Doespring of Fireclan FINISHED

Name: Doespring
Age: 26 moons
Gender: Female
Clan: Fireclan
Role: Warrior
Appearance: A speckled brown tabby with soft dark brown eyes. She has a lighter left hind paw and a nick in her right ear. She is thin and lithe with long and soft fur. She has a cream spot on her muzzle and a bright pink nose. Her claws are small but very sharp.
Personality: Doespring is a sweet cat, not wanting to get in any trouble. But, if she thinks that Redstar makes a bad decision, she will do what she believes is right. When Doespring is tired, she's very grouchy and sullen. She can jump to conclusions too fast and will stick with her ideas until the end.
Skills:
Speed - 5
Strength - 2
Sight - 8
Hunting - 9
Fighting - 4
Tracking - 7
Stamina - 4
Swimming - 0
Family:
Mother - Frostfeather (deceased)
Father - Quailpelt (deceased)
History: Doespring was a small and quiet kit. She was slightly curious at times, but lost interest after investigating for a while. Her father had gone out hunting when she was only 2 moons old and never returned. Frostfeather was devastated and always stayed by Doespring's side. When Doespring became an apprentice, Frostfeather caught a fatal case of greencough and died, leaving Doespring alone. She became a hard worker and stayed with what she believed. When the hostilities between clans arose, Doespring started to have horrible nightmares about battle and death. She keeps them to herself, but is always watching when she's alone from the terror of an invader.

Bumping is unnecessary and should only be done by staff, so next time just pm any mod, admin or forum veteran to take a look here. (:

The auditions looks pretty good, but a couple things are needed to change. First off, you should add some more to her appearance.

In her history, it doesn't make much sense for her to be curious, but still loose interest in things quickly. If a cat is curious, they will stay curious by asking questions and checking things out.

That's about it, other then those two things, it looks great. c:

Finished! Thanks for the tips, Sky!