging her younger half-brother to that path. Maple loves her group dearly but she isn't afraid to wander and make mistakes..


Ripple-Mother-Alive-Small ginger and white she-cat with black patches.-Taken by Twolegs.
Russel-Father-Deceased-Lean, fluffy brown tabby tom.-Attacked by a badger.
Ripples-Half-brother-Alive-Patchy ginger tom.-Healthy and well.
Shrew-Half-Brother-Deceased-Ginger tom with a tiny head.-Died of weakness.
Aud-son-Alive-Ginger tabby tom.-Healthy and well.
Burr-son-alive- Black and white patched tom.-healthy and well.
Toby-son-Decesed-Large, fluffy brown tabby tom.-Still-born.


Maple was born to Ripple-a vain and arrogant she-cat who desperately wanted a son instead. Her father Russel wasn't much of a talker and Maple never got him to talk- he never seemed to hear anything either. Maple thought he was a rock for quite awhile, with his brown pelt. Maple was a learner under her mom without that much happening, until her rock dad died from a badger attack. Maple was shocked when her mother moved on so easily, getting pregnant with a random rogue and then joining the group while ignoring her daughters existence. Despite this, Maple was very close to her brother Ripples. Maple met Bracken-A tom that remained her of her father in looks, and was incredibly polite to her. But Bracken wasn't that nice if a cat, he killed others and he only used Maple because he thought she was easy target. When Maple visited him once, she couldn't find him and again and again she couldn't find him. She gave up when she found out she was expecting kits. Her mother was taken away, making one of her kits-Toby still born.



Fighting ~7, Hunting ~ 4, Swimming ~ 6,Climbing ~ 4, Running ~ 8, Stamina ~ 6,  Memory ~ 4, Strength ~ 4, herb lore-5

I can't see the images sorry

Even without the picture, I'm going to say that Maple is accepted.

Should I move this?

Burr is still being made.

Is Burr finished yet?

Yes.

I'd like to see more personality for Burr.

Edited again

Burr is